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 Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2012 4:42 pm
Name:Dmitry Bolotnikov
Nickname: Mitry [what he prefers to be called]
Age: 19
Birthday: September 9th
Sign: Virgo
Gemstone: Sapphire
Blood Type: A-
Fav. Food: Sardines
Hated Food: Cabbage. Cause what the heck is up with that?!
School: Destiny City University. He’s studying to become an architect.
Hobbies:
Thai Kick boxing: Dmitry has been in kick boxing classes ever since he was able to comprehend what whooping a** with your legs was. While he's no kickboxing master of doom and destruction, he's pretty sure he can still hold his own in a one on one match. His classes usually start at 4:00pm and end about 5:30pm depending on whether his teacher wants to keep his class after hours for more training. This sport keeps Dmitry in shape due to the work outs that he has to do almost every day in addition to his classes.
Skirt Chasin/ Pants Snatchin: If there's a skirt attached to it or even pants, Dmitry will try to chase. Hes not a picky man when it comes to gender or sexuality for that matter, so when he sees a man or a woman he likes, and they seem interested, please believe he's going to hit that. However, Dmitry does have standards and if they're not visually pleasing what so ever, its on to the next one. Yeah, he's totally vain like that.
Skate boarding: An odd habit he developed about a year ago. Hes not as good at it, but he can safely say the days of his face meeting the pavement are over...Well at least his face meeting pavement every jump. Now its every FIVE jumps! Dmitry likes to meet with his friends whenever he has time so he can practice and of course, show off. This usually happens on the weekends. Dmitrys skateboard.
Building designs: Dmitry has been into buildings and structures ever since he was little. His father is an architect and he used to show Dmitry the various designs he had for buildings as well as the wooden models he had in his office. When he was old enough, he started drawing designs for building he would create when he got older. He still has his little collection of sketch books from his childhood up till now. He often looks back at them to see if he ever wants to redesign anything. He'll often look at pictures with architecture to get a feel for a new design or to just admire the beauty.
Virtues:
Sup bro. Names Mitry, what’s yours? – Outgoing: Life of the party? That would be Dmitry. No matter where he goes, he tries to get the party started. Whenever he's at school or work, he's usually able to get customers or most classmates to open up and participate. With that being said, Dmitry's outgoing nature does have some drawbacks. Sometimes he can come off as pushy or annoying if he's around some one that doesn't want to be bothered. Not being able to make things exciting doesn't really affect him much, he'll just simply move on to the next thing. Its their loss right?
I got ya back, and I’m not going nowhere. – Loyal: When some one becomes Dmitry's friend or if he's in a relationship, you can believe that he'll be stuck to you like glue. He's not clingy, but if some one needs help getting out of a sticky situation or if a bro needs a wing man, hes the one to answer the call. In fact, Dmitry's so loyal that he will take the rap for something a friend has done, as long as he doesn't end up in prison or worse. His loyalty isn't easily gained, but once it is, you'll have a bro for life.
Yeah sure, Im game for whatever... - Laid back/ easy going: Dmitry believes in taking life easy. Why rush into something when its better to take baby steps and live life on day at a time? This trait of thinking causes Dmitry to be really lax on a lot of things. He doesn't slack, but he does tend to go with the flow on most things and fights are not on his agenda, unless some one starts it first or he has to. Other than that, he's rather want to go skate boarding or hang out at the park with friends.
Flaws:
Hey cutie~ – Flirty: It would be rude of Dmitry to think of himself as some kind of bad a** sexy Romeo, but he does it anyway. Because of this, he likes to flirt a lot with anyone that's willing to flirt back. If some one isn't interested, then its on to the next one that will be interested. Flirting isn't anything serious for this one which is another reason why he does it so much. Its all fun and games to him until some one decides to get serious, then its time to reassess the situation and see if maybe something could be worked out.
