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Kitomyx

Colorful Shapeshifter

PostPosted: Wed Oct 30, 2013 2:07 am


User ImageType of Custom: Full
Hound or Familiar: Hound, non-growing
Pose or Species: #1 with a fluffy tail (or #2 if you prefer)
Description: If possible, I was hoping for this pet to represent a (demon) Shetland Sheepdog, aka a 'Sheltie'.
Image Refs:
- Main Reference Sheet without wounds (colors being white, gray, and dark gray)
- Pet Cosplay from Wanderlust (but the markings around her face should be a lighter gray instead of dark gray)
- Pet Cosplay from Fuwa Fuwa
- Demonic edit ideas - don't have to follow these, just ideas
- More Demonic edit ideas (not by me) - don't have to follow these, just ideas
Edits: If she could have edits to make her appear more like a Sheltie and maybe some to make her more obvious as a 'demon'?
- Bent ears (like the adolescent stage lines)
- Full Body Fluff edit
- Longer chest and belly fur, wispy and trailing downward
- Big, poofy tail
- Longer and wispy fur on legs, trailing downward instead of fluffed upward
- Empty black eye sockets with no eyes (if not allowed, just a closed-eye edit would be fine)
- Regretful expression with blood tear stains leaking from empty eye sockets
- (Optional - willing to pay more for) Gruesome edits such as (but not limited to): cuts, sores, scabs, open wounds, patches of fur missing, ticks, and/or warts
- (Optional - willing to pay more for) A little bit of her spine showing
Additional Notes: I've been questing this hound since this shop was just an interest thread. Please let me know if you can't or won't do any of the edits and if any aspect of this character's design/concept isn't doable or won't fit into the shop. If they will and it's just a matter of gold, I'd be happy to pay whatever amount is necessary.

Type of Custom: Full
Hound or Familiar: Hound, non-growing
Pose: #1 (with an added tail?) or #2
Description: If possible, I was hoping for this pet to represent a (demon) Shetland Sheepdog, aka 'Sheltie'. If not possible, please let me know. ^_^; The markings of her face are like this. I'd appreciate if she could be colored Bi Blue, (gray with perhaps black and white, but no tan, please). I have no specific markings specified for her other than those on her face framing her eyes, so feel free to do whatever, whether it be gradient, spotted, mottled, or otherwise.

Edits: If she could have edits to make her appear more like a Sheltie - bent ears (like the adolescent stage lines), poofier tail, perhaps slightly poofier body fur - I would very much appreciate it.

If possible, could she have...no eyes...? Just...empty black sockets (similar to Ragetti from PotC when he took out his wooden eye)? But if that would be too creepy or not allowed or something, I can just say she has bad eyesight (maybe with a closed-eye edit). She's an old Hound, but as playful and energetic as her old bones will allow. If her eyes have blood tear stains leaking from them, that would be fantastic. As for an expression...perhaps regretful, if possible?

Also if possible, would it be okay to give her some gruesome edits? Feel free to go nuts - cuts, sores, scabs, open wounds, patches of fur missing, even ticks or warts or whatever - and if possible a little bit of her spine showing? and as mentioned above, hollow eye sockets)? If not, that's fine too, but to see what I mean, please refer to the reference images below. If you need specific details listed, let me know.

Image Refs:
- Basic Sheltie ref
- Another basic body ref - top (not by me)
- Demonic edit ideas - don't have to follow these, just ideas
- More Demonic edit ideas (not by me) - don't have to follow these, just ideas

Additional Notes: Reasons for the above edits!

Rue is an OC of mine - a dog demon of regret who can only see those who have done wrong. For this reason, she cannot see children (who are innocent) or objects (such as walls) and may run into them if she does not hear, smell, or feel them in time. However, she loves children and will play with them if they're around. Usually she takes the form of a sheltie dog with no eyes and will be friendly toward most people.

Her vision accuracy is determined by a person's guilt; if they regret the wrong they've done, she can see their silhouette saturated in the color of their soul's aura. If they do not regret the majority of the wrong they've done, however, their silhouette is dark and desaturated.

