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Lance Fulgurant
Crew

PostPosted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 6:28 am


If you are creating a custom senjutsu fill out the form below

[b]RPC Name:[/b]
[b]Jutsu that the Senjutsu is based off of:[/b] (fill this out only if the senjutsu is a variation of another jutsu)
[b]Unique character ability the Senjutsu is based off of:[/b] (fill this out only if the senjutsu is based off of a unique ability your character possesses)
[b]Name of Senjutsu:[/b]
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b]
[b]Range:[/b]
[b]Description:[/b]
[b]RP Sample:[/b] (a damn good rp sample, this is a senjutsu, we need to know that you know what you're doing)


If you are creating Sage Katas fill out the form below

[b]RPC Name:[/b]
[b]RPC's Summon:[/b]
[b]Description of Katas:[/b]
 
PostPosted: Thu Mar 11, 2010 11:52 am


approved, sorry it took me a while to look at them

Lance Fulgurant
Crew


Lance Fulgurant
Crew

PostPosted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 8:09 pm


Do you want to create a custom summon? I'm a little confused by your intent as there is not yet a turtle summon for you to be the sage of.
PostPosted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 8:27 pm


You need to make the turtle summon before you even think of sage mode. By the way lance, since Reynard has quit, you want me to take over sage mode?

Gregar828
Vice Captain


Lance Fulgurant
Crew

PostPosted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 8:01 am


you and I both will take over sage mode customs
PostPosted: Tue Jul 06, 2010 8:19 pm


RPC Name: Ukiyo Sumizome
Name of Senjutsu: Armory Sage- Unlimited Blade Works
Jutsu that the Senjutsu is based off of: Personal Summon- Excalibur Link
Chakra Cost: S-Ranked Technique
Range: Varies
Description:
Not sure if you ever seen Fate Stay Night but in case you haven't my description should explain it rather well. If you have seen the series then I'm basically making that skill a Senjutsu. So what happens is a number of weapons appear around the user in the ground. The User can then take the weapons from around him or make his own weapons. Some of the weapons can have special skills but it will require more skill to make them. When the user creates a weapon he holds his hands out in the way he plans to use them, then transparent version of the way the weapon will appear forms. After the transparent version is form the weapon will solidify and become useful. Nearly any type of weapon can be made, some weapons can even be copied. The Armory Sage is a master of all weapons but the weapons he makes do take a lot of chakra to create. Regular swords that are placed around him are relatively weak and will be able to be broken by people of genin rank or higher but they are nearly unlimited in number. The Armory Sage can also randomly create kunai, arrows or throwing knives to make without losing any chakra but they are relatively weak.

The Catch! To actually call forth the Sage Mode it takes about seven posts during battle but if Ukiyo is undetected it can be done in one post. With each post, Ukiyo must say a line from this chant.

"I am the bone of my sword.
Steel is my body, and fire is my blood.
I have created over a thousand blades.
Unknown to death. Nor known to life.
Have withstood pain to create many weapons.
Yet, those hands will never hold anything.
So as I pray, 'Unlimited Blade Works'."





Here are the jutsu that go along with being the Armory Sage.

Name of Jutsu:
Sage Tech- Basic Creation
Rank of Jutsu:
D Rank
Jutsu's Element
N/A
Description
Ukiyo creates a modified melee weapon, that is without any special abilities but is slightly stronger then most weapons. If the weapon is a duo-wielded weapon like twin blades then it counts as one weapon. ((Cross-bows counts as melee weapons))

Name of Jutsu:
Sage Tech- Advanced Creation
Rank of Jutsu:
C Rank
Jutsu's Element
N/A
Description
Ukiyo creates a stronger weapons that can deal more damage and are as easily breakable. When this jutsu is activate, Ukiyo can create five melee weapons at the same time and they will be able to have these abilities:
ø Explosion on command (the weapon can explode when ever the user wishes it to.)
ø Levitation on command (the weapon can float and move freely in the air as if it was still being held by an invisible force.

Name of Jutsu:
Sage Tech- Master Creation
Rank of Jutsu:
A Rank
Jutsu's Element
N/A
Description
Ukiyo creates a even stronger weapons (nearly unbreakable unless by someone of higher rank then they are able to be broken with a strong enough jutsu) that can deal more damage and are as easily breakable. When this jutsu is activate, Ukiyo can create ten melee weapons at the same time and they will be able to have these abilities along with:
ø Cloaked on command (The weapon will become invisible to the naked eye but can still be picked up by chakra sensors and it will still cast a shadow)
ø Return on command (The created weapon can appear in the user's hand at any time.)


Name of Jutsu:
Sage Tech- Reinforcement
Rank of Jutsu:
Look at the chart
Jutsu's Element
N/A
Description
A jutsu that varies in effectiveness and strength based on what stage is used. The jutsu will reinforce what ever weapon the user is holding. The stages are made by effective use, meaning that whatever stage material is named that weapon will be able to cut through it. It doesn't require handsigns.

