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PostPosted: Sat Sep 28, 2013 9:55 pm


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Name: Ignacio Rosales

Nickname: Iggie, Rosales, Romeo, Romeo Rosales

Age: 54

Birthday: July 28th

Sign: Leo

Gemstone: Peridot

Blood Type: A+

Fav. Food: Paella, shishkebab, shrimp cocktails

Hated Food: Jello, fruit cups, Miracle Whip

School: Teaches Foreign Languages at Hillworth Grammar School (And loves every minute!)

Hobbies:

Wine In, Dine Out! Ignacio loves a good glass of wine and a large plate of food in front of him wherever he eats. If he doesn't have any wine at home, he goes out an gets some and brings it back home for dinner. He simply cannot have his dinner without a nice glass of wine. Also, he likes to restaurant hop, and has every take out menu in town at his disposal. Is he craving pizza? Does he want some Japanese take out? Whatever he wants, you can be certain that he will go out, get it, and have a glass of wine with it, too.


Teacher By Day, Den Father By Night Ignacio loves to teach and finds great joy when he makes a break through with a troubled boy in his class. However, when the day is done and all the students have finished learning for the day, you'll find that Ignacio often spends time with groups of his students after school hours. It all started out with a study group, to be honest, but Ignacio grew close to a small handful of the boys and decided to form an after school group where he would not only help the boys study, but talk to them and hang out with them. The boys seem to appreciate their "Den Father", especially the boys who don't have a father to go home to. As for Ignacio, he thoroughly enjoys being with "his" group, and invites new students to join all the time.


Surveying The World Ignacio's a well traveled man, which is reasonable considering the fact that he teaches Foreign Languages, and likes to discuss his travels with his friends and students. However, when he's home in Destiny City, he likes to go for hikes and take long walks just about anywhere. He also likes to have a companion or two to spend his walks with, and often invites boys from his study group on a hike into the woods to get them away from the school for a little while. A good dose of fresh air goes a long way!



Virtues:

Fatherly Ignacio's not just your everyday teacher. He appreciates every boy he meets and wants them to excel in all their classes, not just his. But when he finds a student, or a few considering his study group, that needs a little TLC in order to reach his true potential, he has no problem being his surrogate father and guardian until he can stand on his own. He treats each of his students as if they were his of flesh and blood, and doesn't take kindly to anyone who might try to hurt them. However, being 54, he won't tolerate total rebellion either. He's still your teacher, buddy!

Dependable Ignacio's a dependable man that, when given a task, you can be certain he can complete it easily and without help. You can also depend on him for advice and to help you find your lost cat. Just don't ask him to help you find your missing Spanish homework.

You can count on him to be there if you need help and you can count on him for a joke or two. You can also count on him to be disappointed when you haven't done your homework or when you've done something morally wrong. Either way, he'll still be happy to greet you in the hallway or out on a walk in the woods.

Good-Humored Ignacio likes to laugh and to make others around him laugh. Humor is a big part of his life and spreading the gift of laughter is something the makes him happy. The best thing about this is that he can take jokes against himself with a smile, but you'd better be prepared for a witty comeback, and it may not be in English.


Flaws:

Flirtatious Ignacio can't help but try to woo every pretty woman he meets. While he won't be shallow or demeaning, he will delve into his pocket and read quotes from Romeo and Juliet until you gag. It wouldn't be wrong to say that "Romeo Rosales" has tried to charm every woman in Destiny City.

Immature Some say that age is just a number and you can grow up at any age, well, that would be true in Ignacio's case. Ignacio cannot pass up a good prank or silly stunt, and happens to be the first to run away when the damage is done. If his study group happens to get nabbed with the blame, he makes up for it by buying pizzas and throwing a party, because often more times than not, he was the one who came up with the idea in the first place.

Boastful Did you hear about Ignacio's new desk? His new car decal? Maybe his new shoes? Of course you have, he's probably gone on and on about it for days by now! Augh! Whenever Ignacio gets a new shiny something, he always find some way to insert a good round of gloating into his conversations. He doesn't care if he's already told you, either, he'll just change languages! Has he told you in Spanish? Yes? Okay, has he told you in French? No? Then you're going to hear him talk on and on about his new shoes in French!

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Lavender in color, moderately sized, usually have an air of kindness or a spark of deviousness to them.

Hair: Short, spiked, and up swept, medium gray with a pale gray streak. Large bushy eyebrows and a small mustache.

Face: Heart shaped, wrinkled, but in good condition otherwise

Clothes: Scholarly, teacher-esque, lavender, yellow, tan, brown, white.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 28, 2013 10:06 pm


Knight Title: Verona Page

Challenge: "Estos placeres violentos tienen fines violentos!" ("These violent delights have violent ends" a quote from Romeo and Juliet, which was set in Verona, Italy)

Uniform:

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Keep everything the same except for the gloves, shoes, and mustache.

The shoes and gloves should be the same color as the vest and the mustache should be the same color as his hair.


Primary Color: #91819e
Secondary Color: White (Default)

Weapon

Page: A simple vial filled with lavender rose petals

Squire: A large bottle filled with lavender rose petals and rose oil.

Magic: The bottle, when opened, produces a scent which causes those within seven feet in diameter of him to become infatuated with someone or something close to them. He can power the effect as long as the bottle is open and outpouring scent- which is for 30 seconds. It floods their senses with an intense but short lived admiration or passion for an object of affection, though how they react to this sudden surge of feeling depends on the player and character and what they picked for their character's object of affection.



Knight: A reed oil diffuser with lavender rose petals Like this

Magic: It's the same power as Squire, except now the realm of effect is 10 feet and it lasts for 45 seconds.


