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 Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2014 1:50 pm
 私は、どこで誰が何をしていています、私のですか？▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄
HᴇʀᴍᴇsRᴏsᴀʀɪᴏMᴇʀᴄʏ.
7ᴛᴇᴇɴ || Dᴇᴍᴏɴ || Jᴜɴɪᴏʀ
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ɢᴇɴᴅᴇʀ} Male
ʜᴏᴡ ʟᴏɴɢ ʜᴀᴠᴇ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀᴛᴛᴇɴᴅᴇᴅ ᴛʜɪs sᴄʜᴏᴏʟ?} New student
ᴘᴇʀsᴏɴᴀʟɪᴛʏ} Childish, Great Sense of Humor, Witty, Cheeky, Persistent, Light Hearted. Hermes is an excellent Strategist, and picks up on things quickly. He's not physically the strongest, but he's very swift on his feet, slick with his words, and clever with his actions.
sᴀᴄʀᴇᴅ ɢᴇᴀʀ} Like the scars left behind from a lightening strike, Hermes' back is covered with these markings. He has the ability to conduct, control, and produce lightening. He can throw it (much like Zeus) and hit his target without missing -- being that not every lightening strike is as strong as the other, fatality is not promised.. This is only an option when he is above the opponent from a distance. During a thunderstorm, he can force lightening to strike him, and control it without having to be above the opponent, still, distance is necessary. Using natural lightening bolts doesn't give Hermes complete control, and must follow nature's will to use them, wearing his out faster. He cannot be moved while lightening is in his control. The slightest shift from an outside force can send an electric shock through his heart. He is also limited to the amount of lightening bolts. Hermes tries his best to reuse three bolts every 12 hours. If he loses control of all three, his only way of surviving is his ability to be light on his feet.
Funny enough, Hermes isn't he truly aware that he can do any of this. He was raised under the impression that he and his parents were struck by lightening during a storm and he survived with the scarring along his spine. He believes that's why sometimes when he makes contact with people he occasionally gives them a little shock. Other than that, he's clueless to his abilities.
ʟɪᴋᴇs} Sweets and Desserts, Reading Novellas, Short Stories, and Epic Poems, Thunder Storms, Playing Sports like Futbol, Lacrosse, and American Football in the rain, Pulling childish pranks, and Making silly faces in front of Security Cameras.
ᴅɪsʟɪᴋᴇs} Sour/Bitter Foods, Interruptions during his naps, Bullies/Privileged People, Being forced inside buildings for too long, Boredom, and Being Scolded or Reprimanded.
ʜɪsᴛᴏʀʏ} Hermes has no clue of his blood. All the teen really knows is that for some reason the Foster system won't allow him to be adopted. They claimed him, "too special" but in his mind, if he was so special why didn't the fosters try to fight for him? He bounced from one foster home to another, all families adored him but never allowed to adopt him, and all departure ending tragically for him. Hermes keeps a smile on his face, and a good heart; even if it was just pretend for the time being. On his seventeenth birthday, the Foster System no longer allowed him to be held into homes. Hermes knew exactly what it meant - he was a year from being considered an adult and being sent to a homeless shelter. However, he soon finds out his Adoptive Counselor was sending him to this Academy, offering his money to support himself along the way, and still have a place to live protectively. They never did tell him they planned to take him here all along. They never told him what happens in a school like this.
ᴇxᴛʀᴀ} He does know of supernaturals existing, but he isn't aware that he is one of them. He walks around with a hoodie on with pockets full of candy. Hermes hates getting in trouble and takes lectures really bad (imagine scolding a puppy and it begins to whine) and back in the foster homes, he was never allowed to have markers in his hands because he had the bad habit of doodling on himself.
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Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2014 4:27 pm
I'm a little confused by your character... He knows about supernatural people, but he doesn't know he's one of them?? I'm sorry, but if he doesn't know what he is, then he probably wouldn't know that there are supernatural beings, though I'm not entirely sure... Also, could you add the weaknesses of his sacred gear?
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Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2014 4:36 pm
Mystiecat537 I'm a little confused by your character... He knows about supernatural people, but he doesn't know he's one of them?? I'm sorry, but if he doesn't know what he is, then he probably wouldn't know that there are supernatural beings, though I'm not entirely sure... Also, could you add the weaknesses of his sacred gear?
pretty much has been told his whole life that he's just a teen who has gone
through some unfortunate events. He hasn't taken noticed to anything that made
himself different from other humans other than the fact that he was fast, but he
thinks he's merely that - a fast person. He hasn't experienced anything with his
power if that makes sense? And I'm sorry about the Sacred Gear, I thought I had
added weaknesses to it, but I guess I never actually typed it? (my brain's poop)
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Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2014 4:42 pm
n o b x d y Mystiecat537 I'm a little confused by your character... He knows about supernatural people, but he doesn't know he's one of them?? I'm sorry, but if he doesn't know what he is, then he probably wouldn't know that there are supernatural beings, though I'm not entirely sure... Also, could you add the weaknesses of his sacred gear?
pretty much has been told his whole life that he's just a teen who has gone
through some unfortunate events. He hasn't taken noticed to anything that made
himself different from other humans other than the fact that he was fast, but he
thinks he's merely that - a fast person. He hasn't experienced anything with his
power if that makes sense? And I'm sorry about the Sacred Gear, I thought I had
added weaknesses to it, but I guess I never actually typed it? (my brain's poop)I'm a little... Well, I don't really like the thought of that little detail in his profile, but I guess it's fine.. And I did see a few limits in there, but no real weaknesses, such as consequences for using his gear too much or something like that so it's not like he can generate endless bolts of lightening to throw at people(although that would be fun). Aaaaand... My brain sometimes runs away, but I've never had it turn into poop... O.o
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Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2014 5:18 pm
Well, it looks a bit better now, but there is one thing.. Having the lightening he uses instantly hit it's target without ever missing? Yea... That's not really going to work since it would pretty much be instant death for most people. Weaknesses are supposed to be something that limits the power of a gear and, while having it be that moving could have something horrible happening to him and limiting the number of lightening bolts is fine, that doesn't actually weaken his gear all that much.
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Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2014 5:31 pm
Mystiecat537 Well, it looks a bit better now, but there is one thing.. Having the lightening he uses instantly hit it's target without ever missing? Yea... That's not really going to work since it would pretty much be instant death for most people. Weaknesses are supposed to be something that limits the power of a gear and, while having it be that moving could have something horrible happening to him and limiting the number of lightening bolts is fine, that doesn't actually weaken his gear all that much.
like instant death. I can change that too.
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Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2014 5:42 pm
n o b x d y I thought that since not every lightening strike is fatal to everyone, it didn't mean
like instant death. I can change that too. True, but a lot of people would probably think that it would be fatal and, if they don't want their character dying, they might just freak out at me and you and.. It would be a headache.. But you still shouldn't have it being an automatic hit even if it's not fatal.
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