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PostPosted: Mon Dec 13, 2010 12:42 pm


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Name: Helix Akuma

Appearance Age: 25

Actual Age: 345

Gender: Male

Sexuality: Straight

Personality: Helix is a very honorable man, and puts his friends and family before his life and his honor. He is very good at judging people, and has the name of the judgment shinigami. He has a warm heart but a cold tongue, that is he speaks very coldly. His personality is hidden very well, but it likes to visit often when he is fighting.

Bio: Helix was born January 4th. He is the current head of the Akuma family. Being the 29th, he possesses the kenseikan that is pure red in his hair, holding it out of the right part side of his eye sight, and the ginpaku kazahana no usurious scarf, which makes him the new head of the Akuma family.

Helix grew up being one of the four noble families, the Akuma family. Though he brings shame to the Akuma name by not being a captain right away, he trains hard and tries to put his best effort forward.

He grew up of course in the Soul Society. He, unlike most of the Akuma family, felt passion towards others and would rather help others than himself. His father felt shame on this and treated him differently.

At the time of his father’s death, the man passed on the family scarf and hair piece to him. When his father passed away, Helix started wearing his father's white cloak, which is almost identical to a Captain’s cloak. As he continued to train, his Zanpakuto ended up letting him down. It came out of its sheath while training really hard one day. It was stuck within a tree. He pulled it out and fell to his knees, furious at his Zanpakuto.

Eventually, he melded his blade to a scythe, making his Zanpakuto accept its new home. It welcomed it with open arms.

Unlike his family wanting him to become a captain, he is perfectly happy right now as a lower seat. He knows that with great power comes great responsibility and he looks to gain his way up to a Squad Captain level.


Division: Squad One
Rank: 3rd Seat

Appearance

Height: 6’3
Weight: 205 lbs
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color:
Bloody Crimson Red when not fighting
Cyan when fighting
Usual Clothing: Even though he is supposed to wear the normal shinigami clothing, he does not. He prefers to wear a white Captain-like cloak and a blue silk scarf around his neck that seems to glow and shimmer both during the night and day. Under the Captain-like cloak, there is a white golden laced kimono and a hair piece to keep some of his hair out of his eyes.
Zanpakutō Position: His Zanpakuto is almost as big as he so it is positioned on his back, being approximately 6ft tall.
 
PostPosted: Mon Dec 13, 2010 1:04 pm



Zanpakutō

Sealed Form Appearance: That's what it looks like except there are two blades on each side. One blade looks rather dark the other rather light.
Unlike normal shinigami, he does not wield a katana or a sword of any type. He wields a large scythe. It is his Zanpakuto and was originally a large bladed katana. However, training led to the blade somehow coming out of its hilt. He hated wielding a sword because his Shikai was a large staff. He did not like the katana part so much.
So he took the blade and welded it to a scythe, which it seemed to like better because as soon as he was finished, it grew a new sheath: a large cloth that surrounds it in the same manner that Ichigo’s does. The cloth seems to be able to wrap around his arm and extend longer or shorter.

Name Shikai: Jūjigun no bikutā (十字軍のビクター, Crusader’s Victor)
Name Bankai: Ude no jūjigun no shōri (腕の十字軍の勝利, Crusader’s Victory in arm )

Element: Light and Darkness
Zanpakutō Spirit Appearance: Crusade | Zanpakutō Spirit Appearance: Victor

