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 Posted: Sun Jun 16, 2013 2:39 pm
名前は IKAZU, RAIKEN です !
I Fx M A Nx H A Sx N Ox T E Ax I Nx H I M x- xH Ex I Sx I N C A P A B L Ex O Fx U N D E R S T A N D I N Gx T R U T Hx A N Dx B E A U T Y
茶 ・真 ・美 
【 F U L L N A M E 】全名前 Hey- my name is Ikazu Raiken 。
【 N I C K N A M E 】渾名 But people call me Spike head 。
【 A L I A S or T I T L E 】偽名 Have you heard of ""The Number One Knucklehead" "- Yeah, that's me. 。
【 G E N D E R 】性 I'm pretty sure I'm a Male 。
【 S E X U A L I T Y 】性別 Sorry, I'm Hetero 。
【 H E I G H T 】縦 I'm about How tall is your character? 6'0" tall 。
【 W E I G H T 】体重 And I'm also 138 pounds 。
【 E Y E S 】目 Are you in love yet? blue in hue 。
【 H A I R 】髪 What about now? Yellow 。
【 A G E 】歳 Let's see- I just turned 15 this year in March 21st 。
【 L I K E S 】好もの I can't live without
。Electrocuting things
。Burning things
。Destruction
。Anything violent
【 D I S L I K E S 】嫌もの I definitely can live without
。Boredom
。Water, cause he can't swim.
【 P R E C I O U S 】大事な人 Someone precious? Nah, not yet.
【 V I L L A G E 】里 I'm from Kumogakure 。
【 O T H E R 】～等 Oh! I almost forgot! Oh wait, nevermind 。。。。。
始 め か ら 終 わ り ま で
f r o m b e g i n n i n g t o e n d
xxxAND SO...
An infant was born. The mother and father were proud of him. Though, an tragic event happened. It lead to extinction of his parents. A great bolt of thunder lingered through the heavens with unmatched might. There stood an clan that were bestowed with the power of lightning. In addition, the boy was an clansmen. His name was Ikazu Raiken. Throughout his entire life, he lived alone. The boy thought he never had parents that cared for him and loved him. Though, that didn't stop him from an certain dream that kept him in the right path. He wanted be the Raikage of the Hidden Cloud Village. Ikazu strives to be an shinobi and follow his ninja way. He wanted to something much more admirable. Life was measurable. It was time to break the charts. The boy was an prodigy. He favored non-elemental and physical jutsu, but most important Raiton, in which was an idol technique adopted from his blood. He spent his time at the academy to have a fresh start. He was carefree and reckless in nature, though he was an fiercely loyal and protective friend. It would be observed to when he gave an beat down to one of the bullies that targeted his peers and usually negated authority. He was usually lacked in his work when it came to studying, in which marked his utter laziness. Raiken is rather a loud mouth, in which always got him into some trouble along the way. He proceeds to act directly without giving thoughts, showing a lack of control over some of his abilities. Even with an initial attitude, he shows care and love for close ones and that he would sacrifice himself to save others. Ikazu exceeded the properties of an academy student and thrived to an much more fitting level. He graduated from the academy with his graduating class. Ikazu became an Genin. This achievement changed him drastically. Raiken always wondered what happened to his parents. A mystery that will probably never be revealed, hm? It wasn't time to rely on the past endeavors. He was sure that they would be proud of what he has done so far. A path to his dream had opened. He should look forward to further achieve his dream. Though, that loneliness in his heart still haunted him throughout his childhood. A miracle was in progress. As Ikazu grew up, he began to befriend many people as he progressed. He slowly came out of that endless loneliness and finally stood tall. There was no time to let himself down. His time in the Ninja World needed to be remembered. He promised that he will carry on the legacy bequeathed to him. From then on, he will represent the Raiken Clan and protect all that he holds dear.
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悔 い 改 め る
t u r n i n g o v e r a n e w l e a f
xxx。To Become A True Hero And Be Remembered ...
