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PostPosted: Thu Jun 06, 2013 3:15 pm


Lieutenant/Visored Application


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Izaya Kira

How long have you been in the guild?
I just joined a couple day ago.

How active are you in the guild?
I have just started but i cheek gaia everyday or every other day if i cant everyday.

Why do you want to hold the rank of Lieutenant/Visored?
I like playing as more rouge characters who have to hide and try to clean there name again after being set up. also i though it might be interesting for the guild if a few more rouges showed up and visoreds cause i don't really see any, so i figured why not start up a small visored organization to start rising up for some fun and story.

Why do you think you will do well as a Lieutenant/Visored?
Some of this is kind of answered above i think. But like i said i like being Rouges cause they can add some spice to a story, as well as fun. Also like i said my character will try starting a small inner faction of other visoreds together.

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You are forced into a fight against an arrancar to defend a innocent humans


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Izaya Kirā

It was a Partly cloudy day out, with a chance of rain. But Izaya went out on a walk through the park anyways. He wasn't worried about a little rain, he just wanted to walk through the park like he did ever week just to relax. But this time he could tell his walk wasn't going to be to peaceful, someone had been following him since he entered the park.He decided to stray from the path to lead the follower away from the playground ahead, in case some kids where there. Once he had reached and opening he stopped and pulled out his zippo and Marlboro's. As he lit his cigarette he could hear the slow unsheathing of a sword behind him. "So your just going to cut a man down while he lights a smoke with his back turned i see." He said as he exhaled smoke from his first drag. Izaya was opening and closing the lid to his zippo in front of him during this, keeping an eye on the reflection through it to look behind him. He saw a ferocious grin under the hood from the stranger when after he spoke, He also saw the psychotic Yellow hollow like eyes as well. The was a quick moment of silence before the crack of a hollow sonido burst out behind him and the strangers coat left falling in slow motion. In that same moment Izaya had all ready began turning around with his left first clenched timing it with the retuning sonido on the hollow in a mid jump behind him about to bring his sword down. But before he could Izaya's fist had already found its target right in the gut of the arrancars, Which sent him flying back into a tree. As the arrancar recovered Izaya had tossed his cig and popped a soul candy into his mouth. Izaya's gigai fell to the ground behind him, both his spirit form an gigai looked the same except for the zanpakuto now at Izaya's side. He launched forward drawing his blade as the arrancar gained his footing. A split millisecond later There blades clashed with a loud sound on metal as sparks flew off there blades. They starting moving back towards the center of the opening trading blows as the clouds covered more of the sky and began to downpour. Izaya figured it was time to end the fight before there fighting attracted hollows or other attention he was not looking to find. He let the force from the arrancars next blow push him back so he could slide back low to the ground, with his hand extended down on the ground. "Bakudō number 21 Sekienton." He chanted softly. A large cloud of red smoke covered the field. To finish the fight quickly Izaya closed his eyes to summon his hollow mask by taking his left hand in a swiping motion across his face opening his eyes immediately after, Making his spiritual pressure increase and became more hollow like. Before any soul reapers came to investigate the burst in spiritual power he Flash stepped behind the confused arrancar and with a single downward strike split him in 2 down the middle. As the smoke cleared Izaya stood there a moment with drops on blood on his mask and his blade covered in crimson. The Arrancars body fell to the ground with a thud as Izaya's mask vanished in a small cloud of black reitsu. He flash stepped to his gigai and quickly swung his sword down to clean the blood off and re sheath it, as he climbed back into his body. He could feel the Soul Reapers getting closer as he walked into the deeper part of the woods. He used the gigai's ability of hiding his spiritual pressure to quickly take off running deep into the woods.
PostPosted: Fri Jun 07, 2013 3:34 am


Ok this looks good, in fact my only real issue is that it is a wall of text which makes it a bit harder to read, so work on breaking it up into paragraphs in your actual posting or do what I do which is:

Actions and descriptions

Talking

More actions and descriptions.

Also the reason you don't see vizards is they all died...well except one I think, maybe two, either way those two don't post anymore so we really don't have any I don't think (could be wrong on that) my character included in the dead vizards.

So this is approved.

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 07, 2013 8:14 am


Dalaga Helios
Ok this looks good, in fact my only real issue is that it is a wall of text which makes it a bit harder to read, so work on breaking it up into paragraphs in your actual posting or do what I do which is:

Actions and descriptions

Talking

More actions and descriptions.

Also the reason you don't see vizards is they all died...well except one I think, maybe two, either way those two don't post anymore so we really don't have any I don't think (could be wrong on that) my character included in the dead vizards.

So this is approved.


lol ok and sorry bout the wall of text was mostly trying to just get into detail more cause one guild i was in very briefly was a huge grammar nazi one and it required a descriptive short story for each post it felt. and i quit that almost instantly xD so don't worry about walls of texts from me like this one.
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