Stage 1: Bronze {D Rank}
The weapon is strong and durable enough to cut through most bronze material with ease. Weapons made of bronze will be broken if matched against this level.

Stage 2: Iron {C Rank}
The weapon is strong and durable enough to cut through most iron material with ease. Weapons made of iron will be broken if matched against this level.

Stage 3: Steel {B Rank}
The weapon is strong and durable enough to cut through most steel level material with ease. Weapons made of steel will be broken by the level. This level of reinforcement had a higher cutting and piercing power then the previous stages.

Stage 4: Diamond {S Rank}
The weapon is strong and durable enough to cut through most diamond level material with ease. A weapon of this level will have deadly cutting and piercing ability. Cutting through bone would be like cutting through butter. A kunai or arrow would run through and out someone's body like a bullet.

Name of Jutsu:
Sage Tech- Kunai Wave
Rank of Jutsu:
C Rank
Jutsu's Element
N/A
Description
Ukiyo can create and manipulate a wave of a hundred kunai. He can control them with his chakra and they follow the direction his hands go. He can make them travel in waves, split them up, and even make some explode. The speed of the wave is moderate. It travels just as fast as a chuunin ranked ninja.

Name of Jutsu:
Sage Tech- Great Kunai Wave
Rank of Jutsu:
B Rank
Jutsu's Element
N/A
Description
Ukiyo can create and manipulate a wave of a thousand kunai. He can control them with his chakra and they follow the direction his hands go. He can make them travel in waves, split them up, and even make some explode. The speed of the wave is accelerated. It travels just as fast as a jounin ranked ninja.

RP Sample:
The dust cloud cleared as Ukiyo and his opponent stood in the middle of a wasteland. His opponent was a member of a lost clan known as the Yamamoto. His eyes shined a bright green color that seemed to be filled with malice. Ukiyo started to back away as he considered his options. His Anigan was already active and he had tried doing just about everything he could think of. He started to breathe, slowly at first as he wondered what he could do to defeat this guy. Dammit! I guess I have no choice left... Ukiyo began to gather his chakra and he did his first two handsigns, "I am the bone of my sword." He pulled a smoke bomb out of his back pocket and thrown it at the opponent. He performed two more handsigns. "Steel is my body, and fire is my blood." Ukiyo looked up to see that his opponent was still distracted by his previous smoke bomb. He took a couple steps back and performed two more handsigns. "I have created over a thousand blades." The smoke bomb had cleared. Ukiyo, using his Anigan, transformed into a bird and flew a couple of feet away from his opponent, who didn't seem able to find him. Transforming back to his human form, he performed two more handsigns. "Unknown to death. Nor known to life" The coast was still clear so he continued and made two more handsigns. "I have withstood pain to create many weapons." Still his opponent was not in sight. He was so close he had to finish. He performed two more handsigns. "Yet, those hands will never hold anything." He seen his opponent running towards him but he still had time for two more hand signs. "So as I pray-- Unlimited Blade Works". Weapons fell from the sky around Ukiyo as his opponent continued to watch in awe. "You know you've ******** up now, right?" Ukiyo smiled in confidence as he picked up two longswords and began running towards his opponent.

Ukiyo swung the longsword on his right hand and his opponent blocked it but he was still cut slightly by the weapon before it shattered. Ukiyo swung the weapon on his left hand which delivered the same result. The Yamamoto performed some handsigns as he let loose a fireball from his mouth. Even though he moved out of the way, Ukiyo was slightly burned on his left leg. He squinted a bit as he rose. He performed five handsigns rather quickly as he looked his opponent dead in the eyes, "Sage Tech- Advanced Creation" Four spears and one katana appeared. Ukiyo used his chakra to make the spears float and he grabbed the katana out of the air. The spears flew towards the Yamamoto and exploded as they got near him. Ukiyo grabbed the katana with two hands as he closed his eyes. "Sage Tech- Reinforcement: Stage 4" The katana glowed a bright yellow color and when it returned to its normal shine, it was heavier and sharper. Ukiyo began running towards the Yamamoto. The spears had damaged him and he was already tired and weaked from their fight. His opponent also happened to be weak against taijutsu. Ukiyo slashed at his right arm, cutting it clean off. Though, Ukiyo wasn't done with his onslaught as he used his Anigan to mimic the strength of a rhinoceros beetle as he kicked his opponent down. "You're finished." Ukiyo jumped back as he looked at his fallen opponent. He performed some handsigns as he used the last of his chakra. "Sage Tech-Great Kunai Wave" All of the weapons disappeared as a barrage of a thousand kunai came flying down like black rain. The Yamamoto screamed as Kunai came down on him and exploded on impact, leaving nothing but carnage.

