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 Posted: Sat Jul 20, 2013 8:31 pm
Screwed up the first time.....LOL xd
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Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2013 3:35 am
名前は KURYUU, KURISU です !
I Fx M A Nx H A Sx N Ox T E Ax I Nx H I M x- xH Ex I Sx I N C A P A B L Ex O Fx U N D E R S T A N D I N Gx T R U T Hx A N Dx B E A U T Y
茶 ・真 ・美
【 F U L L N A M E 】全名前 Hey- my name is Kurisu Sherudon Kuryuu 。
【 N I C K N A M E 】渾名 But people call me Kurisu 。
【 A L I A S or T I T L E 】偽名 Have you heard of "The Blue Flame"- Yeah, that's me. 。
【 G E N D E R 】性 I'm pretty sure I'm a Male 。
【 S E X U A L I T Y 】性別 Sorry, I'm definitely into girls who understand kindness. 。
【 H E I G H T 】縦 I'm about five feet, and eight inches, tall 。
【 W E I G H T 】体重 And I'm also About 140 pounds 。
【 E Y E S 】目 Are you in love yet? Hazel in hue 。
【 H A I R 】髪 What about now? Brown locks 。
【 A G E 】歳 Let's see- I just turned 15 this year in August 。
【 L I K E S 】好もの I can't live without Favorite thing here 。
【 D I S L I K E S 】嫌もの I definately can live without The five-tailed monster! 。
【 P R E C I O U S 】大事な人 Someone precious? My mother, and father. I miss them very much. ... I cherished them 。
【 V I L L A G E 】里 I'm from The Hidden Rock Village 。
【 O T H E R 】～等 Oh! I almost forgot! I plan to one day be the head of the Kuryuu Clan 。
始 め か ら 終 わ り ま で
f r o m b e g i n n i n g t o e n d
xxxAND SO... Long ago, before I was even enlisted in the academy, my home was attacked by the rampage of the five tailed beast, or the Gobi. It was this reckless beast that sent widespread chaos to the outskirts of Iwa. My parents were called into action that night; my mother being a medic, and myhis father being a head figure of the clan. The brightest memory I have of them was a family picnic where my father told me that he would allow me to train with him at the clan house. I was so excited; he said that I was his bright light, and that he expected me to become head of our clan. My mother felt the same way; she said I had enough common sense to carry my dreams into the night sky. However, the next morning after the incident I woke up to find myself alone; my parents did not make it through the night. I never really figured out the extent of their deaths, but the clan elders say that they died as heroes of Iwa. After the destruction of my family, the Kuryuu clan elder suggested that I moved inside the city walls for my own protection. From their I was taught the disciplines of our clan, and the harsh realities of this world. A few days had passed before I caught word of the Gobi finding a Jinchuriki... I struggle every day to maintain my innocence, and hide my pure hatred for this man. 。
悔 い 改 め る
t u r n i n g o v e r a n e w l e a f
xxxIF ONLY... Kurisu's parents had survived it wouldn't have left a void in his life. Being left to train alone, made him focused, determined, and even a little vengeful. As he grew he took his bloodline training very seriously, wanting to fulfill the expectation that his parents might have had for him. 。
新 章
a n e w c h a p t e r
xxxBUT NOW... All that is in the past. I'm Kurisu Kuryuu, and I'm out to prove that I can still be a great shinobi; with hard work, and solid focus. I don't care that people might be bigger, and stronger, than me now because that is what drives me to be the best in my clan, the best in my village, and the best I can be. Now that I have graduated from the academy, and become an official genin of Iwa, I can begin to push for a goal my parents could be proud of. 。
 【 Shinobi Rank 】 Genin 。
【 Clan 】Kuryuu Clan 。
【 Bijuu 】NONE 。
【 Shinobi Profession 】 Bloodline 。
Hero
- Advantage : Workout
- Disadvantage : Payback
【 Shinobi Speciality】 Speed 。
【 Chakra Pool 】 135 (Kuryuu Clan) 。
【 Equipment 】
x6 Kunai
x10 Shuriken
x4 Tags
x2 Scrolls
x1 Roll of Fish-line Wire
【 Strengths 】Close Combat, Bloodline 。
【 Weaknesses 】Long Range, Genjutsu 。
Base SP ► 30
Ninjutsu | 5
Strength | 10
Bloodline | 10+5
Speed | 10
Taijutsu | 10
Total SP ► 50
Total MP ► ( Default Number of Mission Points for your Rank Here)
Mission Record
(Record your completed missions here!)
E-Rank |
D-Rank |
C-Rank |
B-Rank |
A-Rank |
S-Rank |
Storyline |
Special |
KURYUU CLAN JUTSU
xxxxx- • Chakra Molding: Fists of Power C-Rank
xxxxx- • Chakra Molding: Chakra Feet - C-Rank
xxxxx- • Chakra Molding: Chakra Dissection Blade C-Rank
xxxxx- • Body of Power :: Body of Flames - C-Rank
xxxxx- • Chakra Manipulation :: Barrier - C-Rank
xxxxx- • Chakra Molding: Mallet - C-Rank
FUUTON-WIND STYLE
xxxxx- N/A
GOUKEN - STRONG FIST STYLE
xxxxx- E Rank: Gouken no Kamae (Iron fist stance)
xxxxx- D Rank: Dainamikku-Entori (Dynamic Entry)
xxxxx- D Rank: Konoha Reppu (Leaf Gale)
xxxxx- D Rank: Douyou Kobushi (Shaking Fist)
xxxxx- D Rank: Konoha Senpu (Konoha Hurricane)
OTHER JUTSU
xxxxx- N/A
ACADEMY JUTSU
xxxxx- E Rank - Bunshin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
xxxxx- E Rank - Passive: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
xxxxx- E Rank - Passive: Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
xxxxx- E Rank - Kawarimi no Jutsu [Body Replacement Technique]
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「 Anything is possible, as long as you're willing to make it happen. 」
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Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2013 3:37 am
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Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2013 3:52 am
Bio is too short (5 sentences I believe). Not looking for a novella however it should be a little longer than that. You are currently not using any of your 30 JP are you aware of that?