  • Shikai:
    • Release Command: He rips the top half of his kimono off showing the glowing tattoo’s on his arm’s that seem to be radiating rashi. The tattoo’s soon crawl down the sides of his body, and rap around his legs and arms. He then sass. “I bare the mark of the Crusade, and the mark of the victor. Awaken my Crusade’s Victor!” His zanpoktou start to change and his spirit pressure rises a little.
      • Shikai Abilities: The left side of his body his pitch black, and the right side is pure white. (On account of his tattoos which one is black and the other white, the extend until his whole body is incased in the ink making him glow a little)
        • Ability Two: Energy: Using energy attacks such as energy balls, and energy slashes, and energy burst. He also has two attacks that he uses.
          Gero Tensho: Admitting a large blast of energy from his hand (Or gun’s or sword depending on his style he is in) It travels In the form of a sound wave it is extremely power when used from the gun, but normal power when using the sword’s or his hand.
          Suco: He send’s rapid blast of energy balls from his zanpoktou, or gun or hands.
          Ability Three: He has the ability chose between his zanpoktou’s or a pair energy gun’s that look like his zanpoktou spirit’s. He decides when he enter’s Shikai, and what ever he chose’s stick with him for at least 10 post until he can switch. Then 20 post and it adds ten to each time he changes.




Obtained?: --- [All]

Bankai Release State Picture Or Description:
His right side of his body is completely white, his eye color has change it’s now pure black, he gain’s white garment’s that cover his body. A small sense of white rashi protects the right side of his body. He also has a white feathered wing. That has little metal feather tip’s. He has all the same things on the left side of his body beside’s there black, and his eye is pure white not black.
He has two staffs that look like this. He has a rest on his back that if he want’s to use just of his staff’s he can. The staff’s can break apart into little swords. The blade’s come out and are attached to a never ending chain.
He can connect them back together on the opposite one. Have black on white making his power increase slightly.
Bankai Release State Release Abilities: A pitch black barrier go’s up around him and his enemy turning every thing black besides the people fighting even though It is dark as night in there, they can still see each other. But it keeps any one from coming in, it can be broke but requires to be hit four post worth. He can chose to not activate his shield if he wishes.
Bankai Release Extended Name Command: Crusader’s Victory in arm!
“The stone’s are set, the ground will break and tears shall fall I release your from your cage to claim victory!”


  • Bankai Abilities:

    • Ability All the same stuff as his Shikai just more powerful.
    • Ability Enhanced speed: He can move faster then normal now he move’s like a blur. With out shunpo. Increases his speed by two.
    • Ability Copies: He can create black white copy’s of him self but can only make a total of five of each. His black one’s disappear after three post, and his white one’s after four. They move and attack (attacks can be felt) just like a normal shingamis, but they attack of a third seat.


Obtained?: --- [Captains and Lieutenants]
 

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 13, 2010 1:17 pm


Skills, Techniques, and Kidō

  • Skill Enhanced Intelligence
    * Even though he is not a captain he has a brilliant mind he is able to take something like a battle, he can take the battle what is happened so far make an analogy and predict his opponents next move.
  • Skill Hado: He poses a weird way of using his hado's he has mastered this way with seven hado's.
  • Skill Bakudo: He only knows three bakudo spells.


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Standard Point System
  • Zanjutsu 6 /10
  • Kidō 5 /10
  • Agility 10 /10
  • Hakuda 4 /10
  • Reiatsu 8 /10
  • Physical Strength 5 /10
    Total 38/38
 
PostPosted: Sat Dec 18, 2010 11:15 am


(Has not mastered all of them these are just the ones that is possible for him to use through his zanpoktou.)
Hado's

# 88: Hiryugekizokushintenraiho (飛竜撃賊震天雷砲, Flying Dragon-Striking Heaven-Shaking Thunder Cannon); Fires a gigantic electricity blast of spiritual energy resulting in a truly enormous explosion.

# 73: Sōren Sōkatsui (双蓮蒼火墜, Twin Lotus Blue Fire, Crash Down); Essentially a doubled version of #33, this spell fires two shots of blue fire with greater potency than the single-shot variety.

# 54: Haien (廃炎, Abolishing Flames); Fires a blast of purple spiritual energy that will incinerate a target completely when it makes contact.

# 31: Shakkahō (赤火砲, Red Fire Cannon); Fires a ball of red energy at a target.

# 11: Tsuzuri Raiden (製本電, Bound Lightning); Electric current flows through any object the user touches and is able to lead electricity, damaging any target that is in contact with the object the current runs through.

