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 Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 5:52 pm
Locked away Hiding the differences Don't show the fear Have to be normal Wearing the heart on the sleeves Being hurt Shrug it off Hide it from them Don't let it take control Cry alone Don't let them know Hope and wish For the one to trust Don't show the fear Keep it leashed Keep quiet Wait for the one To set it free Wait for the one Who speaks gently Don't give in Don't be afraid Go for it Find the one And be loved in return
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Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 7:52 pm
Read this as you want, oddly enough the way I set it up made it four poems into one. =P Comments are good too ^_^
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Undesired Desire Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 10:09 am
Bring on your torture, your bullets, your pains That is certainly an interesting poem. It truly is at least two poems, the way I read it. I read it going across then down, and down then across. I like it. Way to think outside the box! And in my heart, things aren't the same.
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Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 6:15 pm
Yay, a comment. Thank you, but it was purely by accident. I didn't mean it to turn out like that. But, meh, what are you going to do about it? Fix it like a normal poem? Ha! XD
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Undesired Desire Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 6:40 pm
Bring on your torture, your bullets, your pains Or just accept it as it is because it wanted to be different and go against the crowd, but feels cornered by all the other poems because it is different, but at the same time feels shunned?
I don't know, that was just crazy rambling. And in my heart, things aren't the same.
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Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2010 6:19 pm
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Undesired Desire Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2010 7:53 pm
Bring on your torture, your bullets, your pains Yay, someone agrees with my ramblings! And in my heart, things aren't the same.
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Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2010 11:26 am
It was a little hard to read at firsst because some ways you read it don't really make sense but in the end I ended up reading three good poems. I liked how everyone could see it differently and how it was unique so good job!(Oh and if you're wonderin' I read it from the top down in colums.)
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Posted: Mon Aug 02, 2010 7:12 pm
Lol thank you. I can see that. I'm glad you liked it. I don't write poems very often and the ones that I really like I don't even have copies of because it was for a class at the time XP
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Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 1:12 pm
i like this. very good nice.
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