新 章
a n e w c h a p t e r
xxx
He had finally graduated from the academy. Then, obtained head protector and embarked on missions. He sparred with Shinto Uchiha. There an Chuunin Exams soon. He advanced to train vigorously for a matter of three months for the Chunnin Exams. The previous Raikage had died sadly during the timeskip. After the Chunnin Exams, there was new Raikage nominated. Her name was Takiko Yuu. Ikazu tends to call her "Rai-Yuu-Sama" instead acknowledging her by the usual honorifics. They were to report in the Training Grounds. Ikazu proceeded. There he was accompanied by other genin. He came see some familiar faces, some new. He was not that happy about it either. Training was his main focus. His focus was unintended. Yuu-sama had announced an sparring match to later occur. Raiken was interested. Now he could at least knock some heads around. His lack of control almost lead to the infliction of his fellow teammate. Of course, he didn't listen. Also gotten hurt from the jounin that prevented the accident along with Hyuuga. Yuu-sama announced an team vs team mission. It was to retrieve a honey badger and return it to the owner. Raiken had screwed up big time. His reckless antics had ruined the mission and put many people in danger. Next, they were invited to the Yakiniku BBQ for an feast. Raiken gouged the food to comical levels. The meal was good. His fellow comrade, Midoriko, had reminded him of his actions during the mission. Ikazu was suddenly saddened. If he only would of been much more careful, the mission would of probably go forth. What an bummer. All that food seemed to taste bad just because of his failure. Guess it was time to make a fresh start, hm? It was time learn from his mistakes and perform much better next time. All in all, the band of ninja enjoyed their meal. Raiken sure did. It seems that Midoriko will be apart of their team. Alphonse was deducted of his position. Hotaru-sensei reminded them to report to the Training Grounds yet again after his lecture about their actions in the previous mission. What will it be this time? To be continued. 。
【 Kekkei Genkai 】Raiken Clan. Custom Kekkai Genkai/Bloodline 。
【 Bijuu 】None 。
【 Shinobi Profession 】 Ninjutsu, Prodigy 。
o Advantages :
• Mastery - Able to learn jutsu outside rank limits (genin learning b rank jutsu)
o Disadvantages:
• Headstrong - Succumb to any and all effects that jutsus have.
【 Shinobi Speciality】 Speed 。
【 Chakra Pool 】 70/70 。
【 Equipment 】
• Radio
• Gem Bracelet
• Basic Ninja Tools
• Advanced Ninja Tools
【 Strengths 】
• Taijutsu
• Expert Combatant
• Martial Artist
• Speed
• Agility
• Strength
【 Weaknesses 】
• Water
Base SP ► 30
Strength | 15
Speed | 15
Taijutsu | 10
Ninjutsu | 10
Total SP ► 30
Total MP ► 300
Mission Record
E-Rank |
● - - -
D-Rank |
● Lost Pet Search x1
● Lost Pet Search x2
● Dog Walking x1
C-Rank |
● - - -
B-Rank |
● - - -
A-Rank |
● - - -
S-Rank |
● - - -
Storyline |
● - - -
Special |
● - - -
 【 CHAKRA ELEMENT(S)】This speaks for itself 。
RAITON
xxxxx● E Rank - Raiton: Static Current [Learned]
xxxxx● D Rank - Raiton: Lightning Clone [Learned]
xxxxx● D Rank - Raiton: Electric Load Jutsu [Learned]
xxxxx● D Rank - Raiton: Raikyū [Lightning Ball] [Learned]
xxxxx● C Rank - Raiton: Lightning Burst Jutsu [Learned]
xxxxx● C Rank - Raiton: Lightning Dragon Blast Jutsu [Learned]
xxxxx● B Rank - Raiton: Thunder Dragon Jutsu [Learned]
xxxxx● B Rank - Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi [Lightning Strike Armor] [Learned]
NONTON
xxxxx● Passive: Act of Tree Climbing [150 words of training] [Learned]
xxxxx● Passive: Act of Water Surface Walking [250 words of training] [Learned]
xxxxx● D Rank - Kage Shuriken no Jutsu [Shadow Shuriken Technique] [Auto]
xxxxx● D Rank - Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique] [Auto]
xxxxx● C Rank - Chakra Concentration: Muscles [Auto]
xxxxx● C Rank - Chakra Concentration: Legs [Auto]
xxxxx● C Rank - Hari Jigoku [Hell Needles] [Auto]
xxxxx● B Rank - Kage Bunshin no Jutsu [Shadow Clone Technique] [Auto]
