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[ This form is not mandatory to be present in your journal. You may set out your OC's journals in anyway you deem suits your pretty lil' head. But all that appears in this form, must be present in your journal somewhere (preferably easy to find). For more information on the rules of what you can and cannot do with an officially recognized OC refer H E R E and for more information on species and races you can choose from, please refer H E R E. Please note as well, that your OCs should be treated like your most prized Azrein. Please don't just slap up a journal for your OC. Take your time getting to know him or her and flesh out your OC to the best of your abilities. We ask you have no less than 10 sentences for background and personality. OCs at HoA, are new, and we want to go farther with them, but if you treat them wrong, we will take them away. For a good reference on a well-built journal, please refer to this journal.]
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XXXXSetting Up Your Journal-Important
●●●●xxx If you are making a regular race or specie journal title it like this: [RJ] *Insert whatever you want baby!*
●●●●xxx If you are making an Approval Journal for a race or specie that requires it, please title your journal like this: [AJ] *Insert whatever you want baby!*
●●●●xxx ALL APPROVAL JOURNALS WILL BE CRITIQUED! We're not here to hurt you, we're here to help you. Both Azreth and Akira have PUBLISHED work. We know how to develop a character. We're not out to destroy you, but to make a full well-rounded character.
●●●●xxx If you would like a critique on either a RJ or an AJ, in your first post, please do note so. Do note critiques are sent via PM only unless it is an Approval Journal, then Akira or Azreth will comment in your journal, as the Approval Journal is temporary, and will be removed once you set up your After Approval Journal (You will then title your next journal [AAJ]. Please note you must quote whomever it was who approved your character (Akira or Azreth) in the first post of your journal with your unique or elite character. You may request critiques from Akira-Kisho and he will critique your work for you.
●●●●xxx"But Akira! I've got a journal already with a regular specie or race AND you just approved my elite/unique! What do?! With this, you no longer use [RJ] and use [AAJ]. It just makes it easier on us.
●●●●xxx If someone does not want critiques, do not give them. Also, just because someone has an AJ, does not mean you can post your critique as well, they will put if it's an open critique or just an approval critique in the first post! Do not be rude in critiquing! Point out the good and bad! Also, do not forget to show them how to improve!
●●●●xxx If you have a RJ, but want critiques on your character, in your first post please note this! You will receive critiques via PM's only. Since RJ's do not need approval unless there is a power involved, you do not have to open critiques ever if you don't want!
[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Specie or race:[/b]
[b]Social Class:[/b] (Lower, middle, upper, nobility, ect)
[b]Age:[/b]
[b]Powers:[/b] (If any)
[b]Talents:[/b] (If any)
[b]Specialization:[/b] (Farmer, carpenter, blacksmith, ect)
[b]Background:[/b] (must be at least 10 sentences. AKA 2 paragraphs. Put some thought into this!)
[b]Personality:[/b] (Your character is allowed to change. What you start out with, may not always be what you end up with. Highlight some of the core pieces, and continue fleshing as you learn more about your character!)
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[ This form is not mandatory to be present in your journal. You may set out your OC's journals in anyway you deem suits your pretty lil' head. But all that appears in this form, must be present in your journal somewhere (preferably easy to find). For more information on the rules of what you can and cannot do with an officially recognized OC refer H E R E and for more information on species and races you can choose from, please refer H E R E. Please note as well, that your OCs should be treated like your most prized Azrein. Please don't just slap up a journal for your OC. Take your time getting to know him or her and flesh out your OC to the best of your abilities. We ask you have no less than 10 sentences for background and personality. OCs at HoA, are new, and we want to go farther with them, but if you treat them wrong, we will take them away. For a good reference on a well-built journal, please refer to this journal.]
XXX
XXXXSetting Up Your Journal-Important
●●●●xxx If you are making a regular race or specie journal title it like this: [RJ] *Insert whatever you want baby!*
●●●●xxx If you are making an Approval Journal for a race or specie that requires it, please title your journal like this: [AJ] *Insert whatever you want baby!*
●●●●xxx ALL APPROVAL JOURNALS WILL BE CRITIQUED! We're not here to hurt you, we're here to help you. Both Azreth and Akira have PUBLISHED work. We know how to develop a character. We're not out to destroy you, but to make a full well-rounded character.
●●●●xxx If you would like a critique on either a RJ or an AJ, in your first post, please do note so. Do note critiques are sent via PM only unless it is an Approval Journal, then Akira or Azreth will comment in your journal, as the Approval Journal is temporary, and will be removed once you set up your After Approval Journal (You will then title your next journal [AAJ]. Please note you must quote whomever it was who approved your character (Akira or Azreth) in the first post of your journal with your unique or elite character. You may request critiques from Akira-Kisho and he will critique your work for you.
●●●●xxx"But Akira! I've got a journal already with a regular specie or race AND you just approved my elite/unique! What do?! With this, you no longer use [RJ] and use [AAJ]. It just makes it easier on us.
●●●●xxx If someone does not want critiques, do not give them. Also, just because someone has an AJ, does not mean you can post your critique as well, they will put if it's an open critique or just an approval critique in the first post! Do not be rude in critiquing! Point out the good and bad! Also, do not forget to show them how to improve!
●●●●xxx If you have a RJ, but want critiques on your character, in your first post please note this! You will receive critiques via PM's only. Since RJ's do not need approval unless there is a power involved, you do not have to open critiques ever if you don't want!
[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Specie or race:[/b]
[b]Social Class:[/b] (Lower, middle, upper, nobility, ect)
[b]Age:[/b]
[b]Powers:[/b] (If any)
[b]Talents:[/b] (If any)
[b]Specialization:[/b] (Farmer, carpenter, blacksmith, ect)
[b]Background:[/b] (must be at least 10 sentences. AKA 2 paragraphs. Put some thought into this!)
[b]Personality:[/b] (Your character is allowed to change. What you start out with, may not always be what you end up with. Highlight some of the core pieces, and continue fleshing as you learn more about your character!)
