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 Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 11:41 am
welcome to my quest for charlotte anne riley
a puella magica!
you can find all her information below!
crit status
open!
history has been added;
please tell me if it sounds good/believable!
inspiration
here are just a few things that i find inspiring when thinking of charlotte.
moth to a light - betty and the boy
black swan, the movie
swan lake image
dresses image
black swan wings
ballet dress
white swan dress
human - ellie goulding
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Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 11:50 am
YOUNG GIRL Name: Charlotte Anne Riley
Color: ♥ - #CAE7FF Powder Blue
Age: Seventeen years old.
Nationality: American (Father is a third-generation immigrant from England, Mother is a first-generation immigrant from France).
Home/Financial Status: Upper-class (substantial money from her mother, managed well by her father).
School: Rosaline Academy.
Personality: Charlotte has grown up being taught how to be a perfect lady. Quiet and composed at nearly all times, she rarely exhibits outbursts of emotion. If she becomes angry, she will simply smile and take it in stride, often waiting until she is alone to act upon that anger. However, despite this "training," she is by no means demure or weak. She makes direct eye contact, speaks in a clear voice, and holds herself like a responsible young lady. She is strong, and it takes quite a lot for her to doubt herself. She will also not hesitate to speak her mind, albeit in a fairly polite way. Instead of direct insults, it may even seem like a compliment. She can be very passive-aggressive if she wants to, but she's usually sneaky about it.
She can, however, find herself doing whatever someone asks if it seems like the results will benefit her. On some occasions, this people-pleasing attribute surfaces merely for the satisfaction of helping someone. However, most times, it is to benefit herself. She has her father's ruthless drive, and she strives to be the best in whatever she does. If this requires sacrifice or sucking up to someone (AKA brown-nosing a bit), she'll do it. But she also will not hesitate to throw someone under the bus for her own personal gain. It's not very nice, or ladylike for that matter, but she does it anyway. Because of this, Charlotte's friends, while she loves them, are not very close to her in actuality. She is friendly and amusing when she doesn't need or want something, but if they stand in her way, she will not hesitate to push them aside. It would be nice if, someday, I could find a friend for her that she cares about enough to not throw under the bus, but at this point, it seems unlikely. While there is no defining trauma in her past that made her this way, she has seen how becoming too close to others can hurt you, through her mother. The woman got much too close to her agent, and it almost tore the family apart. So, she has decided that self-advancement can usually come without relying too heavily on others.
This drive of hers, however negative on others, is very beneficial to her. She got into ballet at a very young age, and has stuck with it. She excels in it, often at the price of self-sacrifice and pain, but she must be the best, at any cost. She's won numerous awards and quite the sparkling reputation, but she constantly sees herself as needing improvement. She hopes to, one day, become a famous ballet dancer known world-wide. But she thinks that she still has a long way to go, and indeed she does.
But don't worry, Charlotte is not all business. She regularly lets very loose at parties and when around good friends, even taking the occasional stupid risk every now and then, but whenever she is under the watchful eyes of her parents, she is perfectly composed and polite. She has come to resent her parents, despite her love for them, and wishes that they would simply let her be herself. All their guidance and watching has helped her through life, yes, and has made her a strong young woman, but she longs to be able to let loose and be free like some of her friends. She is almost eighteen, after all. She goes through alternating phases of rebellion and acceptance, usually switched by her doing something reckless and realizing that, hey, maybe her parents do have a good idea. But after a while of dealing with their nagging, letting it roll onto her back, she snaps and the cycle begins again. It's tiring, and she will occasionally drop into a low point, but she will come out of it soon enough, realizing that it's not all bad. However, is she were to be given complete freedom, all at once, she probably would not know what to do with herself. She could easily lose control of the situation, too excited about the freedom she's been given, and get into very troubling situations.