xxxxx● B Rank - Ranji Shigumi no Jutsu [Wild Lion's Mane Technique] [Auto]
xxxxx● B Rank - Hari Jizou [Underworld Guardian Spikes] [Auto]
TAIJUTSU
xxxxx● E Rank - Gouken no Kamae (Iron Fist Stance) [Learned]
xxxxx● D Rank - Douyou Kobushi (Shaking Fist) [Learned]
xxxxx● D Rank - Konoha Reppu (Leaf Gale) [Learned]
xxxxx● C Rank - Konoha Boufuu (Leaf Winding Wind) [Learned]
xxxxx● C Rank: Konoha Shoufuu (Leaf Rising Wind) [Learned]
EIGHT GATES
xxxxx● Passive: Gate of Opening [Learned]
xxxxx● Passive: Gate of Healing [Learned]
KEKKEI GENKAI
xxxxx● - - -
xxxxx● 29/30 Jutsu Points Left
「 I Will Follow My Ninja Way To Protect Other People No Matter What! 」
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Posted: Wed Jun 19, 2013 6:50 pm
PROFILE ASSESSMENT
Personal Info:
Nice.
I love his personality.
Character History:
Nice.
Shinobi Info:
Nice.
Stats:
The stats that you get from your speciality and profession cannot be manipulated. Taijutsu and Strength have to be at least 10. After making that change make you're only distributing 30 points between the rest of your stats.
Techniques:
Good.
Mission Points:
Good.
Other
Oh sorry didn't get a notification that I was quoted. Oh I see why haha its to capital "i"'s not "|"
I see that your characters are "best friends" just remember they cannot interact sadly.
Make the necessary changes for your profile to be approved ^_^
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Posted: Wed Jun 19, 2013 7:58 pm
Finished editing. Just asking, does the genin have stats that add up to only 50 SP or 30 SP? I was getting confused with the base and total. If i'm annoying you or so, then sorry! ^-^U
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Posted: Wed Jun 19, 2013 8:08 pm
Souchi The 2nd Finished editing. Just asking, does the genin have stats that add up to only 50 SP or 30 SP? I was getting confused with the base and total. If i'm annoying you or so, then sorry! ^-^U 30 base SP. The extra 20 that tend to come up for genin is because most of the specialities and the professions add SP though those cannot be changed. Meaning if you have a taijutsu speciality which gives +10 SP for taijustu you cannot give 5 of those to taijustu and use the other 5 for something else. Nah, you're not annoying at all. Feel free to ask me questions whenever and I'll be happy to answer ^_^
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Posted: Wed Jun 19, 2013 8:20 pm
II Blow Meh II Souchi The 2nd Finished editing. Just asking, does the genin have stats that add up to only 50 SP or 30 SP? I was getting confused with the base and total. If i'm annoying you or so, then sorry! ^-^U 30 base SP. The extra 20 that tend to come up for genin is because most of the specialities and the professions add SP though those cannot be changed. Meaning if you have a taijutsu speciality which gives +10 SP for taijustu you cannot give 5 of those to taijustu and use the other 5 for something else. Nah, you're not annoying at all. Feel free to ask me questions whenever and I'll be happy to answer ^_^ I'm finished with the hopefully final edit! Feel free to look over!
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Posted: Wed Jun 19, 2013 9:26 pm
Souchi The 2nd II Blow Meh II Souchi The 2nd Finished editing. Just asking, does the genin have stats that add up to only 50 SP or 30 SP? I was getting confused with the base and total. If i'm annoying you or so, then sorry! ^-^U 30 base SP. The extra 20 that tend to come up for genin is because most of the specialities and the professions add SP though those cannot be changed. Meaning if you have a taijutsu speciality which gives +10 SP for taijustu you cannot give 5 of those to taijustu and use the other 5 for something else. Nah, you're not annoying at all. Feel free to ask me questions whenever and I'll be happy to answer ^_^ I'm finished with the hopefully final edit! Feel free to look over! Approved ^_^
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Posted: Mon Jul 15, 2013 3:45 pm
名前は IKAZU, RAIKEN です !
