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((You need to post more than just, ROY! watch how I type, since making the first post in an rp isn’t the easiest thing to do I’ll let you slide this time. ))

Roy knew Hughes was on his way to the office before he even shouted his name. His friend’s foot steps had become strangely more recognizable and his training in the art of Xingnes fighting and the training to sharpen his senses was starting pay off he could even tell that his friend was mad before he stormed into the room and swung open the door causing it to slam loudly against the wall. “Hughes you better have a damn good reason for coming in here like that I don’t have any time for nonsense today.” Roy reached for his cane that was leaning against his desk beside him and his dark onyx eyes looked directly at Hughes his eyes though blind still seemed to convey his mood quite well and always seemed to know where to look when someone was talking to him.

(Ok. Here I go. Takes a deep breath and begins typing a masterpiece.)

To make matters worse, Mustang's Political Advisor Grumman, storms into the hot tempered room, having something to say as well. "Mustang, why are you still in your office!?! You were suppose to be in the meeting room thirty minutes ago, helping me reform our country into a democracy!" He pauses for a brief moment and notices the intense mood in the room. He notices Hughes standing to his right with his strong, caring expression and then looks towards Mustang, seeing that he is in a state of shock as well as embarassment. Putting the pieces together, good old Grumman realizes what conversation he has walked into. He chuckled and replied "I see what is going on here. Mustang, have you told my granddaughter how you feel about her?"

“What are you talking about,” Roy stood up and navigated his way over to the door. He traversed the room with out any trouble he knew where everything in the room was and even though he couldn’t see so long as no one moved the door he wouldn’t have a problem finding it. Roy shut quietly and turned back to his friend Hughes. “I’ve never jerked her around I’ve not do one single thing differently I never gave her a single reason to make her think my feelings for her have changed, I know we’ve both been busy lately and we may not have seen much of each other …Pardon that pun, but if she,” Just then the door swung open again Roy jumped, with his focus on the conversation he hadn’t sensed Grumman coming but knew who it was when Grumman entered the room shouting about how he was late for a meeting, “I’ll be their in a moment, I was just,” but before he could finish Grumman’s mood and inquiry changed as he seemed to catch wind of the topic Hughes and him had been discussing. “Look if she had a problem she would tell me and even if she didn‘t tell me I would know. Anyway I have a council meeting to talk more about our new congress and she’s coming with me so I’ll ask her if something is wrong today.” Roy then smirked as he looked over to Grumman, “Sir, Riza has always known.” Roy walked back over to his desk and leaned against dark wood frame as he set down is cane and rested his hands be hind him pressing against the surface of his desk. As he rested his right hand against the desk his finger brushed against a cold metal object. Immediately he knew what ever it was an item foreign to his desk. Turning his attention to the object he picked it up and felt the cold barrel of Riza’s pistol in his hand. His smirk was quickly replaced by a frown as his heart sank to the pit of his stomach. “What’s this doing here…” Their was only one reason why the gun would be on his desk like that but he didn’t want to except it. Roy cast an expression of disbelief as he ran his finger tips over the cold metal of the pistol.



((Kimblee type in 3rd person and patience like: Grumman stormed in to the room. &: He paused for a moment. And use quotations when your character is speaking, like this: He chuckled and replied “I see what’s going on.” Also I think Grumman should have a more important job now that I’m running the country maybe a political adviser or something.
Hughes Capitalize the word: I. Riza you also need to use “quotes” when your character is talking instead if - dashes - You will all become excellent writers XD I made the guild to improve peoples writing and rping, it is my goal. ))

((Its ok, but you forgot to capitalize the I in your sentences Hughes))

Roy Didn’t look up at his friend as he spoke to him Roy knew Hughes wanted to help but at this point Roy knew that those famous three simple words were no longer enough. “Riza is not that simple, I don’t understand….this is everything we’ve worked for and she’s just walking away.” Roy set the gun back down on the desk and sat back down at is chair and then rested his head in the palm of his hand. “I don’t understand, we risked our life’s we gave up everything we sacrificed every thing for the sake of our goal, we had an understanding. To attempt to atone for the sins we had committed against the people of our country we would devote our lives to changing the country…” Roy felt silent he thought about the gun sitting on his desk and about the fact that she would no longer be their to watch his back. “I’m not the kind of man who can burry all the horrible things I’ve done and get married and go on to live a happy little life. She knows that and I always thought she was the same…That’s why we’ve put this goal before our own happiness….I don’t understand did she change….or am I wrong about her?” Forgoing his own happiness hurt him too though he would never let that show he thought she was the same…. Perhaps she just had enough, “Why wouldn’t she talk to me she didn’t say a word….Where did she go? Do you know where she is right now?!” Roy gabbed his cane once more and stood up.“I have got to talk to her! I’ll cancel my meetings, Grumman do you know where she is!?” His mood was almost frantic at this point the needed to calm down and think things out before talking to her that was for sure but at the moment all he could think about was finding her where ever she was and demanding she tell him what the hell this was all about, and how the hell could she just up and leave with out talking to him any reason or event a good bye. And why the hell wouldn’t she talk to him if she had a problem!

((Damnit Hawkeye you know I hate the sad parts in stories XD The next rp has to be more up beat!))

(Thanks for the tips Mustang. I've gone back and edited my previous post with your suggested corrections. Hopefully this post will be an improvement. Smiles happily.)

Taken by surprise, Grumman tries to formulate a proper response to Mustang's pressing questions. After thinking for a moment, he replies "Will do sir! I'll move the meeting to next week. As for the location of my granddaughter, I haven't got the slightest idea. I guess she didn't even have the courtesy to give her own grandfather a friendly goodbye." He then realizes how frantic the blind ruler has become and tries to offer some comfort. "Mustang, don't worry. I'll organize a search party while you and Hughes go question Rebecca of Riza's whereabouts?"

Hughes was shocked! even in this situation Roy was calm... Hughes somewhat envied him." O-of course Roy! But I doubt anybody would try to stat a fight with the legendary Flame alchemist! I need a drink anyway you know?? We aint' getting any younger and all this stress is gunna make our hair grey.." Hughes straightened his jacket and lead Roy out of the office.