((yeah I could RP this skill better if I was in a match with someone...sorry if it sucks sweatdrop ))

iMistah-kun


Lance Fulgurant
Crew

PostPosted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 6:01 pm


the problem is that personal summons cannot have sage modes, I don't know if you just missed that in the personal summons rule or what, but unfortunately you cannot have sage mode techniques for a personal summon. That being said some of these jutsus might be able to be made into custom jutsus that have nothing to do with sage mode, though there are quite a few that will either need to be dropped completely or severely nerfed.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 6:07 pm


Ahh that sucks crying
can I make a custom contract instead of a personal summon then?

iMistah-kun


Lance Fulgurant
Crew

PostPosted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 6:12 pm


You can, but that doesn't necessarily mean it will be allowed to have a sage mode, we're trying to be careful with sage modes so that people don't get the idea that they can just make a custom contract in order to become a sage
PostPosted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 6:15 pm


Ahh yes I see, cause that would be exactly what I'd be doing xD
Alright well do you have any suggestions as to which I should be putting as custom jutsus and which I should weaken or just take out all together?

iMistah-kun


Lance Fulgurant
Crew

PostPosted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 6:33 pm


Quote:
Name of Jutsu:
Sage Tech- Basic Creation
Rank of Jutsu:
D Rank
Jutsu's Element
N/A
Description
Ukiyo creates a modified melee weapon, that is without any special abilities but is slightly stronger then most weapons. If the weapon is a duo-wielded weapon like twin blades then it counts as one weapon. ((Cross-bows counts as melee weapons))


this one sounds fine (though I don't know why cross bows count as melee weapons, you could simply say it allows you to create weapons), you could even make it so that you can create up to maybe 6 weapons like shurikens since they're so small

Quote:
Name of Jutsu:
Sage Tech- Advanced Creation
Rank of Jutsu:
C Rank
Jutsu's Element
N/A
Description
Ukiyo creates a stronger weapons that can deal more damage and are as easily breakable. When this jutsu is activate, Ukiyo can create five melee weapons at the same time and they will be able to have these abilities:
ø Explosion on command (the weapon can explode when ever the user wishes it to.)
ø Levitation on command (the weapon can float and move freely in the air as if it was still being held by an invisible force.


You could make it so that this simply allows for levitation of the weapons, though not the explosion thing, and they could even attack and defend, though they shouldn't be as quick or strong as if you were actually wielding them.

Quote:
Name of Jutsu:
Sage Tech- Master Creation
Rank of Jutsu:
A Rank
Jutsu's Element
N/A
Description
Ukiyo creates a even stronger weapons (nearly unbreakable unless by someone of higher rank then they are able to be broken with a strong enough jutsu) that can deal more damage and are as easily breakable. When this jutsu is activate, Ukiyo can create ten melee weapons at the same time and they will be able to have these abilities along with:
ø Cloaked on command (The weapon will become invisible to the naked eye but can still be picked up by chakra sensors and it will still cast a shadow)
ø Return on command (The created weapon can appear in the user's hand at any time.)


You could make it so that this only allows the weapon to appear immediately in your hand, and if you did that you could lower the chakra cost to B-ranked

Quote:
Name of Jutsu:
Sage Tech- Kunai Wave
Rank of Jutsu:
C Rank
Jutsu's Element
N/A
Description
Ukiyo can create and manipulate a wave of a hundred kunai. He can control them with his chakra and they follow the direction his hands go. He can make them travel in waves, split them up, and even make some explode. The speed of the wave is moderate. It travels just as fast as a chuunin ranked ninja.


I could see this maybe as a B-ranked technique if you took out the ability to make them explode, or maybe A if you really wanted to keep that, though you shouldn't be able to make maybe more than 10 explode at a time, and it should cost 1 chakra point to make them explode. It should also have a limited duration, maybe 4-5 posts

Quote:

Name of Jutsu:
Sage Tech- Great Kunai Wave
Rank of Jutsu:
B Rank
Jutsu's Element
N/A
Description
Ukiyo can create and manipulate a wave of a thousand kunai. He can control them with his chakra and they follow the direction his hands go. He can make them travel in waves, split them up, and even make some explode. The speed of the wave is accelerated. It travels just as fast as a jounin ranked ninja.


This could be S-ranked, though it would need similar parameters to the previous one, such as a limited number of exploding Kunai at a time, maybe 30 or so, and should cost 1 chakra point to set off the explosions. Again, maybe a 4-5 minute duration.

As always feel free to argue your points if you feel my rulings are unfair, and I will be more than happy to listen
PostPosted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 7:26 pm


alright great, I have no complaints at all. So my only question is, since I'm going to be following your guidelines and already did an RP sample that featured these techniques will I be required to make another one?

iMistah-kun

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