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Muffinsbaby

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 9:02 am


User ImageAMITYVILLE ACADEMY ENROLLMENT FORM

Name: Katania Treasach
Nicknames: Katie, Kat, Nee
Gender: Female
Age: She is 16 but, because of her size, she looks 12.

Faction/Race Monster - Werewolf

Personality:
-Personality-
~Obsessed, much? - Katania is extremely OCD. Everything has to be cleaned and straightened, if it's not she tweaks out until it's fixed. If even a just a piece of paper is askew her ears and tail will twitch and she will have a mini break down until she fixes it or it is fixed on its own. This applies more so to her own belongings, especially her dorm. Also, this OCDness runs over into her appearance as well. She comes off a little vain because of this. Her clothes have to be color coordinated, her hair perfectly parted, her tail brushed just so. It is a huge, time-consuming process, which is why she is sometimes late to classes.
~Short stuff~! - Because of her size, she can come off as cuddly and adorable, but this is not the case. If annoyed her tongue becomes a sword and, in her wolf form, she can become ferocious. She learned to defend herself very well and at a young age. She's tough and wont back down if challenged, but she isn't a leader and won't go looking for a fight.
~Awwww, I dont bite... - Also because of her shortness, she is very shy, at first. Once she knows you wont make fun of her, because of her low self esteem, she can really turn into the sweetest puppy you've ever met. She doesn't go making friends willy-nilly though, she will NOT become friends with a vampire, at least not openly, for a group of them had snuck into their village and tried to take her to be their 'play thing'. Because of this she also has trouble trusting and you have to EARN her trust and respect in order for you to enter her inner circle, and very few do.
~Attaaaaaaach~! - Once you're lucky enough to become her friend, Katania will always be loyal. She would do anything for one she considers a friend, and trusts the other to do so as well, although she'll never ask for anything. She will believe you over all others and she will hold you to the highest regards.
~So nice... - Katania loves to give. You don't even have to be her friend and she will give you something because she thinks you'll like it, or because she thinks you need something nice to happen to you. She does not know how to recieve gifts, however, and will become awkward upon recieving one. The way she was raised, showing emotion wasn't useful. When she had cried for attention, no one paid her any mind, so she learned how to be by herself. Because of this, she grew up not knowing affection so friendship, trust, and love are especially hard for her.
~Are you Serious...? - She doesn't understand or grasp the concept of sarcasm. If you say something, she will believe you are perfectly serious, even if you tell her that you have 20,000 tentacles on your rear. This stems from the atmosphere and rules in her wolf pack's village. There was minimal laughter, if any at all, and everyone was serious all the time, and that's how she was brought up. Because of this, at least at first, there is seldom a smile on her face or laughter from her lips.


-Quirks-
~She will NOT, under any circumstance, wear anything on her feet. She hates shoes of any kind, even sandals.

-Likes-
~The color green. Especially if it glows. If there's anything green, and she can have it, there is no doubt that she'll take it.
~She also loves to run, she loves making her chest heave for air and her lung and legs ache.
~There's nothing she likes better than a good classical song, other than the color green. You'd never guess that's what she's listening to if you saw her reaction to said music (much flailing and dancing if she believes no one is watching).

-Dislikes-
~She hates the colors Red and Pink and will avoid them at all costs. There is no reason-other than they clash with green-that she hates them, but she gets very ragey around those colors.
~Vampires. They're too stuck up to even look at her, so she wont even look at them. A group had tried to take her as a young pup, because her smallness amused them and they wanted to keep her as their 'plaything'. She got away, because of the survival instincts she was taught and what was naturally given to her, but that memory is forever ingrained in her mind.
~She hates writing, especially if required to do so. She'd rather be doing physical things, like running. She will, however, read if she must.

Why are they enrolled in Amityville Academy? Katania came from a very war-centered pack. She never knew her parents, they had just disappeared and no one knows, to this day, what happened to them. Members of the pack had found her and taken her with them in hopes she would grow into a strong and fierce warrior. Alas, this was not so, for she was so small. So, disgusted with the little wolf, they dumped her in front of Amityville and left, and do not plan on contacting her again.

Courses of study she may be interested in are Shadowcraft 101, Gym, Human Studies, and possibly Stealth 1.

