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PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2012 8:08 am


Character Bio
■ Character Name: Unathea Mythica Corinlla
■ Nickname: Una
■ Aliases: Dam calls her Thea, Sire calls her Fawn
■ Monster Parent: Sire is Monoceros and her Dam is Amalthea (from the Last Unicorn)
■ Monster Species Type: Unicorn
■ Gender: female
■ Age: Unknown
■ Birthday: Unknown
■ Place of Birth: Avalon Basin near Tír na nÓg
■ Residence: Horror High
■ (One) Power: Purification. She can purify things with her horn, which might be annoying to anyone who wants to "Spike" the punch. How she purifies is her horn secretes a liquid which looks like she's sweating, and all she has to do is bend her head over whatever needs to be purified, and a few drops is all it takes to return it to normal. For purifying air, the sweat turns to mist. She can also purify wounds, which enables them to heal faster. But even that has its drawbacks, she has to wear a hat, not only because she's shy about her horn, but because it also acts like a sweatband and keeps her dry, or else it looks like she's crying or like I mentioned before sweating profusely. That and it looks rather disgusting, which turns people off to the idea of her purifying things.

■ Personality: She is very shy, sweet, caring and considerate. Her timidness makes her what people call 'adorkable'. But she's easily hurt, and doesn't really know the difference between someone joking, and someone being serious. She also has a tendency to over react to certain situations, especially the negitive ones, either by freaking out, or by withdrawing into herself, and shutting herself away from others. She doesn't get angry easily, infact not even her own parents have seen her angry. That's because she tries to keep her anger, basically all her negitiveness inwards, which isn't a good thing because when she does get angry, she blacks out, and when she comes to, something is either broken, or she's hurt herself. But that has only happened once.

Appearance
■ Height: 4'4
■ Weight: roughly 90 pounds
■ Hair Color: White with blue
■ Hair Length/Style: When her hair isn't in loose pigtail braids, it's long and curly reaching down to her backside
■ Eye Color: bluish purple
■ Skin Color: her humanoid part is pale skinned, while her lower half is white unicorn legs
■ Build: petite
■ Clothing STYLE: Una wears oversized baggy clothes due to the imbalance that her body currently is. Scrawny unicorn legs, oversized hoofs, they're much bigger than her humanoid half.

Relationships
■ Relationship with Family: She isn't as close to her Dam as she'd like to, but she's a Sire's Fawn.
■ Key Family / Relatives: She has a half brother named Lir, but no one knows where he is, since her Sire sent him away after she was born.

Biography
■ History: Una's lived in Tír na nÓg since birth, and only on one occasion has she left the protective veils to see what was out there. She was still a young fawn then, she left the veil one day and came across a young human girl singing by a stream. Enchanted by her singing, she came over to her, the girl was at first terrified, but they quickly became friends, playing in the meadow together, and sleeping underneath a tree. But then Una's Dam came for her, and she had to leave her friend and go home. But the next day her time she went back to play more, but found out that her little friend had suddenly aged quickly, becoming an old woman who had, since their last play date, came back to the very same tree in hopes to see her again. It would be the last time Una would see her friend again, because that very day, the old woman passed away in her sleep, after Una had laid down with her like before. Her first friend. It saddened Una, and even though she had other friends in Tír na nÓg, she would never forget her first friend. It was also that day she realized life never lasted forever, that one day... it would be gone, leaving only memories of its existence, but even then they would disappear. This Depressened Una for a while, until Una's parents thought it time to show their Fawn the world, feeling that she was old enough to have a better understanding of it. So they left Tír na nÓg, and went about the world. And over her travels with them, she attempted to make more friends, but she wasn't in one place long enough to keep them, because her parents would scoop her up, so to speak, and take her to another location, even before she make any real friends.

■ Personal Goals: She would like to be a mother one day, and if she can't find her own special someone, she'd like to open her home to the orphaned creatures/monsters/even humans

■ Professional Goals: She wants to be a teacher to the younger monsters, like Kindergarten or PreSchool, among those lines.

Extra

■ Jewelry: None
■ Tattoos: None

■ Relationship with Friends: She has no friends currently (that are cannon)
■ Key Friends: None yet
■ Key Enemies: None yet

■ Educational History: She learned all that she knows from traveling the world with her parents for so long, though she is still Naive to the more modern meanings to a lot of things.
■ Work History: none
■ Key Childhood Experiences: She made a friend when she was a small Fawn and went through the Veil, but when she came back to see them, they had grown old and died before her eyes.
■ Key Teenage Experiences: None yet
■ Key Adult Experiences: None yet

■ Morality / Ethics: She believes there is good in everyone, but she also believes everyone is capable of being evil as well. She also believes that everyone needs help, even if they are the worlds biggest jerk, that eventually you do good for them, they'll do good in return.
■ Handedness: ambidextrous, though she draws with her left hand and writes with her right. Often found writing a story while drawing pictures for it at the same time.
■ Skills: Drawing (mostly animals and landscapes),
■ Phobias / Fears:
■ Bad Habits / Vices: bites her fingernails, holds her tail and her ear when she's nervous or scared,
■ Quirks:
■ Best Qualities: She's a good listener, and easily someone to confide in.
■ Worst Qualities: She's too shy and tends to over react to things, mostly by fleeing rather quickly and hiding.
■ Favorites: (food, clothing, art, music, TV show, movie, book, etc.)
■ Style of Speech:
■ Commonly Used Words / Slang / Jargon:
■ Lies / Misinformation:
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 28, 2012 4:49 pm


I really really like her profile, she is super cute!
Aaaand there isn't much that stands out to be fixed
except her personality, which is very....one dimensional. I don't see much negative traits in there, and while it could be argued that timidness and shyness are negative, you don't write them to be. So an expansion on this area would be awesome! I would love to learn more about her!

