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weeks after the attack on the Den. The enemy used a powerful weapon called PlanetKrak. do to some luck the weapons missed, but the payload split the planet a new one. inside the crack scouts found strange artifacts. These strange artifacts were for the most part broken. After several failed attempts one artifact was brought back into working order. After final preparations were made they tested what the artifact did. It was not pretty. once the device was activated time and space started to warp around it. The Den was thrown into a strange dimension. as it appears in the strange new world it ends up crashing into the side of a mountain. there was major loss of life when the Den smashed into the mountain side. those that survived manage to rebuild the Den. several scouting parties have reported native life being intelligent and some even approach the Den seeking shelter. From what could be understood of there language they fear some strange beast that lurks deep inside the planet, but there are those who seek to awaken this beast. Already several of the Beast's minions raid village after village, and even some have been seen aproaching the Den.



this is what i have so far. tell me what you think or what can be changed.

good idea. the mission may have something to do with that last bit in the skip.

I'm gonna be straight to the point the idea needs work, I feel like though you rushed it a tad without explaining too much. If you need me to, message me and we will take care of this more. Give it a deeper story thats easier to go along with.

Alright, I'll get on it when I get home from college.

What, what me or you are doing?

I made this in a hurry, check it out.

Three years after the enemy attack on the den after the destruction of the shield things seemed rather peaceful, the threat level was low, few minor attacks on the den had the military forces in a state of peace. It had seemed the enemy military had all but given up. But, suddenly they resurfaced, with what was thought of as their form of a hydrogen bomb. The enemy used a powerful weapon called PlanetKrak, but do to some dumb luck and poor positioning the den took the minor blast of the bomb with ease to the new shield, but the payload blew the planet open, sudden fissures and earth quakes from the massive bomb opened a hole deep inside the planet. inside the cracks scouts found strange artifacts, and even stranger feral beasts.. These strange artifacts were for the most part broken due to the massive explosion, but the ones working were used by the feral but intelligent creatures. They had a similarity to the dens plasma weapons, but a single hit vaporized what it touched in an instant. The scouts and assassins teamed up and ventured far into the civilization, and found a shrine holding an unbroken artifact that looked like a clockwork piece.

After retrieving the piece the scientists from the den tried rigging it up as a power source for the dens new shield, but what happened was unthought of. After final preparations were made they tested what the artifact did, and what it did shocked everyone, even the enemy. The device started making a loud whining noise, as if it were going to explode. Suddenly the Den was thrown into a strange dimension, a worm hole sucked in the massive structure and sent it through. As it appeared in the strange new world it ended up crashing into the side of a mountain, half buried and many of the citizens suffocated from lack of oxygen, famine, or were crushed from the impact. There was major loss of life when the Den smashed into the mountain side, the military and its people were dwindled away to a few. Those that survived managed to rebuild what was left of the Den, though through the amount of damage suffered it would take a few years to rebuild what was lost and dig out the side of the den that was enclosed to possibly reopen it to life after moving the skeletons out. The den set several scouting parties out to have reported that native life was being intelligent and some even approached the Den seeking shelter from the more violent forms of life inside the land.

From what could be understood of there language they fear some strange beast that lurks deep inside the planet, but there are those who seek to awaken this beast, and after several days of tweaking the military and its citizens received a device to somewhat translate the new language.. Already several of the Beast's minions raid village after village, and even some have been seen aproaching the Den with primitive but intimidating weapons. Some were seen with what could be thought of as guns, but the dens futuristic weapons took care of what makeshift forms of long range weaponry they had. What was more intimidating were the sheer amount of numbers they had over the den. Several military and citizens took up arms and staked out the nearby villages in order to receive help from their new alien allies. Now with what help they had the Den and its new and old people started to dig out what was lost in hope to find a better future to survive.

I was going to suggest making it... more developed and then you did this. I love having you in my guilds, you're such a great writer.

I also appreciate you helping and trying to revive this, this has an amazing story and plenty of opportunity. We can get this back up to top performance. And thank you, I had 15 minutes to do this and ill be up 9 hours more so ill donate more time to get that done.

New Race : Faunus

New abilities are simbiances and aura

Auras as explained in the series are a force field, each hunter has an aura that can cloak themselves, heal the hunter, or sense others with aura.

Semblances are the unique abilities a hunter posses, an aura ability is common through all hunters but semblances are unique abilities. Each hunter has a special type of semblance ability be it super strength or super speed these abilities enhance the hunters' combat allowing them to be better at combat. These abilities aren't an unlimited ability, they must always recharge and each use of ability can drain the hunter.

i pulled these examples from Dust and Shadows a RWBY guild im in.