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Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2012 8:24 am
Name: Jaysen Morrigan Grayson Nickname: 00 Jay - General 00 Jay-bird, Little Wing, Baby Bird, Songbird - Lance 00 McSwagger - Herself Age: 16 (Though she like's saying she's 3. Says its one hell of a conversation starter) Birthday: February 29th Sign: Piscies Gemstone:JadeBlood Type: O Fav. Food: Berries. Mainly Strawberries and Raspberries. Hated Food: Brown Sugar Carrots. YuckSchool: Meadowview Hobbies: Violin - Like her brother, Jaysen has picked up music. Though instead of the piano she plays the violin. Her mother first started her on this at a very young age. And in the beginning Jay loathed it. But she soon found that she grew to love it. Especially when she could play songs along side her brother's piano playing. This is pretty much a hobby. She's not really into recitals and such so she teaches herself. Birds - Jaysen absolutely adores birds. Like any little kid at one point in their life, Jaysen wanted to fly. And, just like any little kid. She tried. And was rewarded for her efforts with a broken arm. So, she found a new way to make her dream come true. Though she is young, Jaysen often frequents animal shelters and rehab centers to help with the birds. All kinds of birds too, from little birds like sparrows, to larger predatory types. There have been many times when she's brought her 'work' home with her as fosters. She would often read up on whatever bird she had brought home or worked with at the center. And while she loves all the types of birds equally, her favorite has always been the raven. Gymnastics - At an early age, Jaysen was enrolled in the local gymnastics program. Jay was signed up for this after her 'flying' attempt. If Jay has had a bad day, this is were she'll come to relax and unwind. There's just something about all the different exercises that calm her down. For those days she can't get to the gym.... well the trampoline get's used a lot. Virtues: Calm - Jaysen is always calm. That's not to say she doesn't get mad. She just doesn't sweat the small things. It's not that she think's that they arn't important, oh no, they are believe me they are. She just thinks it's better to remain calm and think about them instead of them plaguing your mind and causing you to freak out. Cause seriously, how are you gonna get crap done if you're freaking out? Sociable - Unlike her brother Jaysen is a social butterfly. She has no problems going up to people and just striking up a conversation. Jay could know you for a minute and she'd talk to you like she's know you her whole life. She'll sit with you whether you need to rant and rave about something that happened of even if you don't want to talk. It's all about being there for someone. Confident - Jay has a lot of confidence in herself. And in people too. She's always trying to push people to do their best. Even if the situation doesn't exactly call for being up beat, she tries her best to be so anyway. Someone's gotta do the cheering up right? Jay is often encouraging people to try something new or boost their confidence in something. A lot of her own confidence stems from the confidence of her friends. If she can make them feel better and confident in what they are doing, she feels confident in what she does and feels good about herself. Flaws:Tranquil Fury - While Jaysen is hard to anger. When you finally cross that threshold, your in trouble. While she will never raise her voice higher then a normal level, unless she is beyond the line. She's not afraid to tell you what she thinks either. She doesn't care if you choose not to listen to her. Jay just want's to get her point across. After that she doesn't give a s**t what you do or if you choose to act on her words. Once she reaches this point, she is done with you for the duration of whatever they are doing. This could last anywhere from a few hours to a couple of days. Though at that given time it's more of a 'gtfo of my face.' People will often get mad at her for when she's not yelling back, especially if they were looking for a screaming match. Obstinate - Growing up with two brother's has made Jaysen stubborn. She had to learn to stand up for herself. God help you if you happen to trigger this. It's long been said that the Grayson line is filled with stubborn fools. While she isn't quite as hard headed as her brothers, she has been known to put up a fight before caving and going with the flow again. Getting to cave depends on who's trying to make her cave. And in a few rare cases, what it is she's doing. If it's someone close to her, like her brother or her best friend then it's likely that she'd cave fairly quickly. If it's someone she's just met or does not like, than you might as well talk to a wall. Lapse In Judgement - Every now and then... Jay has her moments. While she looks back on them like it was the greatest thing ever, she has her moments. She tends to get in over her head sometimes. It's not that she gets cocky or over confident, it's more of she just thinks they can handle it. It's a simple mistake, anyone makes them. She doesn't always mean to drag people in with her either. It just happens. Most time's she just goes down on her own. PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION Eyes: Bright Wide Crystal Blue EyesHair: She shares her brothers Platinum Blonde hair. Her's though, has a slight natural wave to it.. She normally wears it down so that it hangs down her back. If she's powered up though, she wears it in a high pony tail with some bangs, both long and short in size hanging in her face. For Length, if it were down it would come down to her knee caps (Think Sailor Pluto, just minus the bun on her head), if it were up in a pony tail it would come to about her rear end (Think Sailor Venus or Mars)Wave Reference 2 || Wave Reference 3 || Bang Reference || PERFECT REF OF PONYTAIL/WAVEFace: Clothes: Polyvore Concept**Jaysen takes care of three ravens. Which she has named Diablo, Nevermore and Poe
