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 Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 6:18 am
Name: Océanne Belmare
Nickname: -
Age: 20
Birthday: Nov 30th
Sign: Sagittarius
Gemstone: Turquoise
Blood Type: AB+
Fav. Food: Squid
Hated Food: Hotdogs
School: Destiny City University
Hobbies:
Surfing - There's nothing better than getting up early in the morning, putting on a wet suit and ripping through some waves. Océanne loves water and swimming lessons just got too easy for her, so she asked her parents one day at the beach if she could get surfing lessons. She took to them quite easily, and now it's one of her favorite things to do. She hasn't been able to go out surfing much since she moved to the city to go to school, but she does try to go out on weekends as much as possible.
Sea shell collecting - Her grandmother was the one to introduce her to collecting seashells, and living by the beach younger allowed her to be able to pick up the hobby too. She keeps some in small fish bowls arranging them with some sand from places she's traveled to and shells she collected from the same place. She's recently decided to try and sell her mini fishbowls by pouring some epoxy to keep it together.
Virtues:
Lawful -- People may have different ideas on what is right and wrong but rules are there to be followed. Being an avid believer in law and order she keeps to the rules that society has created. Even if she doesn't like some of the rules that have been implemented by the world leaders that won't stop her from making sure she and even others adhere to them.
Headstrong: It means, she does not let things deter her from her goals. Even if Oceanne has to face things that would stop most people. She keeps on going, gets right back onto that horse. Someone tells her it's too dangerous to go save that person in the water from the shark, you can bet your bottom dollar she's going in to save that stranger!
Calm: Being a lifeguard with people's lives on the line, it tends to change you. When things get hectic, Oceanne breezes through the chaos with a calmness that is very odd. Where as some people might freak out over something, she likes to keep her head on and just breath it out so she can figure out what the problem is and root out the problem. People who try to push her buttons are ignored, and insults slide over her like they've never touched her.
Flaws:
Perfectionist: -- If a job is worth doing then it’s worth doing well, in fact there is no reason to produce anything but the best of your ability. That being said, if Oceanne dos something and it doesn't live up to her standards she will trash it because she gets stuck on little details. Group projects for example, are a complete nightmare because she'll ask you to restart until she's satisfied and sometimes she'll even do it for you!
Vindictive: When someone wrongs Oceanne or someone she deeply cares for, there will be no mercy for them. She will go out of her way to make the person who wronged her feel remorse about what they did. She is not below petty insults or dragging the persons name through the mud. Once the person apologizes, and she feels it is sincere, it will take her a while to not be mad at them, but at least she isn't going out of her way to punish them.
Over Protective: After Oceanne lost someone to drowning, she became over protective of everyone around her. She'll tell you not to do something if she feels it's too dangerous, she'll stick out her arm to stop you before a green light just to make sure you're not run over by a car.This side of her can get pretty annoying really fast, and it doesn't help that she watches everyone like a hawk 24/7 when they're around her.
PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Reference
Face: Tanned skin
Clothes: Life guard shirt with some short jean shorts, flats.
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Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 6:43 am
 Senshi: Sailor Väisälä senshi of ocean currents
Challenge: I will wash you away!
Fuku Colour:
Main Color: Blue green
Secondary Color: Seafoam
Fuku:
* I know her bodice is the wrong color on her ref. If the artist would like to make changes to her outfit, please advise me first ^.^ I'm open to them, I just wanna know about it. If you need refs for her tiara lemme know!
Collar -- Ref
Bow -- Ref
Bodice -- Ref
Sleeves -- Ref
Brooch --Ref
Bottoms -- Ref
Tiara -- Ref
Choker -- Classic chocker
Shoes -- Ref
Gloves -- Ref
Accessories -- Ref
Attacks
Sailor Scout Attack: Current Push
Väisälä will stick her right arm to the side and then do a sweeping arch motion horizontally for a 180 degree angle, as if she's back handing someone. Anyone in it's passage will get a sensation of being swept along and it does not stop until her arm motion is finished. Everyone can be hit. This ability only goes as far as 6 feet from her and an only be used once in battle. Lasts 5 seconds.
