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Erm, sworday, there's a specific forum titled Approval where you must post your profile for it to be reviewed. Once it is accepted by an appropriate moderator, they will move it to the forum of your character's species. I've checked the records in reference to the post date, and this has not occurred and you've made no effort to indicate that this profile has been approved outside of the guild. I've moved your profile to the appropriate subforum until it has been approved.

The following is just unsolicited advice-I can't approve your profile-but I would actually expand on your character's shikai. The physical description is a fraction of a sentence, and you haven't mentioned the capacity of its most basic ability, nor have you stated what happens to the energy after it is dispersed. Does it gather? Can it be absorbed? How fast can this ability drain energy and does it have a limit? Why does it only work on barriers? I speak from experience when I say that power-drain abilities are difficult to pull off. Especially when you also have the ability to absorb it as it is an inherently powerful advantage, with you controlling the flow of power. But if you set limitations, it can work nicely. Many people discredit it as they see it as a hassle, though.

Furthermore, the shikai doesn't seem to even remotely relate to the bankai-the former being an absorption zanpakutō with the latter being a sound zanpakutō. I would really take a moment to decide which zanpakutō you want to have and then work to fine tune it. Especially since the only two techniques you've listed are a bit cliché. And on that note, the second Bankai ability needs serious revision. As I read it, it appears to be an all-powerful technique that utterly devastates everything around, irregardless of the power. I cant think of anyone who would approve that in any situation. Even massively overpowered characters like species leaders have limits and cannot destroy everything around them in one attack.

Umm, while I know this isn't an actual problem, I read this profile expecting to really be able to relate this character to a wolfhound and I actually really didn't see much justification for her nickname.

I feel like this profile is very bare, really. Like you did this after a sleepless night and didn't really care about the results. I would suggest going back and making grammar edits and generally adding fine details and personality to this character. Certain areas such as her bio and personality should be revised so they read more smoothly, and I would overall just strive to add detail to descriptions. Try to get in at least a small handful of sentences for all abilities and appearances, including wardrobe and tools. And probably you would do well to set and follow a theme.

I hope my advice and input, unrequested as it may be, will help you further refine this character. I'd really like to see where you decide to go from here with her. Just edit it into the title or announce it here when you're ready for a review.

That's a noble and understandable idea, and I really commend you on it. It's not often that people "downgrade," as it were. I'd still love it if you tried to give this character some more attention. You could really commit to her moniker more and expand on her abilities. You can make a weak character with a few named attacks. She could know every possible technique but with a small amount of spiritual power, she would still be easy to dispatch.

But I can respect your decision to create a lesser character.

Can you clarify her mask's time limit a bit? How many full posts? How does that number go down during combat?

Also! She has a focus in Hakuda so does she know any techniques?

i dont see anything wrong with approving this as is, so then, i do just that, this profile is approved, welcome to the masked army i'll speak with you about which army you want to be in, if you want to be in one, and other things.