It’s all about me honey. Didn’t you know? – Self-Centered: Is it all about Mitry? Why yes, yes it is. If he isn't the life of the party, then he'll make sure he is by the end of the night. He's important, he's sexy, and people should want to be around this because who wouldn't? People's very existence should revolve around him, hes the center of the universe so why not? This type of thinking is also where Dmitrys vanity comes from along with his cockiness. Being an only child didn't help matters either as he was [and still is] the center of his parent's universe. Its only right for other people to follow his parents' example...
You wanna have a who’s bigger contest!? I win automatically. – Arrogant: Dmitry likes to think that no matter what life throws his way, he can take it and then dish it out ten time better than life ever did. He's freaking Dmitry! He can do anything ten times better than anyone else, because he wins, no matter what. Dmitry's cockiness is on a whole nother level. It could be overconfidence, or just a bad case of over inflated ego, but Dmitry likes to think hes the best at anything and no one can ever tell him otherwise. Challenge him to a fight? He'll beat you with both arms tied behind his back WHILE blindfolded. Wanna see who looks better? Can get the most tail even if he looks like a bum? Dmitry will do it AND seduce your mother. Why? Because he's THAT GOOD and hes THAT FREAKING FINE. Deal with it.
PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
Eyes: Celestial blue, and narrow, kinda like hes glaring but he really isn’t.
Hair: Auburn and long, down to his lower back. Dmitry started growing it out when he was 10 and hasn’t cut it ever since. He might cut it if it gets overly long cause looking like a girl is not on his list. He usually keeps his hair in a low ponytail or just leaves it down.
Face: A strong jawline with slightly high cheekbones. His ears are about average, if not a smidigt bigger than normal. As for his facial shape, this (sorry about the other bits) is the best example there is. Dmitry also likes to wear fake gages of varying shapes and sizes. Dmitry Does have snake bite piercings like the boy in that picture there.
Clothes: Dmitry likes to wear graphic tees, skinny jeans that range from tan to black, hoodies, skater shoes, converse, high-top shoes and sometimes if hes in the mood, combat boots as well. Hes hardly ever seen without his headphones. Here's a polyvore Of one of his outfits.
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Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2012 4:49 pm
Knight Title: Aaru Page of Saturn
Challenge: "For the Protection of Saturn, be blessed and go in peace"
Short version: "Be blessed and go in peace"
Uniform:
Face -- I was wondering if he could have a design like this on his face? For the impact :']
Top -- The vest and the shirt along with the broach
Bottoms -- the pants in this picture
Gloves --Black gentlemans gloves
Belt -- Something like this
Shoes -- these boots that should come up to his knees to meet the pants x3
Shoulders -- none
Accessories -- these earrings and Chains! that dangle from his pants. They're small so that they wont weigh him down.
Weapon -- A bleeding skull candle For the first stage.
Second stage would be the same bleeding skull, except it has now become a bleeding Catrina skull with this design. Third stage will be the same except some jewels and flowers have been added.
Weapon Stages:
Page: Bleeding skull candle
Squire: A bleeding Catrina skull
Knight: Same Catrina skull except more morbid. Not sure how to describe it xD
NOTE: In order for this to even get going, the candle has to be lit and from there the scent quickly makes its way down, like a creepy fog. Aaru can light the candle by simply touching the wick with his finger. when he wants to stop using his weapon, he blows the candle out.
NOTE: The scent from his candle can affect team mates if they are close enough so look out!
Page: Aaru has no magic he can use so he just throws his skull at targets with the hope that he can knock them out at least. Or if he's angry enough, he'll keep the skull in his hand while he tries to bash some one's face in.
Squire: Aaru is now able to use the beginning stages of his hallucination magic which will have a magic pool of 20 seconds and have a radius of 5ft. He can either use this attack a number of times 4 times for 5 seconds each, twice for 10 seconds each, or use it for the full 20 seconds. This will be basic hallucinations coming from the wax that drips from the skull. Its the scent that causes it, not the actual wax itself. The Hallucination can be anything from a rotting zombie of your best friend to staring death right in the face, scythe and all.
