I'm not really into the animu-animals stuff, but the pose is certainly better than other stuff you see I'd say. if you were going for realism, which you obviously are not, there would be a lot to critique, starting on some coloration choices, the fur, the lacking mouth.. This way, whatsoever, I have to say that the perspective on the paws looks off and that, however I put it, can't quite figure that eye out. You should experiment around a bit more with your style there, also maybe add a visible mouth? That could enhance it all. Also, the blue lines seem sort of random. The coloration could be a tad less messy as well for what you were aiming for. Keep on practicing!.
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