# 4: Byakurai (白雷, Pale Lightning); The user fires a concentrated, powerful lightning bolt from their finger.

# 33: Sōkatsui (蒼火墜, Blue Fire, Crash Down); Fires a burst of blue spiritual energy at a target in a similar manner to #31, but over a wider area and with more power.

Bakudo

# 81: Danku (斷空, Splitting Void); Creates an energy barrier in the form of a rectangular wall. According to Byakuya, it is capable of stopping destructive spells up to #89. This is seen also when Aizen uses it to block Tessai's Hadō #88.

# 61: Rikujōkōrō (六杖光牢, Six Rods Prison of Light); Summons six thin, wide beams of light that slam into a target's midsection, holding them in place. The target is then unable to move any part of their body including the parts that were not struck by the beams.

# 37: Tsuriboshi (吊星, Suspending Star); Creates a star-shaped cushion of Spiritual Energy, which anchors it to nearby objects with "ropes" of spirit particles. It can stop falling objects, acting like a safety net.  

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 18, 2010 11:25 am


Missa smiled as she sat down in the soft grass kneeling on her knee's, she pulled out a flute, the gleaming pink glossed over her young face, she closed her eyes and the music came naturally. Her fingers moving softly, the music being heard all over its attracted a few birds who were following. This was no mistake, it was a trap, the flute had a special ability, it attracted any near hollows. It's serenading sound, sounded to them as a more of a smell then anything. The smell of a fresh soul. She brought the flute down and packed it back into her kimono. Then it happened, large screams, and loud thuds. She smiled to her self, she slid her zanpoktou from it's sheath just as fluently and majestically as she had played the flute, a pink ribbon dropping from the end. It glistened just like the flute did. She felt the Hollow creeping up behind her, she smiled even wider. As the hollow crept up behind her attempting to pounce on her. "Sorry big boy, but I don't very much like touching slime balls." She said moving with elegance, and proper movement, she looked as if she was dancing with the Hollow. "You dance rather fallibly. No style no movement just lunges... To bad though I could of made you a wonderful dancer." She said disappearing from site. She appeared in front of the perplexed hollow. "Sorry big boy, but i have to be on my way..." She said raising her hand to it's face it stood there stunned by the movement of the young girl. "Hado number 33." She said smiling. "Soikatsui, may you leave a gentle life later one." She said as the blue fire clashed with the hollow's head, as she turned around, nothing left to see but to see it disappear into the next life. "Sleep serenely young hollow." She said sheathing hear sword as it turned into dust. She floated down Leisurely, she was in no hurry now. She had completed her mission.  
PostPosted: Sat Dec 18, 2010 12:08 pm


At the moment, I'm just going to mention the Kidō since I'm busy.


  • Hyōga Seiran is not in the Kidō System and thus not available for use.
  • Anything above #70 is for Lieutenants and Captains, of which Helix is not.
  • The level of Kidō any RPC can use is dependent on both rank and level of Kidō in the Stat System, which needs to come first.
  • Those two Skills for Hadō and Bakudō will not override Kidō Stat levels.

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 19, 2010 6:07 pm


Sorry for got to add in another part of it, had it in my out line on my computer just not on here. I added it in now.  
PostPosted: Tue Dec 21, 2010 9:50 am


  • It is spelled Zanpakutō.
  • Shikai Abilities
    Bluntly, enhanced evading skills makes absolutely no sense for a Snow-themed Zanpakutō.
  • For things like Iced Dart specifically crushing damage and speed, these things will need to be represented on the point scale. For instance, the crushing damage will have a level of Armor/Hierro it can cut through. This will become easier to figure out once you've adjusted to the Stat System.
  • Before you can be considered as a Lieutenant, Bankai abilities will have to be written out and approved.


