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PostPosted: Sat Jun 11, 2011 12:47 am


Gaia User Name:
[-(Allegra Kori no Tamashi)-]

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User Image
Name:Karina Negami

Age: [Actual:2300 ] [Looks:23

Birthday: (Optional)

Height:5'5

Weight:110

Body Type:slim

Hair Color:teali

Eye Color: light blue

Gender:Female
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Sexuality:Straight

Personality:trustworthy,temperamental at times, merciful rarely and unpredictable.

Race: Shinigami

Species:Elf


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Division
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Division: 12

Seat:Lieutenant

Squad Ability:Alchemy: This ability grants the user the power to manifest objects such as weapons, tools, and attacks but at the cost of something of equal value, such as a body part, material possession, or anything of the like. In essence, to use it you must offer a worthy sacrifice that can pay for using the ability. This means that you cannot give away petty things such as, but is not limited to, shoes or cash or anything of the like. Also, there is no making super weapons that can one hit kill, auto-hit, god mod, or anything that goes against the rules. These objects must be tangible and realistic such as guns or materials or a simple blast. I hope this is specific enough and I, as well as other mods, will inspect this ability closely since this is one I think is incredibly relative and objective. So please, use it properly and use it in ways that are fair to the other RPers so there is no trouble at all
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Spells
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[Hado]
1. Shō (衝, Thrust) = low
35. Breaking Palm = medium
63. Raikōhō (雷吼炮, Thunder Roar Cannon) = maximum
64. Sōren Sōkatsui (双蓮蒼火墜, Twin Lotus Blue Fire, Crash Down) = maximum
72. Burst Geyser = maximum

[Bakudo]
1. Sai (塞, Restrain) = low
4. Hainawa (這縄, Crawling Rope) = low
39. Enkosen (円閘扇, Arc Shield) = medium
58. Kakushitsuijaku (摑趾追雀, Summoning of the Tracking Sparrows) = medium
63. Sajo Sabaku (鎖条鎖縛, Locking Bondage Stripes) = maximum
75. Gochūtekkan (五柱鉄貫, Quintet of 1 kan Iron Pillars) = maximum
[Jokou]
10. Doragon no Hifu = low
13. Kushihi (Spitfire) = low
35. Misutobodi = medium
65. Kakuremino = maximum
[Chiyudo]


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Shinigami Abilities
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Dashing, Shunpo (Flash-Step), Garganta, Senkaimon, Air Walk
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Zanpakuto
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Zanpakuto Size:The blade is 1 feet long, .50 centimeters thick and wide

Zanpakuto Guard:User Image

Zanpakuto Sealed (Sword) Form::User Image

Zanpakuto Type: Elemental Water

Zanpakuto Name: [Name:Kōri no megami] [Meaning:Ice Goddess]

Zanpakuto Spirit:Korina
Tamashi
Spirit’s Biography:
Korina is the spirit that represents ice/water control. She is what keeps the ice in control when in use. To people she knows, she seems nice, outgoing, bubbly and a little hyper. To those she doesn’t, she is pride, very cautious and not trusting.
Tamashi is the spirit that represents levitation. He is what keeps the water in the air. He is over protective of his two sisters, Korina, and Allegra. To people who know him, he is still a little cold, calm, calculated and fair. To those who don't know him, he is cold, unfair and is probably suspicious of you.
Inner World:

User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.
Zanpakutō type: Dual blade
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Shikai
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Shinkai Form:User Image

Shikai Size:The blade is 2 feet long, .75 centimeters thick and wide

Shikai Release Phrase:Come and bring forth your Icy Judgement

Shikai Ability: Water Manipulation:I can manipulate the water around meme

Shikai Attack One:(Shaped bars of Ice) - A blue crystal ball with appear floating on the tip of the sword, then a ball of blue energy will shot into the hair, i will role one 6-sided die, it will determine the number of sides,

Shikai Attack Two:Water's Controlthis form, she has control over any type of water around her in a 4 mile radius. She can use the water to create projectiles or weapons. The lengths of the projectiles are 3 feet long and 3 feet wide.

Shikai Attack Three:Waves of destructionA part of her wing falls off and forms a bow. I take it them aim it at my opponent.As soon as I release the string a arrow made purely out of water will form and shoots straight at him.The water that makes up the arrow then spreads till its a 4 foot high and wide wall of water.If the opponent swallows too much of the water, the opponent can drown. The force of the hit can cause confusion.


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Bankai
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Bankai Name: One with Water

Bankai Form:Mizu to ichi(One with Water)

Bankai Size:The blades gains a half a foot and .25 centimeters in thickness and width

Bankai Release Phrase:"Waters from the oceans, waters from the sea, come,join and be one with me"

Bankai Ability:Water Sensing:I can sense vibrations from the water near me to anywhere from a 4 foot radius

Bankai Attack One: 1.Water Sense:In this Attack,,basically, I I am able to feel vibrations from the water around me,also my shikai ablities are 1 foot longer and twice as strong the The setback, is that I dont know exactly what i am feeling, only their location and number.

