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Posted: Thu Jul 11, 2013 1:02 pm

I'm wearing what is probably going to be my next Arena submission for that series I've been doing (it's all here, in case you don't have any idea what I'm taking about ^^). So far, all the entries haven been "girls", and I'd like to add a male character.
So - I'm still using the female base, as I'm too cheap to buy the potion... Would you believe me if I entered this as a male character?
Any other improvements you can think of?

Posted: Thu Jul 11, 2013 1:48 pm

It's decent so far. Then again it's just me.

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Posted: Thu Jul 11, 2013 1:52 pm

Sifen Yamishi

It's decent so far. Then again it's just me.

So you'd believe it if I said this was a male character?

(Another option would be to just avoid pronouns, and use a gender neutral name...)

Posted: Thu Jul 11, 2013 1:58 pm

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So you'd believe it if I said this was a male character?

(Another option would be to just avoid pronouns, and use a gender neutral name...)

I'd do the latter, just in case.

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Posted: Thu Jul 11, 2013 1:59 pm

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So you'd believe it if I said this was a male character?

(Another option would be to just avoid pronouns, and use a gender neutral name...)

I'd do the latter, just in case.

I think I will - makes it easier, and I save gold xd . Thank you for the feedback!

Posted: Fri Jul 12, 2013 3:33 am

It doesn't strike me as feminine so I feel it's successful. But gender neutral pronouns could be optimal.

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Posted: Sun Jul 14, 2013 7:02 am

Thank you all for the feedback - I went with a genderneutral name (at least the website it's from says it is ^^), and avoided pronouns.

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