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Name: Rey

Actual Age: __2500____ Looks:21_____

Appearance:

Height: 6ft

Weight:245

Bone fragment: Hair pin in his blue hair

Personality: Dark, lonely, no remmorse, protective, crazy, and intelligent.

Bio: Personality – Switches up from time to time.. Sometimes he can be alittle hard to handle and at other times he can be as caring as a momma kitten.
History – Rey is known for his lightning based attacks. Born in Japan, Rey moved to China when he was 4 and came back when he was twelve, living a normal life kinda. He was a great fighter and when he died he was sent to the soul society. He actually didn't care what division he was in but got what he wanted. Rey is dimwitted though. He never follow orders exactly as his captains says it. Rey is very energetic and loves to fight but is too lazy to learn any type of Kido which makes it to where no kido can be used by him. Rey has alot of potential and can sometimes use all of his energy for one attack but he needs to listen more. He also uses his environment and incorporates it into his attacks. THe Gotei did pose a problem for him sense he didn't really have a family that he could use sense his last name was made up by his own self and he was moved by social services. Thankfully though, he was able to find a family and he was adopted into the Kori no Tamashi family or soul of Ice. Due to some certain events, while Rey was walking in the woods alone he was attacked by a hollow. He doens't remember much, but after that day, he has been having recent cravings for getting into fights and has been waking up in wierd places with blood on his zanpakutou and a vizard mask on his face. His zanpakutou has changed as well. After he became captain, due to some unforunate events again, Rey left the Seretei, but he still hangs aorund and visits his family. Well, the ones he trust anyways. The person he trusted the most was Karina, the only person who didn't cause him to go into an demonic state and The reason that he was able to be a shingami to begin with. Though, he doens't trust Kuro. Not becasue he's untrustworthy, just only because he hangs around his sister and it irked him alittle. After a few promblems with the Tamashi
, Rey stripped the name and became the younger brother of Karina Negami, but he likes to keep his name absent. Though through the years he made up with his family except for the fact that his father killed Karina. For revenge, he murdered most of the Tamashi family and earned the nickname The one with no Heart because he slaughtered them so easily and heartless like. Yet, no one questioned or ask what happened to the Tamashis so Rey didn't get into any trouble. Rey was truelly a troubled soul , but things started to become clear as he advanced in his carrear. He was actually an arrancar. He figured this out when he tried to perfom a kido spell, but a cero fired instead. With that, he went to squad 12 for some tests to make sure. Now, he has regrets and his past haunts him, but he pushes forward as the captain of squad 5.




Squad: 5

Rank: Captain


Sword:

Name: Yuri

Cero color: blue

Personalized Cero:

Resurrección 1 appearance: (Same as above appearance)

Resurrección 2 appearance:



Pre-Resurrección: Can send a wave of reiatsu in the form of a sonic boom to knock back the enemy .The only damage that this can really do is knock an opponent against something.

Resurrección 1 ability: Has control of lightning in which he can produce lightning to form up to 15 objects that can shock or explode on contact with the enemy.

Resurrección 1 Attack 1: Air raid- Rey uses his ability to create three great birds that are about the size of a small baby elephant that flies through the air and heads straight for his opponent. (can only use once every posts)

Resurrección 1 Attack 2: Invasion-Rey holds out his hand and creates 2 birds, 5 spiders (size of a football), and 6 snakes to rush towards hte enemy in the attempt to do as much damage as possible. After going about 100 yards, all the creations explode automatically or dissolves themselves.

Resurrección 2 ability:Rey is able to transfer the damage that he has taken and and amplify the damage into attacks that are X stronger than the damage he has taken.

Resurrección 2 Attack 1: Rey uses alll his life for and put in all his accessable reiatsu into his body which causes him with to generate needles made out of l reiatsu which has the capacity to deal the same amount of damage as Rey has taken

Resurrección 2 Attack 2: Rey is able to tap into his life force and put in all of his avaliable reiatsue into his hand and shoot out one final blast that is a purple reiatsu dragon that shoots out of his hand at the enemy. Also, he is one of the best hand to hand combat shinigami' out of the LTs in the Soul society. This making him able to to defend himself without his zanpakutou.

Well I guess I can go ahead and start by saying it looks very basic... Which is good since the hollow spells kind of confused me... The only thing I say that we change is the Zanpakuto portion. It needs a bit more description in what your implying. I saw sword, and although I'm sure you mean the unreleased version, it could just as easily mean the released version to simpletons such as myself. Also changing name to release phrase would be better as well, since most people just include the name in the release. But alas these are but suggestions.

It looks good though.