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PostPosted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 12:05 am


Name: Marie LaBieux (La-boo)
Nicknames: n/a
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Faction/Race: Reaper / "Voodoo Priestess" (Vodouisant Caplata)

Natural Ability: All Vodouisants can touch a person and tell what ails dem. Don't work too well ghosts or undead 'cause da things da Vodouisant'll mostly pick on up are "dead" or "rotting". Don't work through clothes neither.

Personality: Happy, friendly, self-confident, outgoing, well-meaning, maternal, not very scary

Most of da time Marie is content to take things nice 'n slow. She'll spend hours sittin' on a stoop, watchin' da creatures go by. Marie don't like to rush and she ain't one to stress. She avoids drama best she can 'cause it's no good for da heart. Simple things make her happy - you ever just lay in a hammock 'n relax? - but dat's not to say she can't have a good time. Oh no, quite da opposite; any excuse is a good excuse to party! Passed your math test? Break out da drinks!

Speakin' of school, Marie's grades are Average wit' a capital "A." She only has a care for practical subjects, dat stuff she can try her hand at. Dem abstract subjects are only good for givin' Marie headaches. She studies enough to make sure she don't fail, but dat's it. Too much school ruins da social life, ya know? Now don't go thinkin' Marie is a complete fool, 'cause she's not. She's excellent at rememberin' names and important dates, like deathdays. She can tell you all da newest gossip while whippin' you up a lil' somethin' to repel dem maggots. She can cook, she can sew, and she can braid hair scary-fast, but don't go lookin' to her for help in your History of Halloween class, 'cause it ain't somethin' Marie's gonna know.

'cause she comes from a long line of healers, Marie was raised to be nice to everyone, so long as dey ain't tryin' to curse or kill her. Doc ain't goin' have many patients if he's rude to dem, now is he? Granted, Marie ain't trainin' to be a doc, or a healer, but Marie has learned dat it's easier to make friends if you're nice. Dis means dat Marie don't act wit' any outright hate towards any critter unless dey earned it. She'll make discount/free treatments for dems in need and will lend her shoulder to dems in need of a good cry. 'course, Marie thinks good food cures all, so if ya go to her for a cry den you best be prepared for her to try 'n [force] feed ya. Jist eat da damn cupcake!

Cookin' is somethin' Marie is all over. She loves to learn new cookin' techniques and to experiment wit' new recipes. Why eat cafeteria food if ya' can whip up some good ol' home cookin'? Marie frequently uses her friends as guinea pigs for her new dishes, sometimes without tellin' dem. Dis can be bad 'cause Marie has started experimentin' wit' combinin' potions 'n food, and sometimes da results can be... unexpected. 'course wit' cookin' comes eatin', and Marie likes eatin'. She's not a skeleton, and she ain't one of dose girls tryin' to look like a skeleton. She's got curves ya' see, and while she ain't flaunting dem - not on purpose anyway - she ain't ashamed of dem neither. Is it her fault dat dem corseted tops dat provide such nice support happen to accentuate her ample bosom? Thought not.

When it come to self-confidence, Marie ain't lackin', and dat's a mighty good thing. Compared to dem skinny girls, zombies, and skeletons, Marie's surplus of weight could be da basis of teasin', but Marie won't mind. Marie figures her body is what it is; she don't go out her way to flaunt it, nor to hide it. Also, bein' a Vodouisant in Halloween World can be a mite difficult. Reapers ain't da most respected class of citizens to start, and Vodouisants are Reapers dat don't do much reapin'. Thing is, Marie is proud of bein' a Vodouisant. People so focused on reapin' 'n fightin' 'n scarin' dat dey don't learn how to fix up deir hurts, and den who dey got to go to? Dat's right. Takes some know-how to heal people right, so you can speak bad about Vodouisants all you want 'cause Marie knows better.

Now Marie ain't no shiny, perfect angel. She has a tendency to misplace stuff and is a wee bit disorganized. She can follow plans, but she's none too good at makin' dem herself. She can act right professional in a work settin' - even if she hates your rotten guts - but outside of work is a different story. Marie is not real aggressive, but she has her small ways of gettin' revenge. Her idea of revenge is to give people da cold shoulder: she'll stop talkin' to dem, stop makin' dem food, and stop invitin' dem to her parties. 'course, dems dat don't like Marie will probably find dis more a reward den a punishment.

Why are they enrolled in Amityville Academy? Marie needs to get stronger to earn da respect 'n cooperation of her familiar. Her family is also hopin' dat she'll get strong enough to create zombies. Marie don't get what she'd do wit' a zombi, but she don't want to disappoint her family.

