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PostPosted: Mon Oct 28, 2013 11:20 pm


Captain Application


Link to Profile: [♠] Miztien-Urie [♠]

How long have you been in the guild? Less then a week

How active are you in the guild? N/A unsure of how this guild system works. Reading over all sub-forums and what have you that i may or may not need.

Why do you want to hold the rank of Captain? Iv held a ranking seat in every Bleach guild iv even been in other then bleach elite. Most seats have been captain level but never below 3ed seat.

Why do you think you will do well as a Captain? Iv always been in 12th squad and have been able to give the role of 1st or 2nd seat a feel of genuine "Intelligence" to my OC. Iv played the role of insane mastermind to down right cruel mastermind. I feel the role squad 12 should be played not by a brute OC but rather one whom used skill and smarts to out whit his foe. All the while looking down on those "HE" Sees as beneath him.
Iv also had 2 years EXP running my own guild solo and can adapt very well and very fast to new guild leadership systems and how they work. If need be.











Bankai Application


Link to Profile:
[♠] Miztien-Urie [♠]

How long have you been in the guild? less then 1 week

How active are you in the guild?N/A unsure of how this guild system works. Reading over all sub-forums and what have you that i may or may not need.

Why do you want to Bankai? My current OC has been used in 3 otfer bleach guilds and only once before wasn't allowed Bankai. I can deal ether way honestly. Id like to have bankai for RP use mostly but i can easily work around it.

Why do you think you will a Bankai? Thats unknown to me at this point. Until i know where i stand compared to the other OC's within the RP my Bankai could prove OP or UP. Every guild has a different systum of power and i wont know how useful mien will be until the time comes.

Your Sample: Ill be usng the same PR for both applications if that's ok. I will also be using Bankai with in my example to give the guild an over all idea of my use and skill with this OC.
The Seireitei is attacked by arrancar, your squad is tasked with taking care of it so you must lead them.

Alarms sounded all through out the 13gotie courts. a voice rang in behind them "Unknown arrancar level hollows have broken..." The announcement was cut short. shortly following it was a massive earthquake that dropped the ceiling into the room itself. Dust and splintering wood beams now lay crises crossed around the room haphazardly. Three body's lay under the suport beams bleeding out if not already dead. The building shuck and began to tilt sideways as the building lose integrity and begin to collapse into its self.Air rushed out the room snuffing out any fire's as the build begin its quick decent to the ground below.
The building was only seconds for landing on top of a large group of fleeing Shinigami when "REDRIECT". A portal opened up and the building dropped into the building and out of reality. Among the pain stricken reapers stood a captain level Shinigami. "Out of my way wurns, If all your going to do is get in my way then MOVE" The man kicked a reaper left on the ground in shock across the field and towards a group of lesser reapers whom picked him up and ran from the rubble and the fight able to insue.

"You most have a lot of balls to think you can come here of all places and start a fight." The reaper showed little emotions behind his words but none the less his words came out like poison that bite at the air around ones hears and made them sting with fear. The man, Miztien-Urie, Stood with his Zanpakutō already in Shikai form. Two swords, one red the other blue. shown golden black under the sunlight. They hung from his hands loosely as if he wasn't truly even going to take this fight to the next level. He hand nogrip on them by mer view points. With in a flash though he was gone. BEHIND the target. An arrancar twice his size and matching him in spiritual presser with ease turned in shock. He'd moved so fast he didn't even leave a noticeable energy signature behind. This was no Flashstep. It was faster, Much faster. The movement seemed to have been almost instantaneous if not only slightly slower.
"You seem surprised, Dont be ... not yet any way. Iv not even given your your gift yet." The captain pointed his sword towards to hollow just as it turned to attack with a set of razor sharp claws that looked able to rip into next to anything. But before the claws could make contact Miztien-Urie was gone again. Back behind the hollow.
"Redrect" Again the portal opened, but this time the building that had only mear second ago gone in was now crashing back out, and with the same force it held as it had been following down. Only now it came outwards like a over sized cannon ball and right into the arrancar who was hapless to avoid it. The same wood beams from before not smashed over the creatures body and his turned face, braking bone's and splintering into its face with the force of a millions angry bee stingers.
The sound of it being slammed into stone and morter as it hollowed in pain was music to his hears. Seeing how it had destroyed part of his personal laboratory and permanent ended a very long term experiment he had been working on. Though the arrancar wasn't quite as pleased to see the captains ability to retaliate against him.
Smashing through the buildings remains and rushing towards to him, Miztien-Urie opened another portal and allowed the beast to run into the portal only to return out of another. As it ran out the second portal Miz turned his second sword towards hollows and unleashed the first of his attacks on it. "Infernal furry" Heat flowed from the red sword burning the hollows hole right side. Another scream of intense pain echoed from the court yard as the hollows strong harmed the captain in the chest knocking him into the floor but he was quickly kicked in the head and sent flying across the battle field.

As he was tumbling he found himself able to correct his chaotic travel, finding solid ground with his feet He faced the hollow.
"Enough IS Enough YOU worthless excuse for a hollow, allow me to show you just how far belowm my level you truly are. Resing your self to death b*****d because ITS OVER ! "(Z–>)90º – (E–N²W)90ºt = 1"
Attacking before the creature had a chance to even see his bankai. A last black and purple buster sword protruded from its face shattering its mask.

( i had to speed it up to my family needing to go out >__< other wise id have gone on a little longer )_  
PostPosted: Thu Oct 31, 2013 3:05 am


I understand your eagerness to start RPing, and though I do like what you have prepared for us, but I must decline due to the fact that you have not done what was asked by me for your profile. Make the changes requested and once they are made and reviewed then we, the VCs, will come back to your Captain/Bankai application for the position of Squad 12.

Judgement: Denied until the changes that were asked in the profile for the character is made and reviewed by a VC and approved by said VC or VCs.

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 31, 2013 12:29 pm


𝓛𝓾𝓼𝓽...𝒫𝓇𝒾𝒹𝓮...𝔇𝔬𝔪𝔦𝔫𝔞𝔫𝔠𝔢...

There are plenty of grammatical and spelling errors, but at least I know you are capable of the length, one of the big requirements. I like your writing style, it shows some understanding and good use of imagery and creative writing but I've seen members turned down for spelling, punctuation, and grammar errors before.

I think you can manage. Be grateful it is I who is reviewing your application for I call it, at least certainly for now, Approved.


Pending Review

Edit:

...I...Don't even know what to say....Not after Aero's verdict on your profile. Let me know if you'll be staying in the guild.
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