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Name: Felicity Harrow

Nicknames: Lissy, Liss, Flick

Age: 10

Birthday: 20th January

Sign: Aquarius

Blood Type: B+

Fav. Food: Anything meaty! Especially chicken!

Hated Food: She is up for trying anything and hasn't found anything she hates but of course she will favor some food over others!

School: Knightside Elementary

Hobbies:


Ballet - Lissy has done ballet since she was about four, she only does it now because her mother likes her doing it. She plans to give it up at some point but for now she doesn't get much of a choice in the matter. She does find it helps her movement, having to be so precise allows her to be able to be rather flexible which also comes in handy when avoiding someone she probably just upset.

Swimming - Lissy has been swimming for as long as she has been doing ballet. She enjoys swimming more though and has been on mini-lifeguarding courses for children her age which give insight to what the job involves. She also plans to get her swimming teaching qualification once she is old enough. She wants to act in life but swimming and teaching swimming is her back up plan! She likes to pretend that she is a fish and she loves to hold her breath underwater. Free diving is her dream though her mother would like to put her off that idea.

Being Annoying - A strange hobby yes? Well it is a hobby all the same. She loves to annoy others, in fact she enjoys it so much she can't see why other people don't. She is the annoying younger sibling who just doesn't shut up. She will find ways to annoy you whether it is just talking constantly or by playing some tricks on you. If she wants to annoy you she will find a way... some how. This started due to the fact that annoying someone gets a reaction and she found this reaction amusing when she was a toddler and it was something she just never grew out of. It has also allowed her to turn into a rather large drama queen using it to her advantage to annoy someone (especially if she wants them in trouble!)

Gemstone: Amethyst

Virtues:

Confident - Lissy oozes with confidence, she is more then happy to stand up and say what she thinks. She will more then happily stand on stage and sing or dance or act. It doesn't faze her at all anymore, it took her a while to adjust but starting at a really young age allowed her confidence to grow quickly.

Explorative/Curious - Lissy likes new things, she also likes finding new places. She is a child who will have their secret den with the secret handshake. She likes to try new things and has no problem going out and getting dirty even if she is looking for 'treasure'. She likes to know whats going on even if she doesn't understand it and if she doesn't understand she makes up her own reasoning for something.

Blunt and to the point - Lissy is honest in the sense that what she says is what she believes to be true. If she thinks something she will say it. This means if anyone wants any advice on how they are looking Lissy is a good one to go to if you want the honest truth. She won't hide what she says though, which at least makes her reliable that she won't beat around the bush if she has something to say.

Ringleader - Lissy is a ringleader, she will round up anyone. She isn't overly picky with who she becomes friends with though any 'prissy' girls won't get much of her attention. She likes to make a 'pack' of friends to go around and cause trouble together and Lissy is the ringleader. She is good at taking charge and making decisions! She will look after everyone in the group to the best of her ability and won't leave anyone behind.


Flaws:

Short Attention Span - Lissy's attention span is very short when it comes to things she isn't all that bothered/interested in. She isn't the strongest in her class academically, she will work hard but she finds it hard and tends to need extra tuition. She can't keep her mind on the task.

Insulting - Lissy's honesty isn't always a good thing, being as blunt and to the point that she is means she tends to insult people more then she would necessarily mean to. She doesn't often care if she insults others unless they are close to her in some way.

Over Exaggerates - Those two small drops of blood on the floor where someone has hurt themselves, Lissy will soon tell everyone how there was blood everywhere. A small cut would be a huge gash. She doesn't always over exaggerate, only if there is something that could sound so much better, then she will happily go over the top with it.

Explorative/Curious - Lissy is the child who will want to see and hear everything which means she is generally found up the top of the stairs listening to her parents when she is suppose to be in bed! Her curiosity is one of the biggest reasons she gets in trouble and generally when she doesn't mean to! Lissy gets told to keep her nose out of things more often then she would like!


