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within love

Devout Grabber

PostPosted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 11:20 pm


When I think of you
My heart used to flutter
But now all I do is mutter
I don't want to think about you

You made a promise,
That you could never keep.
I can't help but look at the past
And see the emptiness so vast
When I think of you

You claimed you would protect me
But turned around and stabbed me
I remember all the pain
When I think of you


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This is a Rondeau. It required that I rhyme twice in it. Sorry for the horrible rhyming. Just something random that came to mind.
PostPosted: Wed Aug 11, 2010 2:20 pm


Your rhyming isn't so bad. You don't force any of it, so it sounds pretty natural. Kudos.

haunting heaven

Prodigal Mage


within love

Devout Grabber

PostPosted: Wed Aug 11, 2010 10:56 pm


TheAntiBella
Your rhyming isn't so bad. You don't force any of it, so it sounds pretty natural. Kudos.


Why thank you. ^^ I'm actually pretty proud of this one.
PostPosted: Wed Aug 11, 2010 11:35 pm


within love
Why thank you. ^^ I'm actually pretty proud of this one.

You are quite welcome. ^^

haunting heaven

Prodigal Mage

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