These are my poems, take them as you will. Comments are welcomed.

Bloodied Flag

A fool lays still in blood writhing and tearing at their battle wounds.
What are you doing? Why do you bleed crimson tears?
No, i cannot say i am a dreamer.
Digging the bullet out of her heart, she'll curse under her breath.
Trying so hard, she wavered with that flag around her body.
Surrender to nothing, surrender to your depression.
Soldiers never back down though their hearts are mechanic in nature.
You're not a soldier but a fool.
Lonely and scared, why did you step into this battle?
Pure white, your flag fell into mud and you refused to wipe it clean.
You let yourself be tainted by a dancing soldier.
Who can you save?
No one wants to dance with a fool like you.