User ImageFEAR: Fear allows her to grow three times her own size for a limited amount of time. As she progresses, the limitation will decrease and eventually disappear. This power only acts as intimidation and does not add to her strength or stamina.

Natural Ability: Being able to change from humanoid form to wolf form and vice versa.

Physical Description:
Humanoid Form: She's very short, about 4'6". Her fluffy ears and tail are more there to throw opponents off, especially with their brightness, although she usually tries to hide these extremities with her hair. She is also a little plump, with an hourglass figure.

Wolf Form: Upon shifting, she turns into a small, jet black wolf, her tail longer than others. Her fur is also on the long side, kinda like a long haired golden retriever.

Eye Colour: Medium Green (With a swirl as a pupil)
Hair Colour/Style: Very long (pooling to the ground), thick, wavy Jet Black hair.
Skin Colour: Tan
Clothing Style/Colours: Victorian style black coat with Green trimmings(to match her eyes) and Neon Green Swirl Pattern with a ruffled Black skirt with Green lace.
Extra: She has extra fluffy Neon Green ears. She also has a long extra fluffy Neon Green tail with a Dark Grey underside.
References:
-Victorian Coat (no undershirt)
-Hair Style1 ; Hair Style2
-Skirt but shorter and colored like This (green frills/lace)
(doodles to come later)

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Badge: Perhaps a Neon Green Background with a Black Wolf howling - the whole wolf, not just the head.
PostPosted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 9:06 am


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Muffinsbaby

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Muffinsbaby

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 9:34 pm


Crits Please?


Question:
Tripp_Trapp
XD I relate a lot with her. < < I hate wearing shoes...And my two favorite colors are black and neon green. :3 I think my character, Avalon would be quick to make her his friend and cling to her.

The main thing I'm noticing that may need revision is her FEAR. Does she gain extra strength/speed/etc when she grows to three times her size or is it mainly only for intimidation?


Answer:
About her fear, hmm...she's kinda strong as is. Not overly, but enough to take care of herself in a fight. So it's mainly just for intimidation more than anything. Plus, being bigger helps her get more of a grip than being the tiny thing she is :3

Question:
Naked Satan
thanks for the crit on Carmine! :3 now here's a crit for you~

You say she's tough but has low self-esteem. This contradicts a little bit. Low self-esteem would imply that she doesn't think highly of herself (which then contradicts with the need for others to earn her respect for them and also her quirk to ignore vampires). If she's tough, then she probably wouldn't care what others think of her, so her self-esteem would be difficult to lower or raise by others.. so just needs a little bit of refinement and clarification to work out that kink c:

She doesn't go looking for fights (mostly because of her size) but you say that she will "tear your throat out" if you try to give her a present. To start, that doesn't sound very nice, which is quite the opposite of her being super nice XD Also, it would seem that this would be looking for a fight since the present would be in good intentions, not maleficent. Maybe alter that so that she doesn't know how to accept a present, so she becomes awkward for a time and makes sure to make it clear to the other student that she doesn't like to receive presents?

Shy but cuddly and friendly? This doesn't work together D: If she's shy she wouldn't be overly friendly with strangers, this however doesn't mean she'd be nasty with them either, it just... needs a little clarification c:

Okay, so this isn't really a crit, but why are her ears and tail silvery-blue in her humanoid form and she's a jet black wolf in her natural form? This doesn't really make any sense, though if there's an IC reason, then writing it in would be helpful :3

hope this is helpful to you! ♥


Answer:
This helps a lot, thank you~!

~By tough, I meant she's not some squishy little thing that you can hurt by stepping on her foot. I meant tough by she can handle, and duely dish out, physical pain. She's tough in that way. Perhaps, instead of a low self esteem, I should say she has trouble conveying her emotions?

~Hmm, I didn't mean in the literal claw out your throat context, i meant she'd get sort of bristled and upset, but I like your suggestion better, that she doesn't know how to accept others niceties and I can elaborate as to why~!

~Hmm maybe she isn't so cuddle/friendly xD Since she now has trouble conveying her emotions, the shy would stick, but not the other, so that's fixed~!

~There's really no real reason, but later it does help her blend into the human world. Because of her size, it helps her look like a child that is just dressed up like a wolf, instead of actually being one.