Bankai Attack Two: 2.Wrath of Water Dragons: My eyes glow ice blue, then two dragons made of water form on both sides of me, one shooting boiling hot water balls the other shoots a 4 diameter sized stream at you. The only last for 3 posts, then there is a 1 post recharge


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Other
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Items: (Any other Items or Weapons your character may carry, or have that are worth mentioning)

Misc:Plant Communication biggrin ue to her elven blood she is able to talk to plants, like trees and grass

Sight Beyond Sight biggrin ue to her elven blood she is able to see possible futures

Mediation biggrin ue to elven blood she is able to mediate, to regain her strength,and enter her inner zanpaktou world


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Biography
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she was alive, she was an only child to a noble family, so she got anything she needed or asks for,even though she rarely asked at all. Even though she was from a noble family her personality didn't reflect that, she was very nice to all those she met and was very helpful. She went to a private high school far from home, because it was forbidden for children of noble birth to associate themselves with commoners. And even after going to a high school for nobly birthed children, her personality still didn't change. While at high school, she made many friends, competed in the school pageant, campaigned and won her school election for class president and represented her school at abroad conferences all over the world. She graduated top of her class, and even had a boyfriend. She died on her way to college in a domino affect collision, a car hit another car, which made the cars in front of them hit those cars which eventually hit her car .She felt no pain, cuz she died instantly, so every year on two days one her birthday,and two her and her boyfriends anniversary they go and pick her favorite flowers roses and tulips and lay in on her grave. that day not only affected her parents,but her boyfriend, and any other person she came in contact with while she was alive so much so that they made a day just for her,that day is coincidentally her birthday as well, on that day, they do all and anything they remembered she would love to do, which was a lot she was very open-minded and most times enjoyed anything she died. The one person who always visited her grave besides her boyfriend was her brother,Rey.Not long afterwards he died as well.

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 7:14 pm


Ok, first, make sure you apply to squad nine to see if you get that position.

You have 19 kido, and if you get Lt, you are only allowed 18.

YOu need to add the Shinigami abilities they are in the same place you got the Skelly.

You need to put the size of your blades, this is not only in the Zanpakuto part, but in the Shikai and Bankai part also.

Your First shikai and second one seen to be the same thing. You need to change that.

Also, in the first shikai seems to say earth, you said it was a water type, so yeah... You need to change that.

One thing about both of the attacks is that it does not take posts to avoid these attacks, it takes skill to do so. Take off the avoiding limit.

It seems that these attacks do more than one thing, change it.

Also, it seems as if most of your pictures are broken, you might want to fix them, so we know what we are looking at.

Before I even talk about your bankai, due to you Zanpakuto ability, you can not have fire.

Bankai 1:

Those heats that you have put, are too high to cause the damage that you say they do.

Bankai 2:

How many Balls can you summon?

(Also, wow on the name)

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 10:31 am


edited
PostPosted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 10:42 am


Nothing has changed, why did you put edited?

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 2:52 pm


i thought i had but now it is edited
PostPosted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 3:43 pm


Ok, so you changed one of the necessary things I asked for, but now there is a problem. Your shikai one and two are the same. Please change the rest.

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 02, 2011 9:53 am


edited
PostPosted: Wed Sep 07, 2011 2:30 pm


Your Zanpakuto type is Elemental water. It does not matter if you wield two blades.

Picture is still broken

You can not have Water control as your Shikai ability. You can have Water Manipulation though.

Question, If you already have a weapon, Why would you get a staff?

Onto bankai. Along with Shikai, you need to explain what that means. As for blending things with water, no.

Bankai 1: You are able to use the moves already from Shikai, so why have it like that? I also believe that this if left, should be your Bankai seeing that it seems DO or Die to me.

Bankai 2: Ok, this one is ok, but you need to make 1. Explain how big the stream is (You only said 4) and then you need to put it in Diameter terms. 4 foot Diameter is good, not 8.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 07, 2011 8:03 pm


edited
PostPosted: Wed Sep 07, 2011 8:13 pm


again. You can not have water merging as your ability. Now that I think about it, turning your body into water is more of an Arrancar thing, and Shinigami are not allowed to do such things. Again you must explain what both of the abilities mean.

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 08, 2011 1:33 pm


edited
PostPosted: Thu Sep 08, 2011 1:41 pm


YOu may have changed the name of it, but you did not change the Bankai one attack itself. You may not merge with water.

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 08, 2011 3:22 pm


edited
PostPosted: Thu Sep 08, 2011 9:35 pm


Finally, everything looks good. before I give my stamp of approval, you have chosen a non human type Shinigami. If are allowed under the MISC section to have small extra powers. (If needed look at mine seeing that we are both at least part elf)

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 27, 2011 11:35 am


Allegra Kori no Tamashi


Seeing there has been no response for a few weeks, This is passed.
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