Super Sailor Scout Attack: Deep Current Push
An upgrade from the first attack, the force of the wave is much stronger. The wave also extends out to eight feet in front of her. Can be used twice in battle. Everyone can be hit. Lasts 10 seconds.
Eternal Sailor Attack: Ocean Current Clash
Extending out both arms to the side, Väisälä does the same movement as before but with both arms that meet in the middle. As she does the movement, water begins to build up in a circle around her that has a diameter of 10 feet with her being the center point. The water builds up to the waist line and then the water underneath begins to move and pull people like real ocean currents that Väisälä controls to sweep people with into the water or with waves. This ability can only be used once in battle and lasts 30 seconds.
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Posted: Sun May 12, 2013 8:20 am
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Posted: Tue Nov 12, 2013 11:05 am
Bumping you up fair lady <3
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Posted: Thu Dec 26, 2013 8:13 pm
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Posted: Wed Jan 01, 2014 11:10 am
Heya Tasinei!
I wanna say that your concept looks and sounds SOOOOOO cute. And I love the concept art you have for her! I saw that your girl is 22, and wanted to let you know that the awakening age cap is 20, so you'd just hafta knock her down two years to be in the clear <3
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Posted: Wed Jan 01, 2014 12:50 pm
Thank you biggrin I think people keep telling me that and I always forget ._.
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Posted: Thu Mar 13, 2014 11:33 am
Fixed a few things here and there
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Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2014 8:27 am
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Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2014 9:34 am
Hey Tasinei, Doing a quick drive-by to remind you that if you want her critted/approved, you need to post here! A mod will get to you with all necessary swiftness once you do c:
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Posted: Fri May 02, 2014 6:48 am
Thank you! biggrin Completely forgot v.v
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Posted: Thu May 08, 2014 11:40 am
Heyo! Sorry it took me so long to get back to you with an official crit, it's finals time and everything is craziness @.@
ON THE CIVILIAN SIDE:
I don't think you need the first line about arrogance in her "Headstrong" virtue? It doesn't really relate to anything, and I don't see other mentions of confidence or arrogance in her profile!
Right now her "Perfectionist" flaw is reading like a virtue! It's certainly something that can be a flaw, but you focus too much on the good side, like her wanting to do her best and not wanting to leave a job unfinished! I'd like to know why it's a flaw, so something people would dislike her for? Is she overboard with her perfectionism? Does she get frustrated when things don't work out?
ON THE POWERED SIDE:
Right now, Väisälä's first two attacks are reading more like a Senshi of Waves or Tsunamis or the like than currents, per se? I tend to think of currents as the under-the-water action and while yes, waves are one fo the things that effect currents, I don't think it'd be entirely fair to someone who might later want to quest that sphere or the like to focus her attacks so heavily on waves!
Having the target experience the effects of being pulled by ocean currents, with or without actual visual water - perhaps the target simply feels like they're underwater, without actual water being summoned? - would be better and more fair, imo!
Quote me if you have any questions or once you've made changes and I'll be happy to come and give her a second look!
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Posted: Mon May 26, 2014 9:18 am
Thank you for the power suggestions I went with it as I like them better! Fixed up everything I think.
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Posted: Mon May 26, 2014 10:17 am
Civ side fixes look good, however effective radiuses of 3 and 6 meters (so about ten/twenty feet?) are way too large! I'm not perfect at meters/feet conversion, but I'd be more comfortable with something that converts to six feet for basic and eight for Super. Also, the times her attacks last should be in seconds, not posts! (I know that's somewhat imperfect and requires a degree of mental guessing on both sides, but it is the standard for how attacks are generally written!)
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Posted: Mon May 26, 2014 10:22 am
Oh I didn't know they were calculated in feet LOL
That is quite large xD I'll fix that right up!
I'm not really sure on how long they should last?
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