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♦Character Name ♦

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Name: Lacey Rae, Calverly
Nick Names: Lace
Alias: none
Alliance: vampire
Race: Vampire

❧Physical Characteristics
Age: 17
Hair: brown
Eyes: gold
Skin Tone: pale
Ethnicity: american
Scars, Birthmarks, Tattoos: None
Height: 4'9"
Weight: 90 lbs.
Marital Status: single
Physical Structure: very small and light, but strong
Orientation: bisexual

❧Personal Info
❖Transcripts:
Alignment: chaotic good
Criminal Record: went to Junvenille Detention for holding a knife to a foster sister's throat when she was 13 because she was going through her personal things and calling her the wrong name over and over.
Level of Education: High school up to her junior year.
if collegian: N/A
Current Occupation: works at a book store called The Loft
Past Occupations: N/A
Family: Claire Ivashkov and Xelyn Norcrip, deceased, are her parents, Jameson Calverly, also deceased, is her biological brother and Aurora Sage is her half sister
Lovers, Friends, and Others: her friends are: October Haner, Godric Knight, Aurora Sage

❖Personal:
Personality: Lost Innocence. Wants to do good in the world, but the darkness in her stops her. Lacey Rae is a very shy, introverted girl, and often falls into a deep depression. She can also be a brat- throwing a fit like a two year old when things don't go her way. She does not accept constructive critisisim easily and can often think she is above others because of her vampire blood.
People Skills: she is good with people, but very shy.
Goals: Lacey Rae hopes to become a doctor and help children
Fears: Dying and losing everything she loves
Favorites: Reading, mostly young adult romance novels, erotic romance, and Greek Mythology, Writing, and all kinds of music, especially various forms of metal, the violin, and piano
Role Model: Thanatos the Greek God of Death.
Catch Phrase/Motto: "I never let anyone touch me."

❧Skills,Abilities, and Powers
Skills: how to play the violin, how to control her bloodlust, how to read, write, and talk
Abilities: incredible speed, a good connection with animals- mostly dogs, and impressive strength
Powers: the element of shadows (can manipulate shadows, melt into them for camoflague, and sink under the ground and move around as a black mass of smoky energy) and fear (she can breath fear into her victims by showing them their worst fear as a form of torture instead of actually killing them)
Weaknesses: The sun, holy water, light-based attacks, and the bite of a werewolf







History: Lacey Rae Calverly was a happy girl living in a house in the woods with her mother, father, and older brother. But one day she began to see things- make predictions- from what the weather was going to be that day before the weather man said, or when grandma was going to come. This was cute at first, but one day she had a "vision" that her parents were going to die. No one believed her, naturally. Lacey Rae begged everyone to believe her, even their neighbors, and the town began to whisper the words "witch", or "satan worshiper". Only when she walked into their burned up room did people believe her, but they also blamed her, and exiled her away. After wandering around aimlessly for a year she was then kidnapped by an un-named, rogue vampire, who was forced to by a dark spirit that was possessing him, when she was 15, Lacey Rae has been on the run ever since she escaped. The two years of torture has caused her to always be afraid- constantly looking over her shoulder and down dark alleyways- and to turn from happy and carefree, to cold-hearted and mean-spirited at times and she no longer has visions- but if she does, she ignores them. While held captive, she has created a world where nothing bad happens and no one cries, screams, or shouts. Lacey Rae often escapes to that world, a place she calls Monteclaire, and forgets the darkened soul that sleeps inside her until she wakes up.

Theme Song: Lullaby of the Crucified by: Alesana

I saw the edits you made to your character's profile... so here comes Review Number Two:

A. There are a few sections missing from your character's profile; her past occupations, for one. I would strongly advise to look at the profile skeleton provided and make sure you have each section... and in the right order.

B. Why did your character hold a knife to her sister throat at thirteen? Her history doesn't explain that. Speaking of history, what was her life like before she was kidnapped at 15 by a rogue vampire? All it says was that her parents died in a fire when she was five... that's about it. Again, please go into a little more detail about your character's history. It doesn't seem very interesting. Plus, the History section's in the wrong place in the profile.

C. How does "breathing fear into her opponents" torture them? Could you explain that? Speaking of powers, since she can control shadows, light-based powers naturally can negate or overcome it. Add that as a weakness.

D. The Isle of Skye does exist. However, it's an actual place in Scotland, and according to the universe of this guild, it's ruled by the Celtic goddess Scathach. In other words, your character did not create the Isle of Skye- which means you need to get rid of that part of her history.


Still withholding approval for now until it's fixed.