That is all I can see, so once things like that are fixed you can find a Division and Rank and then fill out Helix's stats.

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 23, 2010 4:18 pm


I would like to point out, i did explain why his evading skills were so good.

Quote:
Shikai Abilities: His main abilities is snow control, a blizzard of snow surrounds his body.


The ability i have taken from the concept of a smoke bomb. As such a smoke bomb covers the caster in smoke or thick cloudy dusty substance allowing the user or user in some cases to escape away from danger and so on. The blizzard is used in the same manor evading is to dodge or slip away from things such as a sword or some one, the example of this ability is of his following attacks.
Quote:
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# Frozen Dream: This ability allows him to use ice type, and snow type moves. Such as making ice ball’s, and ice beams, and using the snow for quick evasion leaving only a after image.

Snow Image:
He can only use this move twice per page of posting. When a enemy go’s to strike him he uses the snow around him to create a after image and make the enemy think that he struck him but all he struck was snow.


And about the bankai thing i was wondering if i could wait and train with my captain to earn it so that way it gives me more time to think about his abilities and all that, plus gives me a good excuse for posting. I have asked the squad one captain but have not heard back on any thing in about two weeks or so but that is the squad i wish to join.  
PostPosted: Mon Dec 27, 2010 7:25 am


A blizzard surrounding his body would not increase his reaction times, so it would not allow him to move away from a sword. All smoke bombs do is obscure vision, allowing for the user to either attack from the newly created blind spot, or get the hell out of there completely.

I suppose, but you can't train for it before it's been posted and approved.

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 28, 2010 4:11 pm


You must not live in snow country, not to be mean but have you ever bin in a blizzard? I live right in the snow belt, when we have a blizzard we can not see 5 feet in front of are face xd . If you have bin in a blizzard then you know what i am talking about, you can not see any thing all you see is snow going in a vertical pattern or diagonal. It can play tricks on your mind with es, by just thinking that there is no vehicular or person in front of you, you continue on your path then the person, or vehicle stops you slam into them.
Just like my shikai, i guess i could add this in, but just like my shikai you can see me, but when i active my ability the snow blizzard around me picks up you attack me and there is nothing there i had already moved away from the attack leaving nothing behind but a slight dusting of snow. I guess you could call them shadow snow clones.  
PostPosted: Tue Dec 28, 2010 5:12 pm


I don't need to have been; I know for a fact that falling snow does not magically increase one's reaction time. If that was the case, I would be as fast as Bruce Lee while surrounded by falling snow. I understand the concept of not being to see, but what you're describing only works if Helix and the opponent have the same base reaction speed or if Helix's base reflexes are faster. If the opponent's are still better, then Helix still couldn't move away fast enough, regardless of snow, rain or hellfire. It does not make him faster; it would actually slow him down. It's like trying to say that a cat could dodge a punt from a Jake Delhomme because there's a blizzard surrounding them. If Jake knew for a complete fact where this cat- regardless of how- the cat's a** is grass.

In short; decreased visibility ≠ increased reflex speed. I should also point out that his visibility would be reduced just as much as his opponents.

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 28, 2010 8:35 pm


Jake Delhomme o.o who's that?

Your still not getting it are you. v.v. You are adding in stuff, that is not even there!!

Forget it i will change it i am getting tired of trying to explain my reasoning, it use less in a hole lot of madness to continue. Its like force feeding a diabetic a candy bar, they will eat it but go into a comma in the end.

Any ways i will change it forget the snow thing, i will use one of my previous zanpoktou abilitys from another RP.  
PostPosted: Tue Dec 28, 2010 9:33 pm


Okay, before you even look over my bankai and shikai, i know for a fact that two elements of the same area can be used, Kyorkue is the example, many people know this BUT he is a duel wielder, and his zanpoktou's are of two completely different elements! One is energy and the other wind, or as he calls them death and punishment, or something down them lines, but i know they are two different elements.  

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