But Charlotte views her friends, those that she has and spends time with regularly, as a sort of safe haven or relief from her parents and society. She can be fun and light with them, and not have to worry about looking ladylike or acting properly. However, she is not close enough to them to get too attached. She mostly uses them for her personal relief, not to make them happy. When around her friends, Charlotte acts much like every other teenage girl: gossipy, friendly, and fun. She'll really talk about or do anything that does not directly relate to her parents, in an attempt to escape them. She also tries not to talk too much to her friends about her family, wanting to avoid discussions of that sort. If she is ever asked about her family, or specifically her parents, she will give short, very non-informative answers, and then quickly change the subject. Even more, when she is actually fully at ease and having fun, Charlotte opens up considerably. She will reveal things about herself that she would not normally, or even drop the "young lady" act and behave quite freely. She can, however, become a bit drunk on this behavior, and may return home still in this mindset at times. If this happens, her parents will give her a stern, disapproving look, and a fight may ensue. And then, like clockwork, the cold, polite facade returns.
Appearance: Tall, slim, and graceful, Charlotte takes after her mother considerably. The only hint of her father being a contributor is her dark hair; everything else came from her mother. Her skin is a soft peachy shade, and her eyes are dramatic and rimmed with naturally-dark, thick lashes. She rarely looks anything but fashionable, but won't hesitate to go with something comfortable when she's merely staying in the house. Her light blue eyes are striking against dark brown hair, even more attention drawn to them by the very small birthmark under her left eye. She wears her hair in long, slightly wavy layers (the longest of which just reaching her waist) with pieced bangs across her forehead that dust her lashes. Think something like this, but a dark, chocolaty brown, like #462900. As far as clothing goes, Charlotte strays more toward calm, pastel colors, but she is not against using a pop of color to really draw attention. A big fan of lace and draping fabrics, Charlotte looks very ethereal and feminine on most days.
character closet (clothing that charlotte either wants or has in her possession).
History: Charlotte was born into extravagance, to Donovan and Penelope Riley. She practically came out of her mother's womb with not a silver spoon in her hand, but a solid gold one. Treasured and spoiled as the pair's "princess", she was given everything she wanted and denied no whim. By some miracle, this has not made her a brat. However, she is very used to getting what she wants, when she wants it; this probably also contributed to her "I'll knock anyone aside that I have to" habit.
In her kindergarten days, her mother took her to a ballet recital of a family friend's daughter. Charlotte immediately fell in love, and has stuck with the activity ever since then. Incredibly driven as always, she has pushed herself so hard that she has gone through numerous stints in the hospital as a result of exhaustion, dehydration, and injuries. She realizes that these setbacks certainly do not help her, and may even hinder her progress, which only makes her angrier and more determined to prove that thought wrong. She tries to avoid injuries, she does, and so exhaustion and dehydration become much more common. She is much more likely to injure herself after a while of trying to avoid doing so, when she becomes tired and sloppy, or even frustrated. Her feet are quite messy, from all the toe-standing, but she considers the scars to be badges of honor, and is very proud of them. However, this does not mean she will readily show them off.
Her brother, Oliver, was born when she was seven, and took the spotlight off of her for quite some time. While she resents this, she has gotten over it by now. However, on the occasion that he gets more praise than she does, Charlotte becomes angry. If she was trying so hard, and Oliver was just a useless baby, why should he get more attention than she did? She was the princess! She went through a period of disliking the infant, before she realized that the hype was only going to last until he was no longer so cute and helpless, and came to love her younger brother (despite his future habit of terrorizing her). Until he was born, Charlotte never had to share the spotlight. To this day, she is not very keen on sharing anything, especially attention. Now that he's older, Charlotte is much more apt to spend time with him, albeit not in front of many people (because that would allow for questions about him, and not about her. He's really a very nice boy, when he's not terrorizing his sister, and is quite the prodigy himself. He plays the piano, and the two often team up for small performances in front of family. This creates quite a bit of tension, however, as it is not always wanted on Charlotte's part. If he's playing the piano, people may begin to focus on his work, instead of hers. However, he does not seem to feel the same pressure that Charlotte does to do well, and merely does so because he wants to. He may, perhaps, want to live up to the large shadow that Charlotte has inadvertently cast upon him, but it is not clear at this point.