Question:
Blade Kuroda
There was one main thing that stuck out to me. You listed what classes she's interested in but what are her reasons for enrolling exactly? Basically... why Amityville?

What was her village like exactly? Or her parents for that matter? The way it sounds is that she wasn't really nurtured all that much, though if the village is anything like a wolfpack, that doesn't really make a whole lot of sense. Right now I'm just assuming that's the dynamic seeing how she's a werewolf.


Answer:
My believing was that all wolfpacks are different, and this particular one was a very war-like pack. She actually never knew her parents (no one knows what happened to them) so this pack found her abandoned and took her in hopes she'd become a very fierce warrior for them. This, however, did not come true as she was too small, so they sent her off to Amityville to become a better warrior, but they don't contact her from this point on. So basically they just dump her at the school.
PostPosted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 8:07 am


added a few things to her personality

Muffinsbaby

Dapper Lunatic


Aeyote

PostPosted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 2:23 pm


XD I relate a lot with her. < < I hate wearing shoes...And my two favorite colors are black and neon green. :3 I think my character, Avalon would be quick to make her his friend and cling to her.

The main thing I'm noticing that may need revision is her FEAR. Does she gain extra strength/speed/etc when she grows to three times her size or is it mainly only for intimidation?
PostPosted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 2:35 pm


Awwww Avalon is cuuuuute <3 xD With RP I'm sure they'd be friends :3

About her fear, hmm...she's kinda strong as is. Not overly, but enough to take care of herself in a fight. So it's mainly just for intimidation more than anything. Plus, being bigger helps her get more of a grip than being the tiny thing she is :3

Thank you for reading~! I really appreciate it :3

Muffinsbaby

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Aeyote

PostPosted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 2:55 pm


You're very welcome. x3 Just wanna help ya out.
PostPosted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 5:00 pm


thanks for the crit on Carmine! :3 now here's a crit for you~

You say she's tough but has low self-esteem. This contradicts a little bit. Low self-esteem would imply that she doesn't think highly of herself (which then contradicts with the need for others to earn her respect for them and also her quirk to ignore vampires). If she's tough, then she probably wouldn't care what others think of her, so her self-esteem would be difficult to lower or raise by others.. so just needs a little bit of refinement and clarification to work out that kink c:

She doesn't go looking for fights (mostly because of her size) but you say that she will "tear your throat out" if you try to give her a present. To start, that doesn't sound very nice, which is quite the opposite of her being super nice XD Also, it would seem that this would be looking for a fight since the present would be in good intentions, not maleficent. Maybe alter that so that she doesn't know how to accept a present, so she becomes awkward for a time and makes sure to make it clear to the other student that she doesn't like to receive presents?

Shy but cuddly and friendly? This doesn't work together D: If she's shy she wouldn't be overly friendly with strangers, this however doesn't mean she'd be nasty with them either, it just... needs a little clarification c:

Okay, so this isn't really a crit, but why are her ears and tail silvery-blue in her humanoid form and she's a jet black wolf in her natural form? This doesn't really make any sense, though if there's an IC reason, then writing it in would be helpful :3

hope this is helpful to you! ♥

Naked Satan


Muffinsbaby

Dapper Lunatic

PostPosted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 5:19 pm


This helps a lot, thank you~!

~By tough, I meant she's not some squishy little thing that you can hurt by stepping on her foot. I meant tough by she can handle, and duely dish out, physical pain. She's tough in that way. Perhaps, instead of a low self esteem, I should say she has trouble conveying her emotions?

~Hmm, I didn't mean in the literal claw out your throat context, i meant she'd get sort of bristled and upset, but I like your suggestion better, that she doesn't know how to accept others niceties and I can elaborate as to why~!

~Hmm maybe she isn't so cuddle/friendly xD Since she now has trouble conveying her emotions, the shy would stick, but not the other, so that's fixed~!

~There's really no real reason, but later it does help her blend into the human world. Because of her size, it helps her look like a child that is just dressed up like a wolf, instead of actually being one.
PostPosted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 5:42 pm


Changed her ears and tail to green to fit her love of green :3

Muffinsbaby

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Blade Kuroda

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 6:45 pm


There was one main thing that stuck out to me. You listed what classes she's interested in but what are her reasons for enrolling exactly? Basically... why Amityville?

