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Read the title (Kind of like, a Slash Paradise)

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LickMyKeyblade

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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 11:47 am

Just want to know if i did good(:

http://poofyparanormal.deviantart.com/art/SasuNaru-Together-Forever-153972973

Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 8:11 pm

Try to seperate your paragraphs more. It's easier to read that way. You have a lot of run on sentence but it's good.

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SasuNarufan4evas

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Posted: Fri May 07, 2010 4:46 pm

awwww 3nodding heart blaugh i luv itt!!!!!

Posted: Sun Jun 06, 2010 4:54 pm

aww that was adorable!
and very well written i might add

Etrikia

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