FEAR: Dat Damn Snake [Familiar] = Once upon a time, Marie found she could summon up spirits. Bein' a lil' tyke, Marie could only summon lil' spirits - baby snakes, most times - but she still thought it plenty neat. Den one day, when Marie was a bit older and a bit stronger, her crazy funny uncle decided to help her wit' her summoning. Somethin' went a bit odd, but she managed to summon Nyoka. And Nyoka, he told her dat he was gonna stay, thank-you-very-much, and thus began da adventures o' Marie and Dat Damn Snake.

(About) Once upon a time, Nyoka was a spirit. Den Marie summoned him, somethin' went screwy, and Nyoka found hisself in a real body. He looks like a snow boa, da only hint at his former spirit-ness bein' his silver-blue eyes. He's a proud thing, and he's got a temper, so Marie's got to keep 'im happy or else he might not feel like cooperatin' next time she needs his help.

(Abilities) Barrier. Marie's not inclined towards violence, 'n Nyoka ain't inclined to endanger hisself at da word of some rookie fighter like Marie. Da compromise is goin' on the defensive, 'n wit' Nyoka's help Marie can summon a faint, ghostly barrier for protection.

Physical Description:

Eye Colour: Copper (Warm brown with a hint of red)

Hair Colour/Style: Very dark brown dreadlocks swept back, usually accessorized with colorful beads and/or feathers. Also wears a headscarf/bandana, kinda like this.

Skin Colour: Medium African. Has white face paint and a white, partial-veve on her chest, just above her heart/bosom ([x]).

Clothing Style/Colours: Marie dresses more or less how you'd expect a Voodoo Priestess to: blouses, multi-tiered skirts, headwraps/ties, and corsets. She always has some sort of belt/sash - made of cloth and/or bones and/or feathers - to which she always attaches a small red gris-gris pouch and a dried chicken foot on a string.

Extra:
  • Marie is a girl that has some meat on her bones. (Potential size examples: [x] [x])
  • Here is a good clothing/style reference.
  • Here is a good example of her face markings; the dot between her eyes and the ones between the snakes are actually sunbursts, a nod to Damhalla veves. The dress is also her favorite color combo, which she might have some accents of in her outfit, maybe the hair beads/feathers.
  • [I'm crap at imagining how details all look together, so obviously the artist can use an artistic eye/editing to make sure it actually looks good.]


~*~


The Vodouisants = Vodouisants are Voodoo practitioners. Originally, due to their weaker magic, Vodouisants focused on their healing abilities and became the Halloween World equivalents of doctors and pharmicists. Now the thinking has changed, and it's simply the norm for Vodouisants to focus on healing. Of course, there are those Vodouisants that are stronger then the rest, and the Vodouisants look to them to keep Vodouisants from becoming a laughing stock.

The Bokor/Caplata = The Bokors (male) and Caplatas (female) are those Vodouisants with stronger then average magic. Unlike the average Vodouisant, who typically have neutral or light magic, Bokors and Caplatas are more likely to have black magic, which is more offensive and destructive. Of all Vodouisants, it is only the strongest Bokors and Caplatas that can create zombies.

Emblem: Maybe something resembling her chest marking?
PostPosted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 11:06 pm


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PostPosted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 12:31 pm


How did she arrive to Halloween Town exactly? Humans cannot enter at all as their head will explode upon entrance to Halloween town. Then any creature coming from the human world is considered a "refugee" and that is mentioned as "rare".
It is also a little farfetched that she found the special tree as " The closest any human has gotten is towards one of the naturally occurring portals to Halloween in the Bermuda Triangle (but most people die miserably there anyway, as many monsters like to lurk around, where they can grab human prey and still stay close enough to the soothing aura of Halloween). "

I suggest reading this thread as it explains a lot and has useful information.

It's also been stressed how students are no supposed to remember their past if they lived-then-died in the human world. I'm not sure how it's looked upon if a refugee appears but if you do still go along with a questionable history try and explain it the best you can because it's been said "you'll have to give us a damn good reason" a few times.

There's also already a natural ability for vampires listed here by the staff as it is a subspecies-wide trait and not personal. There's more information on Vampires as well that I suggest reading there.
PostPosted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 1:04 pm


She was already a vampire when she arrived in Halloween Town. Her mysterious sire attacked her, turned her, then dropped her off in the forest or in Halloween Town (whichever would fit in the shop better). Somewhere during this process she was bonked on her head and can't remember any relevant details of her human life, just tidbits like the taste of chocolate.

" If an Undead is raised while in the Human World, the time it spends there should not be very great."
" They have several ways to reach Halloween" ... " Someone from Halloween finds them, and takes them back."

I was using the above bit of information to go with the assumption that a vampire visiting the human world could have found her, turned her, and then taken her back and dumped her somewhere so they wouldn't have to own up to their "little control slip."

... That really doesn't work? Would changing her into a Ghost that materializes in Halloween world work any better?

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 4:27 pm


Bumping this up. I switched back to a Voodoo concept.
PostPosted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 1:06 pm


Marie sounds pretty cool o: -- I love Voodoo anything.