Summons: White Lion

Name of Summons: Leonard
Type of power: Physical
Description of power: Slashes at foes with his claws like a boss!
Anything else: Despite having the intelligence and capabilities of...Well... A lion, Leonard has an air of regality to his appearance. He also seems to wander around with his head held high and his muzzle towards the sky.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 29, 2013 2:00 pm


I'm opening this up for critiques! :3
I also need help figuring out his powers! Please help!
PostPosted: Sun Sep 29, 2013 2:35 pm


Hello Pidgie~

I know you asked for magic help but I should point out that knights cannot have bladed weapons.

While there is a knight with a rapier and another with a saber, the rapier is capped and blunted and the saber is made of seashell (And also belongs to a 3rd stage knight, not a page.)

Your knight shouldn't be able to cut anyone with his weapon! Sorry. You mentioned decorations of roses and thorns, maybe you could elaborate on the construction and materials of the weapons further? Are they completely covered in vines or are the vines more at the hilt? How does the blade work? What's it's thickness, weight, and ability to cause damage? Swords and rapiers take a lot of maneuvering because, like I stated above, knights shouldn't be able to cut or maim anyone.

As for magic, I'm terrible at this, but keep in mind Venus' magic themes of beauty, passion, and love, and that knight magic should generate from a mana pool as a time limit rather than a usage of x times per battle. Do you want his magic to be defensive, offensive, of have a buff/debuff effect? Have you thought about what his summons will be when he hits 3rd stage?

Hope this helps :>

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 29, 2013 2:38 pm


Hey Pidge~

First off I'd like to say congrats on your civilian! I look forward to you playing him. >w<

I noticed you were asking for some help with the knight side.

I have a couple of questions for you first hon and maybe I can give you some better help afterwords.

Question one: For the page stage - I was wondering how his dagger was in it's sharpness? Typically Pages don't have really sharp weapons they can normally make some scratches but nothing lethal.

Question two: Venus has a few power themes including Beauty, passion, love; are any of these themes sticking out to you in particular? Also were you wanting defensive or offensive attacks? (IE: do you want to give a buff to someone, distract, heal, cause damage?)

Also I'm aware it's not on the current forms but knights also now get a summons - it's similar to a familiar have you given any thought to that as well? I believe you'll need that even though it doesn't exist until the reach Knight (stage 3)

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 29, 2013 3:12 pm


Carneli

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Alright, thank you both for helping me out with this! <3

This is where I had looked for all the information on Knights but I guess I forgot all about the information subforum. |3 Oops! I'll read through the topic that Neli sent me!

Okay, so no blades or sharp things. Got it!

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You mentioned decorations of roses and thorns, maybe you could elaborate on the construction and materials of the weapons further? Are they completely covered in vines or are the vines more at the hilt? How does the blade work? What's it's thickness, weight, and ability to cause damage? Swords and rapiers take a lot of maneuvering because, like I stated above, knights shouldn't be able to cut or maim anyone.


I might just switch rapier/sword/dagger/etc for something simpler and not sharp. |3 Is it possible to use natural things, like flowers? I was also thinking of Potpourri or something that smells good. However, I want to be something that represents love or romance. (Hence roses)

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As for magic, I'm terrible at this, but keep in mind Venus' magic themes of beauty, passion, and love, and that knight magic should generate from a mana pool as a time limit rather than a usage of x times per battle. Do you want his magic to be defensive, offensive, of have a buff/debuff effect? Have you thought about what his summons will be when he hits 3rd stage?


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Question two: Venus has a few power themes including Beauty, passion, love; are any of these themes sticking out to you in particular? Also were you wanting defensive or offensive attacks? (IE: do you want to give a buff to someone, distract, heal, cause damage?)

Also I'm aware it's not on the current forms but knights also now get a summons - it's similar to a familiar have you given any thought to that as well? I believe you'll need that even though it doesn't exist until the reach Knight (stage 3)



I'm leaning towards distracting as a power. Maybe something to do with flattery?

As for a summons, I need to read up on them before I decide.

Basically, I need to read up on everything. |3 I'm sleepy, too, so that isn't helping.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 29, 2013 3:14 pm


jsyk, the summons are based on the same theme as the knights. =3

Also yes it's possible to organics for weapons and I don't think something like Potpourri has been used yet so that'd be a nice change! =D

Though you may have to make sure potpourri is old enough? (I think it might be but you still may want to double check)
PostPosted: Sun Sep 29, 2013 7:01 pm


Carneli

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I would like to thank Neli for her help figuring out everything for his powered form! I'm officially done with his quest so I'm going to ask for stamping and staff crit, but if either of you have any final comments, I would love to hear them! <3

(And if either of you want to take a jab at Kristof, my Senshi, I would love you forever)

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 01, 2013 12:12 pm



I actually think this guy looks good to go!

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A GM will be by soon with a full stamp~
PostPosted: Tue Oct 01, 2013 5:07 pm


I have nothing constructive to say other than to fangirl about 1) older char and 2) the fact that he's so dapper as a Venus knight! SO COOL!

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 01, 2013 5:18 pm


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I actually think this guy looks good to go!

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A GM will be by soon with a full stamp~


8DDDD! -Steals the trial stamp-


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I have nothing constructive to say other than to fangirl about 1) older char and 2) the fact that he's so dapper as a Venus knight! SO COOL!


All I could see when I looked at him was "Make me a good teacher, but please make me a hopeless flirt." |3
PostPosted: Fri Oct 04, 2013 12:58 pm


Pidgeons Go Meow X3


This profile looks good to me! Enjoy playing him, and good luck winning his upgrade!

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