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The Black Circus- Idea Dump

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Kita-Ysabell

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 27, 2011 6:18 pm


So. This is an idea that has been... persistent. Lord knows when I first came up with it. But now, thanks to an acquaintance giving me a copy of the soundtrack for Cirque du Soleil's show Quidam, well, it came back. And I figured out the bits I hadn't really gotten before. It's the most... classically anime-esque any of my more enduring inspirations.
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Plot goes something like this: a young girl (I am SO going to call her Elvira, see right) is driven to join the circus as a tightrope walker and To Be A Master, particularly by performing in the Black Circus, which she knows nothing about. So she joins a troupe known to provide performers to said ominously enigmatic show, and through a mixture of good luck, talent, and hard work, she undergoes a melodramatic training course, all while being submitted to an onslaught of foreshadowing, and finally lands herself a role in the Black Circus.

But, this is me, I abuse my characters, and even my most simple-looking, straightforward ideas have a catch. And the catch to The Black Circus is, well, the nature of the Black Circus itself. The one enduring detail of this idea is that the Black Circus is basically just a regular circus without safety features. And, naturally, this means that the performers die sometimes. Or are horribly maimed. This constitutes a large portion of the foreshadowing mentioned above.
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In the past, the nature of the Black Circus ran on Rule of Cool: a challenge that would freak the heroine out but which she could overcome. The dark, creepy element ('cause now I know what's actually dark an' creepy) was introduced when I considered why the Black Circus exists. First off, the performers feel more legitimate if, one time out of ten, they aren't trying to pretend that doing tricks for kids is Serious Business and they are actually risking their lives, instead of just pretending to. Also, people will pay a lot to watch this.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 28, 2011 4:22 pm


This sounds like a pretty cool idea--I'd be interested to see where it goes.

Also, I love Quidam. smile

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Kita-Ysabell

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 01, 2011 10:38 pm


So I went and did a more extended write-up over here but to see it you'll need to have/acquire a livejournal account and be my livejounal friend, as that is the method I'm using to filter who I do and don't trust with ideas I'd like to develop, produce, and have an uncomplicated copyright of.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 07, 2011 12:11 pm


I thought this project was going to be on hold for approximately ever while I went and did Dragons.

But then I started writing it. And it seems to be going really well. There's some logistics that I haven't fixed in Dragons- mostly related to subplots and what the characters are doing when things aren't all that very melodramatic, and I've got a better handle of those for The Black Circus, and it turns out that they are major trip-ups.

I mean, just knowing that the story starts with Elvira walking into the circus looking for a job has got me about halfway through the first chapter, ACTUALLY WRITTEN. WITH WORDS. LIKE, DRAFTY WORDS, NOT PRE-DRAFTY WORDS.

Which is... unfortunately, not my usual style.

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