What was her village like exactly? Or her parents for that matter? The way it sounds is that she wasn't really nurtured all that much, though if the village is anything like a wolfpack, that doesn't really make a whole lot of sense. Right now I'm just assuming that's the dynamic seeing how she's a werewolf.
PostPosted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 7:08 pm


My believing was that all wolfpacks are different, and this particular one was a very war-like pack. She actually never knew her parents (no one knows what happened to them) so this pack found her abandoned and took her in hopes she'd become a very fierce warrior for them. This, however, did not come true as she was too small, so they sent her off to Amityville to become a better warrior, but they don't contact her from this point on. So basically they just dump her at the school.

Muffinsbaby

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Bilious

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 04, 2011 12:23 pm


First up, when I saw this quest I was like SHE NEEDS TO BE FRIENDS WITH LITTLE WEREWOLF they could be shrimpypals together ;3; <33

On OCD: I really liked this character quirk, but was disappointed when it was JUST for her own stuff- I'd like to see her getting OCD about OTHER PEOPLE'S stuff, it's a great (if annoying to the characters involved XD ) quirk to help with character interaction, as well as a quirk she might learn to deal with during her time in school.

I really like that because she's small she overcompensates to not seem cute and cuddly. X) LIKE A JACK RUSSEL TERRIER that thinks its a wolf XD <33

You say she's ferocious but also shy- do those go hand in hand? Will she come off as stand-offish at first but warm up to you?

I like her reason for enrollment XD SHE WILL SHOW THEM WHO'S TOO TINY FOR WARRRR!

Fear seems cool too! TINY WEREWOLF BECOMES THE BIG BAD WOLF! I like the contrast!

Hope these comments helped! She's very adorable so far I dig her!
PostPosted: Fri Mar 04, 2011 12:37 pm


Bilious
First up, when I saw this quest I was like SHE NEEDS TO BE FRIENDS WITH LITTLE WEREWOLF they could be shrimpypals together ;3; <33

On OCD: I really liked this character quirk, but was disappointed when it was JUST for her own stuff- I'd like to see her getting OCD about OTHER PEOPLE'S stuff, it's a great (if annoying to the characters involved XD ) quirk to help with character interaction, as well as a quirk she might learn to deal with during her time in school.

I really like that because she's small she overcompensates to not seem cute and cuddly. X) LIKE A JACK RUSSEL TERRIER that thinks its a wolf XD <33

You say she's ferocious but also shy- do those go hand in hand? Will she come off as stand-offish at first but warm up to you?

I like her reason for enrollment XD SHE WILL SHOW THEM WHO'S TOO TINY FOR WARRRR!

Fear seems cool too! TINY WEREWOLF BECOMES THE BIG BAD WOLF! I like the contrast!

Hope these comments helped! She's very adorable so far I dig her!


xDDDD Thank you, I'm really proud of her so far, and I really hope I get to play her in the 2nd part of the Meta, I'm so excited and she's like, attacking my brain trying to get out xD

On the OCD thing, I'm still actually debating on how far it really goes. I just know, that if her hair is mussed, or if her tail is brushed up against, or her clothes wrinkled by someone, she will FREAK THE ******** OUT~! I mean, she wont start a fight, but she'll definitely cause a scene xD

And yes, she is a little stand-offish at first. For a while actually, even after she knows you until you gain her trust, but for the most part others are put off by how long it takes. I'm actually prepared for her to never have a boilfriend, it takes her that long to trust xD stupidwolfpack >>;; But she does eventually warm up to you ^^ I PROMISE~!

Basically everything about her is contrast xD and I absolutely adore it. It's mainly to either throw you off, or intimidate you :3

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 04, 2011 1:08 pm


Oh my goodness! She's adorable! XD I saw her in your sig and was instantly entranced, naturally. I love her, as well as her personality.

I'd like to see how her abandonment by her pack has had an effect on her. You mentioned low self-esteem, but I'm really curious as to whether or no it will have any other, possibly important (plottish? oh-ho) effects on her personality. <:

;u; Hope that's helpful, that was about the only thing I could think of. You've done a really good job with her quest!
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