Extra Info

Lissy is something of a ringleader. This has huge flaws but I would have too many if I posted that there too! Lissy is too nosey for her own good and being a self proclaimed leader she tends to want to know whats going on and will sometimes tell her friends how to do things believing that she does know whats best for them. She doesn't do it because she is bossy but because she does sincerely believe that she is helping them out. She will always make sure to have fun, she doesn't care in being serious she is a kid and will act like one. She loves to have a laugh and though she won't pull pranks on her close friends all the time she will of course do it every now and then! You can't be friends with Lissy and not have something odd happen to you! Her pranks are generally harmless, she doesn't like getting people in trouble or seeing people get hurt. She won't ever pull a prank if she thinks it will really upset someone and she will feel bad if it does. She does care about people but it's just not seen very often as she likes to just have fun.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Her eyes are Lilac and are quite round, mostly normal looking.

Hair: Is turquoise/blue colour - style 188 something like that.

Face: Her face is oval shaped, she has very tanned skin naturally. She doesn't have any freckles or anything, her expression is generally a mischievous one.

Fashion Style: Lissy can generally be found wearing pretty dresses, only around her friends will she be wearing her jeans and t-shirts. This is mostly again to do with her drama, she likes to seem like a nice little girl and then you get to know her.

Senshi:
She would look something like this: Link! Link! The symbol on her bow should be this though please! No soft cuddly toys either, she isn't overly into them.

She looks good so far, but I have a few problems:

1. "Sneaking Out". What if she's found? How does she hide the signs of being up late?
2. "Honesty". It's a double-edged sword; but tell me if I'm reading it right: she would never lie...Lissy over exaggerates; though. That's lying by default.
2. Over exaggerating. If the exaggeration causes concern for her she wouldn't have gotten with the truth, or if someone accuses her of lying when she exaggerates...how does Lissy deal?

Otherwise, she looks good! Could you crit Sailor Aci?

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That could work as maybe her super attack as the upgrade, will have to think on it but sounds like a good idea! Thank you <33

-pokes head in-

Actually, I kind of agree with Guine here. Remember these guys are kids!

They're from 8 or 9 to about 12 or 13. They're not fully developed and they're still learning about the world.

You have a very good base, however, I'd like to make a few suggestions.

This first one might be a bit silly. However, on the food section, kids are known to be generally picky. That said maybe the hated food should read more of 'she's willing to try anything at least once'. I'm sure there's lots of food in the world that she hasn't had a chance to taste only being ten years old. ^^ It also still sorta says what I think you're going for but leaves her room to be a kid. Also, doing this might allow for there to be a bit more coloration between this and the Up for a challenge virtue.

With her hobbies, the 'even from a young age' also sorta bothers me. Like Guine said she is young. Perhaps pick an age, like 4 maybe 5 for her to have picked these hobbies up. As they stand, and I hate to say this, but it sounds like she's been doing it since she was born. However~ another way you can get past this is 'ever since she can remember' it's vague, you don't have to pick an actual age she started and it leaves enough room to wiggle so to speak.

If she was like the normal senshi around 14 or 15 I'd say that, sure 'even from a young age' would work.

Also on the hobby note, I think there's a few too many hobbies. I understand a child has changing interests and often they don't do the same thing over and over again. I think Drama and Being Annoying could be shifted and combined with others, even into her traits to make her a stronger character. However, I'll touch on those two in just a second.

The Sneaking out hobby does seem to be a bit... extreme even for a child. They're often tried out by 9 or 10 and ready for some shut-eye. While one way around this is justifying why she has this hobby, another thing you could perhaps use is 'causing mischief'. I realize your character and sphere don't have to go quite that hand and hand, but it'd leave room for her to occasionally sneak out and maybe do some other things that she deems fun and worth her time. Also might I suggest, if you decide to take the 'causing mischief' idea, that you could combined being annoying into this. It'd make for a strong and interesting trait and sometimes being annoying can leave to mischievousness.

Hm...

Okay so you know how I mentioned Drama also didn't seem to be quite a hobby? Well, at least form how it's written, I could see it more if she was actually in a drama type class. However here's my suggestion, I noticed that you had Drama mentioned also in Over Exaggerates, what about possibly taking those two and turning it into Drama Queen. With this you can use over exaggerates and her drama to make a really strong trait.

... >> I'll have to come back to the rest in a bit heart


Also please don't think you have to take any of this, these are just suggestions. =3

However, I hope some of this helps, if you want to talk over aim or have questions just let me know. ^^ I'm always happy to help.

Okay so hanged hobbies and flaws a bit so hopefully they make a little more sense ^^