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Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2013 1:37 pm
II Blow Meh II Bio is too short (5 sentences I believe). Not looking for a novella however it should be a little longer than that. You are currently not using any of your 30 JP are you aware of that? I wasnt sure how the the JP worked, but its all better now. Also is each part of the bio suppose to be 5 sentences, or 5 sentences in general?
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Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2013 2:37 pm
The Courageous Wolf II Blow Meh II Bio is too short (5 sentences I believe). Not looking for a novella however it should be a little longer than that. You are currently not using any of your 30 JP are you aware of that? I wasnt sure how the the JP worked, but its all better now. Also is each part of the bio suppose to be 5 sentences, or 5 sentences in general? I think its supposed to be 5 sentences in all of them. Mostly because they want the personallity explained a bit. Like giving more detail in why and ways hes showed it.
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Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2013 4:42 pm
The Courageous Wolf II Blow Meh II Bio is too short (5 sentences I believe). Not looking for a novella however it should be a little longer than that. You are currently not using any of your 30 JP are you aware of that? I wasnt sure how the the JP worked, but its all better now. Also is each part of the bio suppose to be 5 sentences, or 5 sentences in general? No, I was simply stating the length of your bio (it's five sentences). It needs to be a bit longer than it is. About a full paragraph.
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Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2013 9:53 pm
I hope this is a bit more to your liking sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2013 10:07 pm
The Courageous Wolf I hope this is a bit more to your liking sweatdrop Much better ^_^. You're underlining too much though lol. Only underline key personalty traits.
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Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2013 10:34 pm
II Blow Meh II The Courageous Wolf I hope this is a bit more to your liking sweatdrop Much better ^_^. You're underlining too much though lol. Only underline key personalty traits. Alright I think I got it now. Sorry, but im just really anxious to get settled in lol.
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Posted: Fri Jul 26, 2013 1:22 am
The Courageous Wolf II Blow Meh II The Courageous Wolf I hope this is a bit more to your liking sweatdrop Much better ^_^. You're underlining too much though lol. Only underline key personalty traits. Alright I think I got it now. Sorry, but im just really anxious to get settled in lol. You're using 34/30 JP You also need to apply for your bloodline
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Posted: Fri Jul 26, 2013 2:56 am
II Blow Meh II The Courageous Wolf II Blow Meh II The Courageous Wolf I hope this is a bit more to your liking sweatdrop Much better ^_^. You're underlining too much though lol. Only underline key personalty traits. Alright I think I got it now. Sorry, but im just really anxious to get settled in lol. You're using 34/30 JP You also need to apply for your bloodline The Kuryuu- Chalkra Manipulation Clan said that you auto learn 3 free nonton jutsu's so that s where the extra 4 points came from. -Also Bloodline app has been filled out, and ready for review 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Jul 27, 2013 9:18 pm
II Blow Meh II The Courageous Wolf II Blow Meh II The Courageous Wolf I hope this is a bit more to your liking sweatdrop Much better ^_^. You're underlining too much though lol. Only underline key personalty traits. Alright I think I got it now. Sorry, but im just really anxious to get settled in lol. You're using 34/30 JP You also need to apply for your bloodline Alright boss man blowey, bloodlines been confirmed. Also the Kuryuu clan says I start with 3 extra nonton jutsus so thats where the extra points are coming from. Other than that I think its ready.
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Posted: Sat Jul 27, 2013 10:05 pm
The Courageous Wolf II Blow Meh II The Courageous Wolf II Blow Meh II The Courageous Wolf I hope this is a bit more to your liking sweatdrop Much better ^_^. You're underlining too much though lol. Only underline key personalty traits. Alright I think I got it now. Sorry, but im just really anxious to get settled in lol. You're using 34/30 JP You also need to apply for your bloodline Alright boss man blowey, bloodlines been confirmed. Also the Kuryuu clan says I start with 3 extra nonton jutsus so thats where the extra points are coming from. Other than that I think its ready. The techniques still 'eat away' at your JP.
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Posted: Sun Jul 28, 2013 1:52 pm
II Blow Meh II The Courageous Wolf II Blow Meh II The Courageous Wolf II Blow Meh II Much better ^_^. You're underlining too much though lol. Only underline key personalty traits. Alright I think I got it now. Sorry, but im just really anxious to get settled in lol. You're using 34/30 JP You also need to apply for your bloodline Alright boss man blowey, bloodlines been confirmed. Also the Kuryuu clan says I start with 3 extra nonton jutsus so thats where the extra points are coming from. Other than that I think its ready. The techniques still 'eat away' at your JP. Not exactly sure what makes them free then.....but oh well. All fixed
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