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 Posted: Sat Mar 13, 2010 9:30 am
YAY, I found the girls- now we seem to be in the DR for vacation?
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Posted: Sun Mar 14, 2010 7:52 am
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Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2010 7:17 pm
The 3rd chapter was great tem : D
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Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2010 8:13 pm
Oh my, thank you! surprised
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Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2010 8:19 pm
It's good Manga I must say.....but where are the girl's at for a vacation? ninja *Wants forbidden knowledge*
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Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2010 8:32 pm
Thanks!
And about the girls...their vacation won't last long ninja
I need to re-make the first chapter completely gonk
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Posted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 9:25 am
What do you mean completely? It was good- especially you and DLS interacting.
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Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 7:53 am
Partially, the style is way off along with many missing things.
It served good for an introduction chapter, but it that script had too many flaws sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Jul 19, 2010 11:07 pm
wink we ALL need a vacation
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Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 11:42 am
whenever you update or modify it, it can only get better!
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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 5:50 pm
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