The darker and less colorful a person's silhouette is to her, the more she feels an urge to change into her demonic form and devour them. She does not relish this and cries tears of blood after, both out of her own regret and to expel the excess liquid from her body (much like how crocodiles shed tears after a meal to expel excess salt water). Obviously this aspect of her isn't going to be exactly the same when I integrate her into this shop and I'm willing to change whatever aspects of her I need to in order to do so.

Since she has two forms and I'm not sure if this shop will allow the edits of her demonic form, I'm perfectly fine with just her normal dog form (preferably without eyes, or at least closed, but not a must). I'm willing to pay however much I need to for either. I just thought considering the setting of the shop, her story wouldn't need to be altered too much to fit it, even if she isn't allowed to have the vision of people's regret or things like that.

Please let me know if you can't or won't do any of the edits and if any aspect of this character's design/concept isn't doable or won't fit into the shop. If they will and it's just a matter of gold, I'd be happy to pay whatever amount is necessary.


(Attempt to obtain Rue as a custom from Hot Jackalope, which failed because said colorist quit before Rue was completed. 2 bil was returned.)

PM from Hot Jackalope
Hey there. I think I'm nearly done with Rue, and am now going to offer you the WIP shot. I did what I could with the edits while also keeping the shop's style, so I hope you like em. If you're not happy with anything, please let me know and I'll do what I can to remedy it.

http://i.xomf.com/khlyy.png
My Response
Hello, there! First of all, thank you so much for accepting Rue as a custom. I've been questing for her since before the shop even opened. Second, your gruesome edits with the spine and ribs showing are fantastic. Thank you so much.

Unfortunately, I believe I failed in giving an adequate amount of proper/specific references. If you could change the following, I'd be happy to pay whatever extra I need to for your time and effort.

1. Expression - Would you mind changing her expression to be more like this, please? The blood tears are fine; it's just that I find her mouth and eyes seem more grumpy or annoyed than sad or regretful.

2. Ears - Er, the way the ears were bent just seemed a bit off to me, I'm afraid, because they were pointed in two different directions. Would it be alright to make it more like this, please?

3. Fur - Thank you for your efforts in making her more fluffy, but would it be possible to make her a little fluffier still, like this, or do you think that would go against the shop's style?

4. Markings - So sorry; the picture I gave you wasn't very clear and the gray was very blurred. There are actually two different grays in her fur - dark and medium. I kinda scribbled them in here, so feel free to make them blend more, but if you could keep it visible enough so that both colors of gray are distinguishable enough from each other, I would very much appreciate it.

These are simply thumbnails of the references linked above. Please click them to see their full size.
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Finally, how much do I owe you? I'm afraid I hadn't even known you had decided to take Rue on, so I didn't think to send the trade. If you would rather come up with an amount based on your work after she's finished, that's fine too. Just let me know. Thanks again so much!
PostPosted: Wed Oct 30, 2013 2:11 am



Kitomyx

Colorful Shapeshifter


Kitomyx

Colorful Shapeshifter

PostPosted: Wed Oct 30, 2013 2:12 am


Summoned by:
Vermithirod:
Human Form Fullbody
Human Form Concept

Vermithirod's story of how he met Rue:
TBA.
PostPosted: Thu Oct 31, 2013 11:45 am


Name: Vermithirod (ver-MITH-ih-rod)
Gender: Male
Age: In his 70's (You try asking him his exact age. >_>; )
Race: Whyst (at least that's what he's thought to be by some, if not a normal human. He doesn't make it obvious he knows about/can use magic and doesn't use it often.)
Physical Description: He's a slightly rotund, stocky, hale old man who uses a cane and has hair and a jagged beard of gray. He wears glasses (if there were any in that time?) and has a scar over his left eye. (Please ignore the slitted pupils in the reference pictures.) His eyes are gold in color.
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Personality: Vermithirod is a cantankerous curmudgeon. He is blunt and rude with almost everyone (though he tends to have a softer spot for women) and is very condescending when it comes to experience and age. The old man is very brutal with honesty to the point of being cruel and does not mince words. He almost seems to relish in others' disappointment and despair, for it seems to be his goal to get them down to his usual grumpy, cranky mood (perhaps because it's said misery loves company). He absolutely despises those with 'sunshine' personalities, finding them to be obnoxious and irritating.

