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 Posted: Wed May 11, 2011 11:35 am
{ THIS QUEST IS ACTIVE / CLOSED }
Critiques are very much welcome.
Updated: 05/27/2011
y o u |m a y |p o s t
Credits:
Banner // permission by Omiekins
Title&Coding // La Mangue
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Posted: Tue May 17, 2011 12:26 pm
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xxxxxxxxxx|★ ＲＡＣＥ: Human
xxxxxxxxxx|★ ＰＯＳＩＴＩＯＮ: Mononoke
xxxxxxxxxx|★ ＳＴＡＧＥ: Reaper
xxxxxxxxxx|★ ＧＥＮＤＥＲ: Female
xxxxxxxxxx|「 ★ 」 ＴＥＡ:
xxxxxxxxxxxx|Owl's Blood Tea: Enhanced sensitive hearing, Hunting+
xxxxxxxxxx|「 ★ 」 ＢＩＯＧＲＡＰＨＹ:
xxxxxxxxxx| Every once in a while, a special witch in the family is born, one who are granted with greater power. Born in a family of talented witches, Myst
xxxxxxxxxx| possessed a more powerful trait; shape-shifting. She is what people in the world of Lilium Hallow call, a mononoke.
xxxxxxxxxx| Eleina, her mother, passed away while giving birth to her and the whereabouts of her father remained unknown, so her grandmother had
xxxxxxxxxx| been given possession of Myst. Myst doesn't know much about her father since her grandmother doesn't like to talk about him much. All she
xxxxxxxxxx| knew about her father was that he had left them before she was born. "Coward." is the only thing she can say about the man. Her
xxxxxxxxxx| grandmother, Lucinda Fae, a very respected and known sage had taught her everything she knew about their world and the power of the
xxxxxxxxxx| witches as she showed great potential. Making it easy for her to excel in her classes. On becoming a witch, due to her rapid increase in
xxxxxxxxxx| knowledge of magic, she had noticed that she had gained more power, and through experiment and practice, was able to slowly master the
xxxxxxxxxx| art of shape-shifting. Able to take shape animals. Growing up, Myst looked up to the Ars Lilium, hoping one day, when she was powerful
xxxxxxxxxx| enough to join them and maybe join the Cerberus Knights.
xxxxxxxxxx| Late one night, a feared and powerful witch water named Demetrius was said to be lurking in town, hidden beneath the shadows, thirsting for
xxxxxxxxxx| power. Myst had not known that Demetrius had been watching her as she grew, learning more of her potential, her magic ever growing
xxxxxxxxxx| stronger as she progressed, thus making her a very strong target. In order to protect her, the sage had to protect her with all of her power
xxxxxxxxxx| from the the witch eater, killing them both. Devastated, Myst swore that she would hunt down every witch eater in Lilium Hallow, with revenge
xxxxxxxxxx| fueling her drive to make sure that everyone in Lilium Hallow would not experience what she had gone through. The loss of a loved one.
xxxxxxxxxx| BRIEF PERSONALITY NOTES:
xxxxxxxxxx| ✥ Aloof ➝ Myst has a fear of being too attached to a person in fear of losing them. Thus coming off to be very unfriendly and distant.
xxxxxxxxxx| ✥ Devoted ➝ She is very focused and a hard worker. Myst takes her job as a reaper very seriously and is loyal with whom she works with.
xxxxxxxxxx| ✥ Suspicious ➝ Myst always has her guard up, since she deals with runaway Majins and dangerous Witch Eaters. This is also do to her past experience
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxas a child. She tries to keep a safe distance with everything; creating a small bubble for herself.
xxxxxxxxxx| ✥ Quiet/Secretive ➝ A woman of few words; Myst only replies when she believes it is necessary. Not wanting to give away too much about herself,
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx| unless deemed trustworthy.
xxxxxxxxxx| ✥ Assertive ➝ Not afraid to do whatever it is to get what she wants/needs and not afraid to put herself out there. Sometimes cocky.
xxxxxxxxxx| SMALL REAPER BIO:
xxxxxxxxxx| Officially being titled a Reaper after years of studying and working to get the position, Myst's first mission was to hunt down a lurking witch
xxxxxxxxxx| eater lurking in the woods too close to town. Taking advantage of her mononoke powers, taking shape of an owl, as she watched over the
xxxxxxxxxx| forest. The witch eater didn't suspect one of the reaper to have such powers. Once she had spotted the outlaw, her vision turns red
xxxxxxxxxx| (metaphorically speaking), catching the witch eater by surprise and attacking it without mercy, her scythe plunging into its heart. Because of
xxxxxxxxxx| this, Myst has become a significant danger to the Majins and Witch Eaters due to her strong hatred towards them.