Enrolled in only the best schools from kindergarten onward, and spoiled by nannies and maids, Charlotte became used to a life of decadence and privilege. She excelled in school from the very start, much to her parents' happiness, however she did not directly challenge herself, and coasted through with the required classes under her belt. But her grades dipped in the last year of middle school, when her mother became too involved with her agent. It was in the last years of her modeling career, as fate would have it, as the industry does not generally look with kindness upon those that are married and have a near-affair with another man. Charlotte's father, upon finding out about this little indiscretion (the blame placed equally upon both the agent and Penelope), he had the man fired and blacklisted, and has never truly forgiven Penelope. The fact that she actually agreed to do those things with her agent was like a slap to the face, and it nearly ended in divorce. Fortunately, they decided to stay together for the sake of their children. But Penelope's career would never recover. Charlotte learned, right then and there, to never get that close to someone. Ever.
Charlotte wanted to see her parents happy again, and so she devised a plan. When high school came around, she was tougher, more self-sufficient, and more determined than she had ever been previously. She was determined to please her parents by proving that she was worth staying together for, that she would be a good daughter to them. She decided right then that she had to succeed at any cost (this eventually became less of a wanted fate, and more driven by the fact that her parents constantly pressured her). After all, she only had four years until college, and needed to start preparing right away. Even if she had all the money in the world, she would not succeed if a college would not accept her. She may have been getting straight A's up until that point, but now her drive to succeed has escalated to the point of anything less than 100% is not good enough. So, if she caught someone cheating, she reported them (though not out of decency; she merely wanted to be in good standing with the teachers, wanting to be extra sure that she was well-liked, even if she was already a wonderful student). If someone stood in her way of getting a good grade, such as on a partner project, she would intimidate them into pulling their weight (and possibly some of her own), lest she report them to the teacher for slacking and have their grade brought down on said assignment. She let no one stand in her way, and she has become quite the impressive student as a result.
Overall, Charlotte does not seem to realize that she indeed has a very, very good life, one that many would covet and trade theirs for in a heartbeat. But all she sees are flaws. She does not get good enough grades (even though all of her marks are A's), she is not a good enough dancer (despite awards and the like), and she is not a good enough daughter (her parents constantly pressure her, making her think that she can always do better). All of this combines into a slightly pessimistic view of herself and her life, despite the privileges and love she receives without much work.
Charlotte now prepares for another step in her life: becoming a magical girl. Kyuubey approached her, one day on a stroll through the park, and the creature's deal sounded very appealing to the young woman. She could have anything she wanted, end world hunger even! But Charlotte wanted something much more small-scale than that, albeit much more important to her, individually: freedom. Her parents had long been very protective of their only daughter, wanting to protect her from the dangers of the real world, but this had caused Charlotte to become bitter and resentful, jealous of the freedom some of her "friends" enjoyed. She longed to do what she wanted, be who she wanted, and think for herself. Sure, she had actually been doing this for a few years now, but she still felt the ever-looming, watchful gaze of her parents on her back, their breath on the nape of her neck. And so, Charlotte's journey begins.
Family:
Donovan Riley - Father - Big-time CEO - Forty-seven
Charlotte's father is all business, in every aspect of his life. While he does not hesitate to tell his daughter that he loves her, he is never gushy or emotional about it. He works late into the night nearly every night, and is gone on business trips for most of the year. He does not play a large role in Charlotte's life, but she does care about his opinion.
Penelope Riley (Vanguard) - Mother - Former supermodel - Forty-two
Charlotte's mother cares deeply for her daughter, and has been known to go on random shopping sprees, bringing home ridiculous amounts of clothing for her daughter. She longs to be as beautiful as she once was (which has actually not changed too much), and so she spends exorbitant amounts of money on beauty products and the like. She has never gone under the knife, however, and refuses to. She can often come off as overbearing, not wanting her daughter to succumb to society's pressures as she did when she was younger. She can worry about the littlest things, but she loves her daughter very much, and only wants the best for her.
Oliver Riley - Brother - Student - Ten
Charlotte's little brother, and the very bane of her existence. She loves him, she really does, but it is the classic sibling relationship. She finds him mildly annoying, but will not hesitate to defend him. He loves his big sister and looks up to her quite a bit, but also loves to tease and torment her. His irritant of choice is pranks, and it's become a bit of a hobby, much to Charlotte's chagrin.