Also got confused on her clothing styles....why does her upper half appear smaller? Because her unicorn parts lol? And an expansion here would be nice....geek clothes could be anything. Does she like shorts and button-ups or cutesy dresses with like Christmas sweaters? Not needed, but gives better visuals <3

Also it is probably just me, but I have no idea what a monoceros is lol so a link or footnote would be nice ahahahaha!

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 29, 2012 10:52 am


Madness_insanity


I think I fixed it xD But I'll look for the Legend of Monoceros and put it in as well
PostPosted: Thu Nov 29, 2012 3:06 pm


Very nice! <3

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 29, 2012 4:02 pm


Whoooa...okay, so I have to know, have you seen the Last Unicorn graphic novel, or read the book? When I think of Monoceros, I think of this guy - the first unicorn to have been turned into a human (by Schmendrick's previous master). I know that's probably not the one you're talking about, though. XD I'm curious about this Legend of Monoceros. Mind letting me know if/when you find it, please?

I'll give this girl of yours a proper look over when I have the time. Love unicorns and their mythology. Oh, and I have a quest for one myself, though not quite the same species as your Unathea. Haha, her nickname reminds me of Una from Gargoyles. Watched that?
PostPosted: Fri Nov 30, 2012 10:22 am


Kitomyx


I have, she's one of my favorite characters in the series xD And No he wasn't the one I was thinking about when I invisioned Monoceros. However, the Last Unicorn is my favorite Novel/movie ever. I know it by heart and I'm glad to know there is another out there who shares my same love for them.

Also the Legend of Monoceros is an old Greek story about Orion and Athena, they were hunting together when they came across a vast and swift moving river, they were able to make it across just fine, save for one of the dogs, who got washed away, this greatly upset Athena because they were her prized hounds. So Orion went looking for him, to bring him back to her, but as time grew on, he too was starting to get hopeless. But then when the day was turning to night, he heard a familiar bark, and looked up in time to see the dog, riding upon the unicorn's back run over to him. He quickly got Athena, and she, overjoyed to have her dog back, thanked the unicorn, and the unicorn became a constant companion for the two of them. Legend also said that Monoceros was there when Orion fell into the Sea because of Apollo's Scorpio. The unicorn jumped into the ocean as well, Athena's dogs following, to try and save Orion, Athena touched by this, had her father, Zeus put them into the sky, so that they'd could be with Orion.

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 30, 2012 12:22 pm


Hero Rarehart
Hahaha, oh, I know you probably weren't thinking about that particular unicorn when you envisioned Monoceros; I just meant that that's how I pictured him. Since you say that, though, I can only take that to mean that you have your own personal vision of what he's like. Care to share?

I'm really glad to have found someone so deeply interested in unicorn lore as well! I wonder - have you read the trilogy called The Firebringer? (Not to be confused with 'The Fire Bringer, which is about deer.) It's a series by Meredith Ann Pierce and it, like the Last Unicorn book, is pretty old. I have not yet managed to read the actual Last Unicorn novel, but I have read the Firebringer Trilogy which is about Unicorns and their relationships with Wyrms and Griffins.

It's an amazing series - it even explains why more 'modern' unicorns look like horses with horns as opposed to the traditional unicorn with the lion's tufted tail and the cloven hooves, beard, tufted ears, and fetlocks of a goat. If you haven't read it yet, I'd really suggest it (along with the series known as Black Unicorn, Gold Unicorn, Red Unicorn, but that one, oddly enough, isn't as much about unicorns...). Same with Into the Land of Unicorns, though that's a bit more well-known, so you've more-likely read that one.

Also, thank you for telling me that story! I'm honestly shocked that I don't remember anything about it, since I previously would have liked to think myself well-versed in Greek mythology. I really hope our unicorns girls get to interact sometime~
PostPosted: Sat Dec 01, 2012 5:10 pm


IT'S CRIT TIME

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All right! Let's get down to this shiz~

Powers Imma yell at you like I yell at everyone. You need strengths and weaknesses to each power. They are not always perfect, they do not always work. How much does she secrete in a day? Does it take a toll on her? What can she not purify?

Personality Una's personality lies a little flat. I'm not trying to be mean, but it is. There are no weaknesses to her personality as someone's already pointed out. What happens when she gets mad? Does she get mad? If she doesn't we need to bottle whatever she's taking and give it to the monsters of HH that are a little overly angry. 83

Clothing Style The way I saw Una's dressing was like an 80s Brat Packer. Oversized sweaters, oversized jewelry. Almost like a lolita. This should be worded a little bit better. "Una wears oversized clothes due to the imbalance that her body currently is. Scrawny unicorn legs, oversized hoofs, they're much bigger than her humanoid half.

History There isn't much here. It just tells the story of her finding and losing her first friend. There's more to her life, how did her parents feel about her leaving? Why was there such a time skip? Has she attempted to find more friends? Did she have other people at I'm not going to attempt to spell it even though I could probably copy paste and have saved a ton of typing? (I committed damn it.) What about her half brother you were telling me about? Where does he come in to her story? What about Nightshire? There's nothing there about either of them. We need to know more about her. Her past will help her round out to people.

Friends Aoife. XD Misspelling there.

Also I believe I should point out that technically no one has met each other yet because the RP in the thread is just for funsies and not canon. But that doesn't change much of anything, really. I just felt I should mention it.



WHERE DID THE EXTRA STUFF GO?

We have an updated character bio thing to fill out. It might help you round out Una more to give us a better look at her.

I like her so far, we just need to beef it up a little!

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