I Fx M A Nx H A Sx N Ox T E Ax I Nx H I M x- xH Ex I Sx I N C A P A B L Ex O Fx U N D E R S T A N D I N Gx T R U T Hx A N Dx B E A U T Y
茶 ・真 ・美
【 F U L L N A M E 】全名前 Hey- my name is Ikazu Raiken 。
【 N I C K N A M E 】渾名 But people call me Spike head 。
【 A L I A S or T I T L E 】偽名 Have you heard of "The Top Dog Kumogakure" "- Yeah, that's me. 。
【 G E N D E R 】性 I'm pretty sure I'm a Male 。
【 S E X U A L I T Y 】性別 Sorry, I'm Hetero 。
【 H E I G H T 】縦 I'm about How tall is your character? 6'0" tall 。
【 W E I G H T 】体重 And I'm also 138 pounds 。
【 E Y E S 】目 Are you in love yet? blue in hue 。
【 H A I R 】髪 What about now? Yellow 。
【 A G E 】歳 Let's see- I just turned 15 this year in March 21st 。
【 L I K E S 】好もの I can't live without
。Electrocuting things
。Burning things
。Destruction
。Anything violent
【 D I S L I K E S 】嫌もの I definitely can live without
。Boredom
。Water, cause he can't swim.
【 P R E C I O U S 】大事な人 Someone precious? Nah, not yet.
【 V I L L A G E 】里 I'm from Kumogakure 。
【 O T H E R 】～等 Oh! I almost forgot! Oh wait, nevermind 。。。。。
始 め か ら 終 わ り ま で
f r o m b e g i n n i n g t o e n d
xxxAND SO... Ikazu was born in Konohagakure, living under his mother and father. His mother and father were both killed under mysterious purposes. The boy thought he never had parents that cared for him and loved him. Without his parents, he lived in the village alone. In his childhood, he was the knucklehead of the entire village. The boy pulled pranks, stole items, and always ran away from the academy to cause mischief. His teacher was always chased him whenever he escaped the academy. He is mostly described as an impulsive person, often and most of the times acting according to his emotions or mood sets. He has a very reckless, and carefree personality. He was usually lacked in his work when it came to studying, in which marked his utter laziness. Being a natural-born Raiken, he was rather a loud mouth, in which always got him into some trouble along the way. He starts to attack directly without giving thoughts, showing a lack of control over some of his abilities. Even with an initial attitude, he shows care and love for close ones and that he would sacrifice himself to save others. He starts to attack directly without giving thoughts. The boy wanted to be noticed. The village seemed to treat him like a nobody. He had no parents to take care of him. He had already made a bad reputation because of frequent pranks. He was the last remaining member of the Raiken Clan. Raiken always wondered what happened to his parents. That's a mystery that will probably never be revealed. The boy had to look forward and achieve his dream of becoming the strongest of the Village Hidden In The Clouds. Though, that loneliness in his heart still haunted him throughout his childhood. A miracle was in progress. As Ikazu grew up, he began to befriend many people as he progressed. He slowly came out of that endless loneliness and finally stood tall. There was no time to let himself down. His time in the Ninja World needed to be remembered. The unbreakable will of his flared. He promised that he will carry on the legacy bequeathed to him. From then on, he will revive the Raiken Clan and protect all that he holds dear.
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悔 い 改 め る
t u r n i n g o v e r a n e w l e a f
xxx。To Become Strong ...
新 章
a n e w c h a p t e r
xxx
He had finally graduated from the academy. Then, obtained head protector and embarked on missions. He sparred with Shinto Uchiha. Trained vigorously for a matter of three months for the Chunnin Exams. Now, doing whatever. 。
【 Kekkei Genkai 】Raiken Clan. Custom Kekkai Genkai/Bloodline 。
【 Bijuu 】None 。
【 Shinobi Profession 】 Taijutsu, Prodigy 。
o Advantages :
• Mastery - Able to learn jutsu outside rank limits (genin learning b rank jutsu)
o Disadvantages:
• Headstrong - Succumb to any and all effects that jutsus have.