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Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 11:51 am
PUELLA MAGI  Language: French.
Desires: Charlotte wants to be perfect. She wants to be all that her parents desired in a child, the perfect young lady, the perfect student, and the perfect daughter (if only so they'll get off her back a little). But she knows that, as long as she harbors these resentments inside of her, she cannot achieve this. She would most likely wish to be the perfect student, as that is what her parents are most concerned about at this point, but I could easily see this affecting her negatively. This new-found perfection in school would be in stark contrast to the rest of her life, highlighting how imperfect she is at everything else, even if it is by a very small margin. This would drive Charlotte crazy as she tries to cover these gaps, but is never fully able to (at least in her mind).
Emblem: ☾ - Crescent. This is used to both represent the slice of a chakram, and Charlotte as a person. I'd prefer it to be more like this (without the star), closer to being a complete circle. This represents Charlotte's view of herself as being almost perfect, and striving to fill that hole. The moon's cycle, from new to full and back again, also seems to represent Charlotte's cycle of accepting her parents' concerns and pressures, and then rebelling against them.
Weapon: Chakrams (something simple and clean like this, but with a cross-shaped grip in the middle, instead of a wave).
Type of Magic: Charlotte is skilled in the art of replication, both of herself, and other objects. She cannot, however, replicate another person. However, these replications are often short-lived and usually occur in small numbers. The effect on her soul gem depends on how many replicas she makes in a given amount of time, as well as the size of said replicas. Creating more requires more energy, and so she usually makes two or three at a time, recovers, and then makes more. The duration of said replicas does not appear to play a significant role in the corruption of her soul gem, as most of the energy consumed by the replicas is expended in the creation, not maintenance.
Outfit: I think something inspired by ballet would fit her very well, given her quiet, sort of graceful way of carrying herself (and her ballet hobby). I feel very inspired by this picture, and I rather like the idea of a partially-open tutu. It probably shouldn't be quite so revealing in the chest, as Charlotte is a strong believer in the "less is more" philosophy, but I do really like the style of that outfit being leotard-based. A corset might be nice as well, or a bustier, or some combination of the two. Bows are cute, very cute. I don't have much of an idea as to the complete design of her outfit, but I hope to put up a few sketches of ideas soon. I'm also not sure how her symbol would play into her outfit, so feel free to put it wherever you think looks best. A high collar like that might be nice, and I think a pair of ballet slipper-like heels would be interesting, as well! You know, with the laces up her legs?
Another option, albeit still ballet-related, is to base her largely off of the classic swan lake situation. Due to the fact that Charlotte is almost like two people (a polite, reserved, sweet young lady on the outside, and a darker, more resentful and ruthless young woman underneath), I think it fits very well with the black swan versus white swan dynamic. A pair of wings (useless, simply for decoration) might be nice, as well as a headpiece made of feathers? How you work the white and black swans into it is up to the artist, but black should probably play a slightly larger role, based on the frequency of the two sides of Charlotte's personalities.
** Example image by carcarchu!
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Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2012 9:07 pm
just reserving one more just in case!
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Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2012 7:35 am
Hey Cynic! 8D
You have some really cool ideas for Charlotte-- I like the French influence she has, and I think it's really interesting that she has to deal with pressures to be ladylike as well as societal expectations from her family and school. Very cool!
What I'd like to know more about in her personality is how she copes with her parents' expectations. It sounds like she really wants to not be so ruled by having to keep it together and be composed all the time, but thus far (beyond being able to let loose at parties) I don't see too much of how Charlotte deals with the pressure. Does she just accept that this is the way that things are going to have to be? Or is she rebelling in small ways that her parents don't know about (doing risky things, being outrageous/totally not composed with good friends, etc.)? If Charlotte really does want to have more freedom, then maybe her wish should be more motivated by that than a need for friendship-- wouldn't she want the ability to be in charge of her own life that fighting witches allows her?
