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I hope you don't mind me pming you. I just wanted to drop off a little bit of information and critting and I didn't know the best way to do it since it involves both of your chibi twins.

Both of their personalities are pretty fabulous and adorable, I really have nothing to comment on in that regard. They seem realistic and like they'd play off each other really well.

For their costumes the design on the 2nd fuku that you seem to like should actually work just fine if you want. Color wise you might have to make a few tweaks though. Generally Order senshi need to be more light then dark so you can easily tell them a part from their Chaos counterparts who are prodominately dark. So on Monochrome you might need to add more white or lighter grey to the mix then straight black. (for instance in the gloves or stockings). For Colors, her colors actually run pretty close to the Senshi of Rainbows. They are slightly different, so if you want to continue with it you should still be okay, I just wanted to point them out because they are pretty similiar, including an extremely similar sphere, so you may or may not have people pointing that out or trying to make a fuss.

Powers is really what drew me to pm you. Chibis are some of our hardest characters to come up with powers for because they are weaker then regular senshi and it's often hard to find something that is weak enough to work but isn't total lameness. Usually they end up with powers that are buffs (healing, extra speed, extra strength, etc). When they do get legit attacks they tend to be more obnoxious then actually painful.

For Colors, as it stands now she has two effects in her first attack (shield from damage and make dizzy), this is too much for a 1st stage chibi. She would need to have one or the other. When she gets to super stage she could either make the first effect stronger or add a second effect then (while still keeping it chibi appropriate). The same issue comes up with her eternal though, because usually when you're going to have two effects being able to shield yourself and hurt other people at the same time isn't allowed.

For Monochrome, other then the eternal attack, I'm not really sure how the attack relates to the sphere. (This is also kind of a problem for colors as well, because although colors are being used for the visual portion of the attack I'm not sure how shielding, dizziness, or offensive pain relate to colors as a sphere). Draining color from a person and making them feel sickly could work, but dulling a weapon I'm not sure how that relates (even though the power itself is solid).

One thing you might want to consider is swapping spheres to maybe.. Stimulation for Colors and Exhaustion or Depletion for Monochrome? Dizziness and the bright light effect could work and fit in with Stimulation and overstimilation. And I think Exhaustion would work with all the powers you've suggested for Monochrome.

If you love your spheres you of course don't have to change them, just try to think about how to make the sphere fit the power a little more in actual effect, not just the visual aspects of casting it.

Hope that helps!