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Zantetsken

PostPosted: Tue Mar 16, 2010 5:43 pm


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Made it on my DS with Colors!

Any major problems I'm not noticing? ... Or minor ones?


You can see how it was made here if you want to: http://colors.collectingsmiles.com/details/36781-Ouendan_cheergirl_by_Danno.php
PostPosted: Tue Mar 16, 2010 5:47 pm


You can do stuff like that on the DS?????????

Surely you mean the DSi, or is there a new cartridge???????


Anyways, nicely done!

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 16, 2010 8:16 pm


Colors! is actually a homebrew program and you can use them on the DS via Flash cards (the most common is the R4) due to the illegal use people gave to it (downloading DS games and put them in the flash cards) they are currently forbidden for private or public use surprised

I used to play around with colors, but I stopped because the DS screen was so tiny I couldn't detail very well the drawings or paintings sad

Great drawing btw wink
PostPosted: Tue Mar 16, 2010 10:59 pm


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You can do stuff like that on the DS?????????

Surely you mean the DSi, or is there a new cartridge???????


Anyways, nicely done!

It's as Potemkin says. I originally got the thing because Colors! looked like a must-have, and it sure is! You can find various flash cards at www.dealextreme.com - they don't cost much and the shipping is free. Huh... I guess they don't sell the things anymore. You could probably find them around on various sites or ebay or something if you wanted one.
R4 is the most popular and generally compatible with most homebrew software, though I use TTDS. There's lots of DS homebrew software (stuff average people make), quite a bit of interesting stuff. You used to be able to buy the flash cards from Deal Extreme for just around $7, and a 2 GB SD memory card for it would be like, $10...

Anyhow, sucks that Deal Extreme doesn't have them anymore. Half the reason I bought one in the first place was for roms, but I ended up barely touching roms since I liked the homebrew so much, haha. The DS should have had a decent drawing program by default... and a day planner... homebrew turns your DS into everything it should have been and more.

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 17, 2010 10:55 am


Oh! I had forgotten about that one. I have a very crappy homebrew cart, and it can't run most things very well at all. I'm gonna try to get a R4 sometime.
PostPosted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 4:17 am


Whoa.O_O
It's amazing what people could do with the things they have. o.o

Anyway, since you asked, the right arm looks off. If her right arm was supposed to be at the same height as the other, the elbow should be closer to her side, a mirror image of the left arm. If it was meant to be that far from her face, then the upper arm would be lifted higher, almost horizontal and the elbow about level with the bottom part of her...breasts...

But overall, it's one heck of a colourful piece.OoO

ZackyP


Zantetsken

PostPosted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 9:40 pm


ZackyP
Whoa.O_O
It's amazing what people could do with the things they have. o.o

Anyway, since you asked, the right arm looks off. If her right arm was supposed to be at the same height as the other, the elbow should be closer to her side, a mirror image of the left arm. If it was meant to be that far from her face, then the upper arm would be lifted higher, almost horizontal and the elbow about level with the bottom part of her...breasts...

But overall, it's one heck of a colourful piece.OoO

You mean the arm on the right, not literally her right arm (our left), right? If so, I think I see what you're saying. Having it horizontally lined up with the bottom of the breasts and raised higher would probably make it look better, in any case. I'll try to watch for that next time, thanks for mentioning it.
PostPosted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 8:00 pm


Zantetsken
ZackyP
Whoa.O_O
It's amazing what people could do with the things they have. o.o

Anyway, since you asked, the right arm looks off. If her right arm was supposed to be at the same height as the other, the elbow should be closer to her side, a mirror image of the left arm. If it was meant to be that far from her face, then the upper arm would be lifted higher, almost horizontal and the elbow about level with the bottom part of her...breasts...

But overall, it's one heck of a colourful piece.OoO

You mean the arm on the right, not literally her right arm (our left), right? If so, I think I see what you're saying. Having it horizontally lined up with the bottom of the breasts and raised higher would probably make it look better, in any case. I'll try to watch for that next time, thanks for mentioning it.


Uhh, I literally meant her right arm, which is the arm closest to the viewer/on viewer's left/with pom-pom close to the face.O_o"
I should've stated I looked at the character itself and not the viewer's perspective.OTL Sorry 'bout that, and you're welcome~

ZackyP


Zantetsken

PostPosted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:34 pm


Hmm... I'm not sure if I'm reading you loud and clear, but her right arm appears to be too long. The elbow was supposed to only reach to the thinnest part of the waist, but I completely disregarded the fact that her arm isn't perfectly in line with her side, so it doesn't make sense for it to still be in line with the waist at this angle. That arm would probably reach all the way down to her knee...

I dunno if I got your critique right, but it helped out, anyways, lol.
PostPosted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 6:45 pm


Zantetsken
Hmm... I'm not sure if I'm reading you loud and clear, but her right arm appears to be too long. The elbow was supposed to only reach to the thinnest part of the waist, but I completely disregarded the fact that her arm isn't perfectly in line with her side, so it doesn't make sense for it to still be in line with the waist at this angle. That arm would probably reach all the way down to her knee...

I dunno if I got your critique right, but it helped out, anyways, lol.


It would've been easier to point it out without words.=w="
But since it helped, let it be...
I'll be improving crits then~

ZackyP

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