【 Shinobi Speciality】 Speed 。
【 Chakra Pool 】 70/70 。
【 Equipment 】
• Radio
• Gem Bracelet
• Basic Ninja Tools
• Advanced Ninja Tools
【 Strengths 】
• Taijutsu
• Expert Combatant
• Martial Artist
• Speed
• Agility
• Strength
【 Weaknesses 】
• Water
Base SP ► 50
Ninjutsu | 10
Strength | 15
Speed | 15
Taijutsu | 10
Total SP ► 50
Total MP ► 200
Mission Record
E-Rank |
● - - -
D-Rank |
● Lost Pet Search x1
● Dog Walking x1
C-Rank |
● - - -
B-Rank |
● - - -
A-Rank |
● - - -
S-Rank |
● - - -
Storyline |
● - - -
Special |
● - - -
【 CHAKRA ELEMENT(S)】This speaks for itself 。
RAITON
xxxxx● E Rank - Raiton: Static Current
xxxxx● D Rank - Raiton: Lightning Clone
xxxxx● C Rank - Raiton: Thunder Crash Jutsu
xxxxx● B Rank - Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi [Lightning Strike Armor]
xxxxx● B Rank - Raiton: Lightning Phoenix Jutsu
FUUTON
xxxxx● - - -
NONTON
xxxxx● - - -
TAIJUTSU
xxxxx● E Rank - Gouken no Kamae (Iron Fist Stance)
xxxxx● D Rank - Douyou Kobushi (Shaking Fist)
xxxxx● D Rank - Dainamikku-Entori (Dynamic Entry)
xxxxx● D Rank - Konoha Reppu (Leaf Gale)
xxxxx● C Rank - Konoha Boufuu (Leaf Winding Wind)
xxxxx● C Rank - Kage Konoha Buyo (Shadow of the Dancing Leaf)
xxxxx● C Rank - Konoha Shoufuu (Leaf Rising Wind)
KEKKEI GENKAI
xxxxx● - - -
xxxxx● 30/30 Jutsu Points Left
「 HEAD STRONG; I'LL TAKE YOU ON 」
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Posted: Mon Jul 15, 2013 4:13 pm
PROFILE ASSESSMENT
Back to the basics:
Good
Biography:
Personality needs to integrated into the bio with key personality traits underlined. Also needs to be a little longer....and um he want's to be the Kazekage lol......?
Info:
Missing a shinobi profession. Also how is taijutsu one of his strengths when he had no SP directed to taijutsu?
Stats:
Because there is no profession the stats do not add up
Mission Points:
ok
Jutsu:
Check your math.
27/30
Make the necessary changes for your profile to be approved ^_^
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Posted: Tue Jul 16, 2013 9:14 am
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Posted: Tue Jul 16, 2013 9:59 am
PROFILE ASSESSMENT
Back to the basics:
Good
Biography: [NOT CORRECTED]
Personality needs to integrated into the bio with key personality traits underlined. Also needs to be a little longer....and um he want's to be the Kazekage lol......?
Info: [GOOD]
Missing a shinobi profession. Also how is taijutsu one of his strengths when he had no SP directed to taijutsu?
Stats: [GOOD]
Because there is no profession the stats do not add up
Mission Points:
ok
Jutsu: [GOOD]
Check your math.
27/30
Make the necessary changes for your profile to be approved ^_^
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Posted: Tue Jul 16, 2013 10:20 am
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Posted: Tue Jul 16, 2013 10:43 am
Key personality traits not the whole personality lol
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Posted: Tue Jul 16, 2013 11:36 am
Corrected, again. I think. ( + 0 + )/
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Posted: Tue Jul 16, 2013 12:09 pm
Souchi The 2nd Corrected, again. I think. ( + 0 + )/ Perfect. Approved
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