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Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2012 8:26 am
Senshi: Sailor Lellouch, DMC of Ravens! Challenge: Quote the Raven, Nevermore. Fuku Colour: Main Color: Black Secondary Color: Midnight Blue Extra Color: Silver Fuku: ** See Hair for details about Senshi form hair**Collar -- CC Bow -- Back Bow - Translucent Black, With long tendrils that come down. RefBodice -- Black As for the overlay. That can be CC, as I don't know what to do with it. A black to blue gradient would be nice though?? Sleeves -- CC I THINK. Brooch -- I have no general idea of what I want this too look like, though I was always partial to the Starlight's Brooch Bottoms -- A skirt I think. Tiara -- Silver, styled like This. The stone can be the midnight blue. Choker -- THIS.Shoes -- Like This. They come up to her knee caps. Any gold pieces would be midnight blue/silver. The pattern can be changed to whatever. Gloves -- Black Fingerless Gloves . Bracers can have the same design on them as the boots. Accessories -- Artist is free to add what ever they want. Attacks: Sailor Scout Attack: Lellouch Congress Saying the name of her attack, Lellouch touches the charm on her choker. Lellouch pulls some energy in the shape of the charm and throws it at feet of the attacker. Once it hits the ground, it explodes into a fury of raven feather's temporarily disorients the person. This attack has a five foot radius and lasts for 20 seconds. She can use this attack up too twice, should she choose to use it a second time, she breaks the charm off her collar rather then gathering it. Super Sailor Scout Attack: Lellouch Unkindness This is just an upgraded version of her super attack. Though now it has an eight foot radius. Though the duration time and number of uses is still the same. Eternal Sailor Attack: Lellouch Conspiracy Lellouch points upward and calls out the name of the attack. In the sky above her, a spectral raven forms and dives down, soaring towards Lellouch’s opponent and slamming into them. Should multiple people be clustered close together (within about a foot of the main target), they will all be struck. This attack only happens once. **Image Courtesy of Doll Divine
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Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2012 8:28 am
FamilyVictor "Vice" Grayson - Father, 40 00 Status: Alive, Estranged. Does not talk to. Nicole Grayson - Mother, 38 00 Status: Alive, Estranged. Does not talk to. Lance Damien Grayson - Brother, 17 00 Status: Alive. Mason "Mace" Grayson - Lance's Identical Twin Brother, 17 00 Status: Unknown Mr. Kent - Old family friend, 43 00Status: Alive, Currently living with. Selina Kent - Old family friend, 39 00Status: Alive, Currently living with. Kyle Kent - Family Friend's Son, 15 00Status: Alive, Currently living with. (Much to his chagrin) Andrea Kent - Family Friend's Daughter, 13 00Status: Alive, Currently living with.
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Posted: Thu May 16, 2013 8:49 pm
Hi Morby! You’ve been working on Jay for a while, so let’s get started on this!
ON THE CIVILIAN SIDE:
“Confident” as it’s written comes across more as “encouraging!” While you mention she’s got a lot of confidence in herself, you mostly focus on how she channels it at other people; that can definitely be a facet, but I’d like to see a little more about Jay’s confidence in herself!
As it is, I’m not sure “Tranquil Fury” is really a flaw? It’s not necessarily something people would look down on her for. You do mention that once she gets angry, she doesn’t care what people do – is she totally done with them? Does she hold grudges a lot?
For “Obstinate,” how much does it take to make her cave? You mention she does eventually; how much exactly does it take?
Also, I’d like to see a third flaw, just to balance with her virtues! Looking at them, I wonder if Jay ever gets pushy – especially if she thinks she’s trying to help/encourage people?
ON THE POWERED SIDE
Given that DMC bodices are detached, she can’t really have a shoulder-piece on her bodice; however I am pretty sure she could still have feather-type “sleeves” that aren’t attached to the bodice. I also don’t see mention of an overlay; is it meant to be CC?
For her powers! The biggest thing I’d like to see is a more direct connection to her sphere for the Senshi and Super Senshi powers. Maybe she develops a visual of feathers around her eyes, or something like that? Also, I’d like to see a more specific time limit on that disorientation. How long does it last? How disoriented is she? Just dizzy, or more?
