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 Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 11:56 am
Something that I can't hold, but something that brings me comfort.
It reflects everything
Yet it says nothing.
Sometimes a peaceful thing,
sometimes very violent.
Water is so very simple,
but also very complex.
No one really understands it.
Water is beautiful in its own way.
Something no one could ever capture.
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Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:29 am
short and sweet, while still making you wonder, very nice, keep it up
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Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 11:43 am
Don't...take this the wrong way, but when I read this, it seemed more like a mini-essay (minus the facts and research). You simply state things without providing any imagery or sound devices to pull the reader in.
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Posted: Fri Aug 06, 2010 5:01 pm
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