xxxxxxxxxx|「 ★ 」 ＡＢＩＬＩＴＹ ＣＯＮＣＥＮＴＲＡＴＩＯＮ :
xxxxxxxxxx| Not entirely sure what to put here, but I guess maybe Myst can concentrate on animal shape-shifting? D: Not sure if that is allowed.
xxxxxxxxxx|「 ★ 」 ＶＩＳＵＡＬ ＲＥＦＥＲＥＮＣＥ:
xxxxxxxxxx| Her overall look will really be up to you, these pictures are just for inspiration and reference. [Sorry if it's too many]
xxxxxxxxxxxxxx| ✥ Web Stockings, Shoes, Owl Skull Necklace, Finger Claw.
xxxxxxxxxxxxxx| ✥ Scythe
xxxxxxxxxxxxxx| ✥ Dress & Hood
xxxxxxxxxxxxxx| ✥ Hairstyle ➝ eye color: big bright yellow/orange owl like eyes. (Since she's a Monoke.)
xxxxxxxxxxxxxx| ✥ Great Horned Owl#1, Great Horned Owl#2, Great Horned Owl#3
xxxxxxxxxxxxxx| ✥ Porcelain skin.
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Posted: Wed May 18, 2011 1:52 pm
Open now I guess..
My bio is a bit iffy but that's cause I'm sick and my ideas are kind of all over the place... Hope it's okay..
; A; /
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Posted: Wed May 18, 2011 5:19 pm
The post style is cute~ Hm, as for critique... I notice you've mentioned she's an outlaw. :3 Maybe elaborate on what she does to be referred to as this? Reapers aren't outlaws simply for being a reaper, of course. :>
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Posted: Wed May 18, 2011 5:20 pm
Thank you! Moonlore/Lilium Hallow inspired post style. Of course the banner credits goes to you.. Since I stole it ( with permission |D ).
Ooh alright. Yeah the whole reaper thing confused me. xD They make me want to make her evil
edit//
I was also thinking of just making her a mononoke. @__@; Would that be okay?
/is still thinking on the whole outlaw idea.
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Posted: Wed May 18, 2011 6:04 pm
Edited. I can't think of anything that would make her sound like an outlaw. So how is that? She can be a... Notorius Reaper. Or.. Well, I don't know if that bio for the reaper even counts as an outlaw story... xD;
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Posted: Sun May 22, 2011 1:34 pm
I don't see anything wrong with it since you fixed it.
Good job. c:
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Posted: Sun May 22, 2011 1:36 pm
LOL. Thank you Chels. <3333 xD
/feels like making more changes but I might ruin it...
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2011 1:34 am
You do very well with setting up backgrounds for your characters; I really enjoy reading the histories and how they came to be who they are.
Just a few things:
"Because of this, Myst has became one of the top threats of all the Reapers and one of the most feared due to her powerful magic and strong hatred for Majins and Witch Eaters." <- Unfortunately this is a little bit godmoding, since you can't say for certain how others would think of her and whether or not they would consider her one of the "top threats." However, you could easily switch that around to say something along the lines of "Myst has become a significant danger to the Majins and Witch Eaters because of her strong hatred towards them." Or something similar to that. C:
As the same with your other quest, lots of background, slightly less personality, although there is a lot that can be read about Myst from just the background alone. It'd be nice to delve a little deeper into her personality a bit, however. :3
Overall, very nicely done~
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2011 10:54 am
Thank you Kuro~
xD I was wondering/unsure if that would be seen as godmoding. I shall get to it.
I somehow keep forgetting to add in their personality.. ; n;
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Posted: Mon May 23, 2011 7:12 pm
Short personality notes added.
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Posted: Tue May 24, 2011 5:11 pm
Very cool, she seems like a very emotionally driven character.
One question I had was why the Cerberus Knights instead of the Black Hearts? Is it just part of her childhood dream, or was it something instilled in her by her grandmother, or something specifically against the Black Hearts, or... //out of ideas
Concerning her father, what does she think of him? How does her fear of losing someone play with someone who may have actively abandoned her? Not saying it has to be a big thing, it was just something I wondered about while reading.
Otherwise, very cool ^_^ Love the references, can't wait to see her in action!
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Posted: Wed May 25, 2011 3:29 pm
Ooh thank you! and I'm not entirely sure why she chose the Cerberus Knights at the time just yet.. xD I still have to think of an answer for that. Hmmm...
/ponders.
Thank you and thank you for the ideas!
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Posted: Fri May 27, 2011 2:00 pm
Added tea ingredients.. I'm not sure how many ingredients are allowed so I put 2. One ingredient (poison of basilisk) taken from the chosen items.
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Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2011 1:37 pm
Ideally, you don't need to list every individual ingredient in your quest thread. You're completely okay to come up with a finalized tea, as long as you explain what it does. If you WANT to just list ingredients, however, that's fine too. :>
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