That's everything I see! Let me know when you've made changes and I'll come back around for another look~
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Posted: Thu May 16, 2013 10:06 pm
YOU KNOW HALF OF WHAT IMA SAY. Thanks AIM. But I'ma say it here anyway. Civ Side: Confident: Uuuuuuum okay. Some of her confidence reflects on how her friends feel. If she can make her friends feel good, Jay feels good about herself. Tranquil Fury - She will be done with them for the duration of whatever it is they are doing. Jay will talk to them again at a later point but as for right then, it's gtfo of her face. Obstinate - Uuuuh. It depends on who's trying to make her cave (And in some rare cases what they are trying to make her cave on doing). If it were someone like her brother or her bff, then she's prone to cave rather quickly. If it were someone she didn't know/like. Theeen they might as well talk to a wall. Powered Side: Sleeves: Iiii will fix that, I just really liked the way that looked. Overlay Thing: Okay, at the time I hadn't realized that it had to be an overlay. I just thought SOMETHING on their person needed to be transparent. So when I originally came up with it, I made her back bow the transparent thingy.. ATTACKS: Ima work on those. /dies face first. I THINK IM FORGETTING SOMETHING. BUT IT'S IN OUR AIM SO.
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Posted: Fri May 17, 2013 12:50 pm
Yay, looks good to me! A GM will be by with any final tweaks or a full stamp~
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Posted: Sat May 18, 2013 2:37 pm
Hi, Morbid! There are just a couple of things I want to see a little more on before leaving a stamp! I think with her "Tranquil Fury" flaw it could go either way between being a virtue or being a flaw. Having a bit of a temper can certainly be a flaw, but she seems to take a calmer and therefore potentially more positive approach to her anger. Whether she's saying something particularly mean or not, that tranquility or calmness could come across to someone better than if she was screaming her lungs out at them. That's not to say this can't be a flaw, because you can certainly make it work, I would just like to see a little more about what would make people dislike this trait of hers! Have people gotten frustrated with her calm anger before? Perhaps people looking to pick a fight end up disappointed when they don't really get what they were expecting? What are some, if any, lasting effects of this flaw, particularly in the realm of her relationships with other people? Lastly, two things regarding her powered side! 1.) How many times can she use her attacks in battle? Considering she has to break the charm off of her choker and throw it, it seems as if she'd only be able to do this once per power-up, which seems a bit limiting! 2.) What sort of damage do you intend for her Eternal attack to do? Along those same longs, how serious do you intend for this damage to be? Are we talking just scratches and bruises or the potential for something more?
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Posted: Sat May 18, 2013 3:18 pm
<<333 Hello darling! Thank you for taking a look over my quest. Tranquil Fury - People have definitely gotten on her for not being loud and explosive when she's pissed off.. But being calm is just how she rolls. Shes always been like this. xD But yeah, she'll also do it when she knows people what a screaming match as she can be a bit of a troll sometimes. Any lasting effects would just be that she doesn't talk or ignores someone completely anywhere from a few hours to a couple of days. Attacks: For the first stage it is indeed a one time use only. For the second I had originally thought of the charm sometime... 'regenerating' a second time. But I wasn't sure how to accomplish this or if it was just two OP for a Super Senshi. Did you mean this about her Eternal as well? XD I wasn't totally sure. Eternal: Eternal will probably do no more than minor/major bruising and scratching. Possibly a sprain? but nothing serious like a broken bone. D: Ouch.
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Posted: Sat May 18, 2013 3:34 pm
You are very welcome!!! :3 Alright, Tranquil Fury should be good then! Just add a little bit of that into the flaw, particularly about her knowing people might like a screaming match instead, and then how others might respond to getting the silent treatment for a few hours to a couple of days and it should be good to go! And yup, we like to see how many times an attack can be used per battle for each stage! If you'd like to have her only be able to use it once in her first stage, you can certainly do that! But you're also be welcome to up that to two if you'd like! Two times is pretty typical of first-level senshi (three within reason)! Super stage is usually two times as well, with Eternal typically being just once, though some might be able to manage a second use of their Eternal attack, it would just be extensively draining! If you did want to get more use out of it, a way to keep her choker charm in tact might be if touching it/pulling on it the first time resulted in her gathering some magic/energy in the shape of the charm and then throwing that to enact the attack! Her final use of it (the second time, if you'd like to go with that) could always be the time in which her charm breaks if you wanted to keep that part of the attack but still get more uses out of it!
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Posted: Sat May 18, 2013 4:13 pm
Alright!! All added I think. How's that look?? For the charm first two stages, would it be too over powered if I made them both a max of 2? Because I really would like to get more use out of it cause I thought it was a pretty cool idea. I believe her Eternal is a one time use only. Idk why, I like keeping Eternal to one for some reason no matter what it is they do.. Though what do you think is more appropriate for the first two stages? I REALLY like the idea of gathering some energy from it. I hadn't thought of that!! Now I'm just messing around with a clothing look for her. xD
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Posted: Sat May 18, 2013 5:07 pm
Tranquil Fury looks good now! Thank you! Two times per stage for Regular and Super definitely seem appropriate! So long as you're satisfied with that this should be ready for a stamp now! Just let me know~! :3
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Posted: Sat May 18, 2013 5:27 pm
I am beyond satisfied. x3 Thank you for helping me with the flaw and those attacks! <3333
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Posted: Sat May 18, 2013 5:31 pm
You're definitely welcome!! :3 ACCEPTED
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