Knight: Aaru can now use the more advanced stages of his hallucination magic pool that's about 40 seconds with a radius of 10ft. He can use this attack anywhere from once to about 8 times for the full 40 seconds.The hallucinations will become even more terrifying and depending on the target, may cause self harm or even harm to other team mates due to the fact that teammates could take the shape of their worst fear or as the very thing their seeing at the time. The affected person can hallucinate figures and shapes that are not there as well. They cannot do both at once, but if the attack is used on the same person twice, the effect could be different.This does depend on the mental state of the target as well as any other factors from their life. Things that they fear would be a good start.
As far as colors go....Uhhhhmmmm....Maybe Purple for the primary and dark blue for secondary?
The images are mostly for inspiration. I'm not very good with the create an outfit thing so if the artist wants to do something different then that's fine by me x3
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Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2012 2:40 am
OPEN!!!! But Im still working on the knight section, but the civ is definetly ready for people to look at 83 Suggestions for the knight outfit would be appriciated too OwO
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Posted: Sun Nov 18, 2012 11:39 am
Hi, Viva! Let’s see about getting your quest ready for acceptance!
Since you haven’t completed the knight portion of the quest yet, I’m only going to be giving the civilian half a look! You can either leave this quest as strictly a civilian quest for now and we can work on getting that through and you can set up an upgrade quest once you’ve settled on what you want to do for the knight portion, or you can work on completing the knight form and then quote me for another look once you’re done with that! The choice is yours! Just know that I can’t put a trial stamp on this to have it looked at for acceptance until the knight portion is done and has been looked over and critiqued, or else removed for the time being and quested for in another thread!
Alrighty then! Let’s go!
Dmitry’s hobbies are looking good! They should offer plenty of opportunities for social interactions and meetings with other characters, which is definitely what we like to see when it comes to hobbies!
As for his virtues and flaws, for the most part they’re reading well, too! The only comments I have here are for “flirty” and his three flaws! At the moment, “flirty” is reading more like a flaw, so I would definitely suggest moving it there! That would normally leave your virtues and flaws unbalanced, but being “vain” and being “cocky” can often be synonymous, so you can easily merge those two flaws into one, shift “flirty” down, and you’ll still be nicely balanced!
I do have one more question, and the answer to this might be able to be added to his hobbies if you’re interested in adding any more! You mention that Dmity’s studying to be an architect. Why did he decide on that? Where does that interest come from and how does it tie into who he is?
That’s all for now! Once you’re done, you can go ahead and quote me and I’ll give this another look!
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Posted: Fri Nov 23, 2012 4:30 am
IM DONE 8D sorry it took me so long x3 Ive also added onto the knight section and finished it x3<3
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Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2012 2:04 pm
So sorry for the delay in getting back to you! Let's go ahead and try to get this wrapped up! Just a couple of things! Hobbies look good! Virtues and flaws look good now, too, except for a tiny bit in "Outgoing." Particularly the "no matter where he goes" and "he's always able to get customers or most class mates, etc." lines. It's just a problem of word choice! Right now it just seems as if Dmitry can always, always, always do these things and succeed at livening up the party or getting people to open up to him, when realistically this may not always be the case depending on who he's interacting with. It would be better if it read more like "no matter where he goes, he tries to get the party started" or "he likes to keep the fun going," and "he's usually able to get customers or most classmates to open up and participate." A question there, too. What would he do if he wasn't able to enliven things or get someone to open up? His laid back natures seems to imply that it wouldn't bother him at all, but that may be something you could add! NOW FOR HIS POWERED SIDE The desired outfit looks good! It certainly fits the appearance requirements of Gothic culture and Victorian for knights of Saturn. Unfortunately, red is not a color typically used for a knight of Saturn, though purple is certainly acceptable! You can see the color swatch for Saturn knights here! Those would be the colors our artists would work with in designing and coloring an outfit! As for his magic, keep in mind that knight magic should fit within the themes of the planets they serve, which for Saturn would be "Watchers, binders, and death." I'm having a little trouble seeing how causing headaches would fit in there, though creepy hallucinations is something we can work with! Also, keep in mind that knight magic works a bit differently than senshi magic! Senshi have a certain number of times they can perform their magic, whereas knights have a pool of magic they draw from! They can use their attack however many times they wish so long as the increments they break each attack up in do not exceed the total amount of time they have within their magic pool! You can read more about knight magic here and here! You've got the more passive aspect of knight magic down, so now it's just a matter of making sure it functions correctly with the magic pool and fits within the theme of Saturn!
