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[.Potemkin.]

PostPosted: Sun Apr 04, 2010 8:11 pm


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-What a beautiful day it is, don't you think?!
Where should we go?
Will you hold hands with me?
Oh my God I'm SO excited! heart

-...Aren't you a bit too excited about this?


Probably his first date isn't that fun anymore... lol
PostPosted: Sun Apr 04, 2010 11:18 pm


The colouring, background, poses... everything looks very nice. I hope I can make such beautiful art someday.

There are a few things that bother me, though. With the guy's upper arm to our right, it seems like it might not be the same length as his other upper arm, like this one might be a little bit shorter... though I'm not entirely sure, that's just a guess. With the shoulder to our left, I think it's bothering me how the shirt puffs up a bit... sorta looks like that's his shoulder, but then it seems like it wouldn't connect to his arm entirely if it's raised that high. The guy's chin looks like it might possibly be off center... For the girl, her eye to our left looks like it's closed a little. And her ear looks like it might be in an awkward place.

Zantetsken


deeds_13

PostPosted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 2:29 pm


I just love you style whee
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