If you do want to center her wish around gaining true friends, then I'd like to hear more about Charlotte's relationships with her current friends. She seems like a nice person on the outside, but it also seems like she can be very brutal when it comes to sacrificing people for what she wants if need be. Does she have a true friend, someone that she would never betray? Did she have one once that betrayed her (or something) and has made her much more leery of trusting people? I think we need to hear more about what causes her to not get close to people (at least, it's sounding like she has a lot of trouble being close to people) in order to understand her better. I'd also like to know her thoughts on her current friends. Does she see them as a refuge-- people that she can be herself around, but also that she wouldn't hesitate to betray if it benefited her? I'm a little unsure of how that would work-- again, I think we need to know more about how Charlotte views her friends to get a better perspective here.
I'd also like to know what Charlotte wants to do with her life. Does she have any ideas about the future, does she excel in any subjects in school, or sports? She's very good at striving to be the best at what she does, so what is she best at?
I really like her relationship with her parents: how she respects and sees how they're helping her out, but how she also longs to be able to do her own thing. What would Charlotte do if she was given complete freedom?
Hope this helps and good luck! <3
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2012 12:49 pm
Saint-Cinq Hey Cynic! 8D You have some really cool ideas for Charlotte-- I like the French influence she has, and I think it's really interesting that she has to deal with pressures to be ladylike as well as societal expectations from her family and school. Very cool! What I'd like to know more about in her personality is how she copes with her parents' expectations. It sounds like she really wants to not be so ruled by having to keep it together and be composed all the time, but thus far (beyond being able to let loose at parties) I don't see too much of how Charlotte deals with the pressure. Does she just accept that this is the way that things are going to have to be? Or is she rebelling in small ways that her parents don't know about (doing risky things, being outrageous/totally not composed with good friends, etc.)? If Charlotte really does want to have more freedom, then maybe her wish should be more motivated by that than a need for friendship-- wouldn't she want the ability to be in charge of her own life that fighting witches allows her? If you do want to center her wish around gaining true friends, then I'd like to hear more about Charlotte's relationships with her current friends. She seems like a nice person on the outside, but it also seems like she can be very brutal when it comes to sacrificing people for what she wants if need be. Does she have a true friend, someone that she would never betray? Did she have one once that betrayed her (or something) and has made her much more leery of trusting people? I think we need to hear more about what causes her to not get close to people (at least, it's sounding like she has a lot of trouble being close to people) in order to understand her better. I'd also like to know her thoughts on her current friends. Does she see them as a refuge-- people that she can be herself around, but also that she wouldn't hesitate to betray if it benefited her? I'm a little unsure of how that would work-- again, I think we need to know more about how Charlotte views her friends to get a better perspective here. I'd also like to know what Charlotte wants to do with her life. Does she have any ideas about the future, does she excel in any subjects in school, or sports? She's very good at striving to be the best at what she does, so what is she best at? I really like her relationship with her parents: how she respects and sees how they're helping her out, but how she also longs to be able to do her own thing. What would Charlotte do if she was given complete freedom? Hope this helps and good luck! <3
First off, I tried to add a bit to how she deals with her parents. I hadn't completely worked this out yet, as I think it would be good to just have her react as certain things happen, but it is a good idea to have a foundation as to how she would deal with it.
Also, I meant to change her wish to be about freedom, but forgot. It's fixed now!
I did, however, write a little more about her relationship with her friends. While she does use them as a bit of a relief, she does not necessarily do it to let them have a good time; that's not her main goal. She goes to them in order to make herself feel better. I also added a blurb about the cause of her detachment, but she never personally had anything bad happen to her, rather she experienced the pitfall of her mother's mistake.
I also wrote a little bit about her ballet career, and hopefully that makes sense with the outfit influences I listed; somehow I forgot to explain that.
Lastly, I thought you brought up a very interesting question, given her reaction to freedom if she were to get it. I hope that my explanation makes sense!
Thank you so much, again!
If you'd like to take another look, my changes are the underlined parts. <3
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2012 6:12 pm
I must tell you that direct links to Zerochan - or any image board, actually - break, so the ballet outfit you linked to is broken. Try putting it on Photobucket, tinypic, imageshack, or something. Or link to the page and not the image.