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Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2014 8:56 pm
God what has it been? two years?! D: Im sorry ;-; but I hope this is what you were looking for<3 If not Ill change it. Im still a bit confused about the knights o3o
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Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2015 11:04 pm
Bumping so I can find him later<3
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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2015 5:58 am
Hi, Viva!! I'm so sorry you've waited so long for someone to take another look at this! That was totally my bad! Let's go ahead and get things rolling, shall we?? His civilian profile reads very well, so there shouldn't be any changes needed there! His powered side, though, still needs just a little bit of work! First off, you've got the stages mixed up a bit, Squire doesn't come before Page. The correct order is as follows: Page, Squire, Knight! Weapon looks good, and the magic he would have at his second stage/squire stage looks fine except that the timing is still reading as a Senshi attack. Auru should have a pool of magic he can draw from. So he could have a pool of magic that would last 20 seconds in one go, or he could split the uses up and have an attack last 10 seconds and use it twice, or 15 seconds leaving 5 seconds remaining for a second use, etc. Does that makes sense? It would be the same for his knight stage, although the pool of magic would be larger! 40 seconds seems fine for that! The radius might be a little large, though, so bump that down to about 10 ft! Otherwise I just have a couple of questions: what about this attack would cause someone to inflict harm on themselves or someone else? How do the hallucinations work? Do they hallucinate things and figures that aren't there, or does someone or something else take the shape of something they fear in their mind?
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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2015 10:53 pm
Youre good! Sometimes life gets the better of us! x3
I hope I got this correct, if not, I'll keep trying till I do! Thank you for the crit! <3
Aru's attacks Page: Aaru has no magic he can use so he just throws his skull at targets with the hope that he can knock them out at least. Or if he's angry enough, he'll keep the skull in his hand while he tries to bash some one's face in. Squire: Aaru is now able to use the beginning stages of his hallucination magic which will have a magic pool of 20 seconds and have a radius of 5ft. He can either use this attack a number of times 4 times for 5 seconds each, twice for 10 seconds each, or use it for the full 20 seconds. This will be basic hallucinations coming from the wax that drips from the skull. Its the scent that causes it, not the actual wax itself. The Hallucination can be anything from a rotting zombie of your best friend to staring death right in the face, scythe and all. Knight: Aaru can now use the more advanced stages of his hallucination magic pool that's about 40 seconds with a radius of 10ft. He can use this attack anywhere from once to about 8 times for the full 40 seconds.The hallucinations will become even more terrifying and depending on the target, may cause self harm or even harm to other team mates due to the fact that teammates could take the shape of their worst fear or as the very thing their seeing at the time. The affected person can hallucinate figures and shapes that are not there as well. They cannot do both at once, but if the attack is used on the same person twice, the effect could be different.This does depend on the mental state of the target as well as any other factors from their life. Things that they fear would be a good start.
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Posted: Tue Apr 14, 2015 3:20 am
Looking good! Just one more note! You don't have to limit yourself by detailing how many times and to what duration the attack can be used. All you have to note is how long his pool of magic lasts!
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Posted: Tue Apr 14, 2015 6:22 pm
Ahhh Hokay xD thats mostly for my reference too x3 What is the next step? D:
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Posted: Wed Apr 15, 2015 6:13 am
Next is this here trial stamp!  A GM will be around soon to take another look at this! Once you receive a full stamp, your quest will be moved to the Approved section!
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Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2015 2:33 pm
Thanks for your patience! He seems like a neat character, so I'm here to drop a full stamp! <3
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