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Summer 2010 - 10 - A Storm in the Desert

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 7:36 am


A Storm in the Desert

((This was a remix of some Legend of Zelda music. I sang my own lyrics I made for it.))


Light brings joy,
Light brings life,
Everywhere we see it go.
Light holds all the hope,
Light holds all the love in life.
And bring to me
Everything
All I ever dreamed of late.
Leave me evermore to rest.
Rain, oh, rain,
Quench my thirst.
Fire burns within my lungs.
Desert storms a-brew,
Traveling a-new again. Oh.
Rain, oh, rain,
Dust the skies
Till all fire has been quenched.
Leave me to my rest, peace now.
Till all the evil has died.
(Restful peace, restful peace)
Until all light has won the war.
(Restful peace, oh come.)
All I ever dreamed of was love.
(Rest and peace, follow me.)
Oh, rain, please cure this loneliness.
(All I ever knew)
I am so alone now, please come.
(Restful peace, cover me)
And now come to me again.
(Please come)
I knew you’d leave me so soon.
(Don’t forget, just don’t forget)
I can’t forget your words last night.
(I know)
I can’t forget, can’t forget, can’t forget, can’t forget…
Go and save the kingdom again.
Just come back and remember me.
Go and take your sword in your hand.
Just don’t forget I am here and waiting for you.
Go and save the kingdom again.
Just come back and remember me.
I need you here. Please don’t forget.
Please don’t forget that I am here and waiting for you. (Repeat as next part comes)
I am waiting for you here. Please come.
I am waiting. Please, come back.
I am here. Come.
I need you here with me.
Take me with you next time.
I need you here with me.
Take me with you next time.
I need you here with me.
Bring to me
Everything
All I ever dreamed of late.
Bring to me
Everything
All I ever dreamed of late.
Bring to me
Everything
All I ever dreamed of late.
Bring to me
Everything
All I ever dreamed of late.
I’m waiting here for you…


((Instruments: piano, strings, voice, brass, drums, etc.))
PostPosted: Thu Aug 12, 2010 10:49 am


Well done, Saph. I realized after I posted that challenge that I was basically just asking for a poem with instruments, so this was a perfect response and a clever idea!

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 12, 2010 11:56 am


Wow. I must admit to being very impressed. The notes/musicality of certain parts could certainly use some polishing up, but the writing was great. Nice Job!
PostPosted: Thu Aug 12, 2010 11:59 am


^.^ Thanks! I worked hard on it.
One hour listening to the song and writing the lyrics,
Three hours recording.
And one hour making the video in the link.

So, about five hours on that project!
I'm glad you guys liked it! xd

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