I really like her personality. It sounds balanced and believable. I know girls like this.
I like the French theme throughout too.
Her emblem confuses me a bit. I know the chakram is her weapon, but usually the emblems relate to the person herself, like how Kyoko has her religious symbol, Sayaka has the music note because she likes music because she likes this guy who likes music, and Madoka has the ribbon, because her mom gave her ribbons. Does she have a personal connection to it, besides it being her weapon? Like does it symbolize her personality or something? Maybe I'm over thinking it.
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2012 8:40 pm
Tenko72 I must tell you that direct links to Zerochan - or any image board, actually - break, so the ballet outfit you linked to is broken. Try putting it on Photobucket, tinypic, imageshack, or something. Or link to the page and not the image. I really like her personality. It sounds balanced and believable. I know girls like this. I like the French theme throughout too. Her emblem confuses me a bit. I know the chakram is her weapon, but usually the emblems relate to the person herself, like how Kyoko has her religious symbol, Sayaka has the music note because she likes music because she likes this guy who likes music, and Madoka has the ribbon, because her mom gave her ribbons. Does she have a personal connection to it, besides it being her weapon? Like does it symbolize her personality or something? Maybe I'm over thinking it.
and thanks for letting me know about zerochan;
it's been acting funky lately. >:T
you brought up a good point about the emblem, and so i changed it a bit.
i still kept it as a crescent, but explained a bit more how it relates to Charlotte as a person.
thank you again!
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 5:23 pm
Nice! I read through your changes and I really like where you're taking Charlotte and her relationships. She makes a lot more sense to me now with regards to her friends and her freedom. : D And yeah, I was wondering if she did ballet! I like the tie-in. As far as the emblem goes-- you could even think about it as a moon striving for completion, too. :3 The moon is a very mysterious symbol (which works with Charlotte's ability to hide things from her friends or parents) and can also represent a change between two extremes-- new and full-- or Charlotte swinging back between strict rules and freedom. The crescent is kinda like a moon in balance, though maybe leaning more towards one side (freedom?) than the other (control?). Again, totally up to you what you want to do with this, but I'm really liking where you're going with her thus far! 8D ALSO I just realized that you put up a history section. Nice! I think it makes a lot of sense and gave me a much better insight into the way that she deals with friends. I would be careful with her intimidation, though, since it's difficult to both be popular and also to be a teacher's pet. Definitely possible, though. I found one typo that I think should be corrected came out of her mother's womb with not a silver spoon in her mother,I think "hand" is what should replace the second "mother." xD But yeah, overall, I really like Charlotte! ^.^
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 5:29 pm
Saint-Cinq Nice! I read through your changes and I really like where you're taking Charlotte and her relationships. She makes a lot more sense to me now with regards to her friends and her freedom. : D And yeah, I was wondering if she did ballet! I like the tie-in. As far as the emblem goes-- you could even think about it as a moon striving for completion, too. :3 The moon is a very mysterious symbol (which works with Charlotte's ability to hide things from her friends or parents) and can also represent a change between two extremes-- new and full-- or Charlotte swinging back between strict rules and freedom. The crescent is kinda like a moon in balance, though maybe leaning more towards one side (freedom?) than the other (control?). Again, totally up to you what you want to do with this, but I'm really liking where you're going with her thus far! 8D
i added that little bit to her emblem; that fits her absolutely perfectly. i didn't even think of the moon's cycle relating to hers!
thank you so much, again, and i'm glad you like her!
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 5:35 pm
no prob! <3
asfhlknfs I edited my original post when you replied back-- I took a look at her history and found a typo, but yeah, I like her lot!
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 5:43 pm
Saint-Cinq no prob! <3 asfhlknfs I edited my original post when you replied back-- I took a look at her history and found a typo, but yeah, I like her lot!
i actually meant to type "mouth", but i do think that "hand" is the right word. c:
and yaaaay, so glad she's good. ; u; <3
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Posted: Wed Apr 25, 2012 12:38 pm
since it's been a while since i've received critiques,
i'm removing the underlining and opening this up for staff. c:
anyone is still more than welcome to critique it!
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