Only a couple little things stick out at me right now:
1. You repeat yourself in her personality section when talking about how once she's offended by someone, or if a friend is offended, she won't help the offender. Obviously not a big deal, but the section would read better if the info wasn't repeated.

2. Going along with what happens when she's been offended: I take it that it's a one-time shot with her? Once someone offends her once, they're on the s**t-list? You mention that Marie doesn't act without any outright hate towards someone unless that hate is earned, so I take it that offending her gains her hate towards them? Does she take offense to anything remotely rude, or does it take something quite serious to actually hate on someone?

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:49 pm


Ah ha, I'd forgotten that I had that stuff in there twice!

*tinkers*
PostPosted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 8:41 pm


Hi there, this is the Critting Ghoul speaking. I am here to smash your dreams asunder!

No, not really. But I am here to give you crit! Enjoy!

First off, I LOOOOOOVE her accent! Accented characters for the major win! Also, yay for thick women! Does she pride herself on her size, or does she try to hide it with all her clothing? I know she's showing cleavage, but does she ever want to show off more?

Her Abilities (both Fear and Natural) seem good to me. I like how she can't properly control the spirit she summons, as well as how he seemingly has his own distinct personality. Has there ever been a time when he's gone out of his way to actually please Marie? Or has he ever hurt her before and not been sorry for it?

Moving to her personality, I like how she has a "work/non-work" attitude about people. It's refreshing to see it done without someone being two-faced or bipolar, so perhaps you should expand a bit on this subject? Has she ever had a time where she's actually done an act of revenge when the cold shoulder just wasn't enough? Also, being nice to everyone - how will she handle the downright cruelty of some of the Amityville students?

That's all I can think of for right now, I hope it helps!

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 05, 2010 12:02 pm


Hello Blasphemy! Just dropping by to return the favor of you critiquing my thread. Again, I appreciated it. 8]

So I really love her accent, and the fact that you decided to describe everything about/related to her in it. It made the overall description funner to read and let me get a better glimpse of who she was when speaking.

I like the fact that you keep her heavily rooted in her Voudouisant background, and don't just exclaim that she's a Voodoo priestess and then create a character that doesn't have any influences from said Voodoo culture. -thumbs up-

I like the description of her FEAR. It's well described and given just the right amount of limitations so it's not too powerful. I also find it amusing that Nyoka is always the animal summon and that they have this ongoing banter between the two and how it's not always a cooperative relationship.

So how does she feel about her history? Is she overtly proud and always talk about/refer back to it? Or does she brush it off as a sort of "I'm used to it, this is who I am" sort of thing? Or maybe something completely different.

I love that you made a woman of size, it's not done frequently (I myself am guilty of creating women of the hourglass and pear shape) so it's refreshing to see it used. How will she handle/what do she think of her size? Does she view it as healthy and respectable or is she ashamed and want to diet to get to that "perfect" shape?

Sorry I can't offer more in the way of critique. Your quest is pretty thought out and smooth so there's not too much I can think of to nitpick at. 8]
PostPosted: Fri Oct 08, 2010 7:26 pm


*drools over crits* o3o

For the most part Marie considers her size a non-factor. She considers her weight in much the same she does her skin color and eye color: it just is. She dresses to her taste - corsets, flowy sleeves and skirts, etc. - and is happy as long as she doesn't look completely slutty or gaudy.

Nyoka will occasionally do things to make Marie happy, but will be all nonchalant about it or deny doing it. He will also occasionally take things too far and hurt her feelings, after which he'll suddenly be much more agreeable.

A permanent cold shoulder is really about the worst thing Marie will dish out. If you're truly horrible she might ask her family to refuse you service, but that's not a garuntee because if you're dying they'll still help you. Marie is a bit of a weeny, plus she think's it's too much trouble to go to great lengths for revenge when there's better, funner things to do.

As for the cruel students, Marie will be nice to anyone until they make it clear they don't like her being nice. After that she'll basically avoid them, but her interactions with them will still be neutral to nice, depending on how they made their opinions clear.

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 18, 2010 12:48 am


Bumping this up. Added a section concerning her weight, self-confidence, and how she handles being a Vodouisant. Still need to add a section about her being non-confrontational and having trouble seeming serious/authoritative.
PostPosted: Fri Dec 10, 2010 1:05 am


Just to let you know, I am in love with this character concept. I heard her actual accent in my head, and just LOVE the way you wrote her out and everything. And that personality, so amazing! heart

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 19, 2010 10:59 pm


I'm glad you like her. <3
PostPosted: Wed Feb 23, 2011 1:31 am


Bump. Due to the updates to the Reaper class, I will be modifying Marie's FEAR ever so slightly. Nyoka will officially become Marie's familiar. :3

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