Extremely cynical and negative, Vermithirod sticks with what is practical and logical, especially when it comes to daily tasks. Although he can use some magic as a whyst and actually has a great deal of knowledge about it, he will not use his magic unless he has a very good reason to. He believes in the fruits of hard labor, that something done right must be done with one's own too hands, and that magic is costly and thus should not be wasted.

The only exception to this way of thinking is if someone challenges him. He takes his dignity and pride very seriously and has something of a temper, even if he won't always outwardly show the extent of his anger. Generally, though, this elder man gives the impression that he doesn't give a damn about the world or what they think of him.

Contrary to popular belief, which follows the impression he intentionally gives others, Vermithirod isn't unfriendly for no reason. It's not even that he dislikes people or doesn't know how to get along with them, because both are untrue. Though it's true he's not fond of incompetence, one of the main reasons he is difficult to befriend is because he doesn't trust those who hide behind masks of shallow smiles, fake friendships, and politeness.

He is a whole-hearted believer in honesty and, following that, believes that others are more likely to be honest with someone they dislike rather than someone they would rather not risk disappointing or upsetting. Because he's completely honest with others and prefers them to be completely honest with him, he takes on an adverse role by being blunt and rude in his honesty. This, as expected, leaves him to lead a very lonely lifestyle.

While his own behavior nor others' toward him doesn't exactly make him feel good about himself, he feels this relationship with other people allows him unique insight into who they truly are at their core by revealing their true colors. After all, it's said that you can tell the most about a person by how they handle what vexes them the most.

In truth, Vermithirod really cares more about others than he lets on. This is more evident in his actions than his words, however, as he isn't one to freely give out compliments, praises, and kind words. On the rare occasions he does, one can be assured that they really earned it. In addition, if one wins Vermithirod's friendship and trust, which is by no means an easy or simple task, they will have gained a loyal and stubborn friend for life.

History: As old as he is, Vermithirod was alive when the Tolling was first heard coming from the Underground. He's been able to hear it since he was very small, but when he realized others didn't, he ignored it and pretended it didn't exist. When the meaning behind the Tolling became more clear and more people began to appear with Hell Hounds at their sides, Vermithirod ignored that, too. He wanted no part in it; he was content with living a normal life, which consisted of meeting a girl, marrying her, settling down, and having children. Vermithirod saved up his money through honest and hard work as a young man in order to buy land enough to work and profit off of so that he and his family could live comfortably. As part of the landed aristocracy, they lived well and wanted for nothing.

For many years he lived contentedly with his family, not bothering about old legends or superstitions. It wasn't that he didn't believe the tales of demons and Hounds of long ago - of course the growing number of Hounds being summoned seemed to confirm that much - but rather that he didn't care. Aside from the minimal magic he worked as a whyst, using less than he was actually capable of, he wanted nothing to do with the past, Hounds, or demons.

Whenever the Tolling sounded, he pretended not to hear anything just as he didn't make a big show of his abilities. He didn't like to waste his energy for magic when he could do things with his own too hands and believed in the fruits of hard labor. He taught his children not to be reliant on things like magic because they always came with a price. Despite his limited use, Vermithirod studied up a great deal on ancient magic, spending a lot of time reading all he could and testing the limits of his power, growing and learning more so that if he ever needed to use it, he could. Though he eventually discovered he had something of a knack for elemental magic associated with Fire, there was never really any pressing need to use it.

One fateful winter, a sickness broke out. Despite his best efforts, Vermithirod's wife and children perished from it, leaving him alone in the world in a home too big for just one man. All the magic in the world could not have saved them and he all but turned his back on his studies of it. Likewise, his relative wealth was of no consolation to him as he succumbed to bitterness.

Since the loss of his family, he has grown hard and cynical, going about his every day business and acting as though he doesn't need anyone else. Still he pretends to hear nothing, but unlike the majority of his senses which have only dulled over time, his ability to hear the Tolling has only grown stronger over the span of his life. In his old age, he attributes the gradually-increasing discomfort of its effects to his weakening body, denying that the pull of the Underground is growing ever stronger for him.

Hound's Name: Rue
Gender: Female
Personality: Playful, energetic, but keeps bumping into things because she can't see.

The Summoning: How your character and their hound came together.

Kitomyx

Colorful Shapeshifter

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