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wonderful cheshire

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 11, 2010 4:16 pm


This is a poem I wrote a few years ago. I just thought I would take advantage of the new sub and post it here.


I am with You Always:

When you gaze up at the stars,
Remember that I too have looked
At those same stars, and you will
See my eyes adoring you.

When you feel the wind caress your
Face, remember that the same wind has
Blown over mine and you will feel my
Breath upon your cheek.

When you feel the sun branding your
Body, remember that the same sun has
Heated my body and you will feel me touching you.

When you lie in bed at night illuminated by the
Light of the moon, remember that the same
Moon has shone down on me and you will
Feel the contentment of me sleeping next to you.

When you hear the thunder in the sky, remember that
I too have experienced the same resonance above me and
You will hear me calling you.

When you feel the rain descending upon your head,
Remember that the same torrent has washed over me
And you will heed the moisture of my tears longing for you.

When you smell the earth after the rain, remember that
I too have breathed in the same emanation and you will
Experience my scent.

When you are happy think of me, and remember
That I too have fantasized about you and you will
Behold my smile.

When you are afraid, remember that I too have
Tasted fear and you will feel my hand holding yours.

When you feel alone in this life, remember that
I too have felt solitude and you will relish my love.

If you would open your eyes, touch with awakened
Hands, listen more intensely, smell more keenly, and
Taste to the fullest, realizing that I too have been
Given the gift of these senses, then you will see,
Feel, hear, smell, and taste me all around you every
Minute of every day.

I am with you always.
PostPosted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 8:11 am


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PostPosted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:54 pm


'Tis lurvly 3nodding
PostPosted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:52 pm


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beautiful
was it written for a specific someone?
or just the outcome of random inspiration
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 9:15 am


It was written for my girlfriend a long time ago. Though I'm not with her anymore, it still holds a place in my heart.
PostPosted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 5:39 pm


It's very nicely written, with good imagery throughout. Lovely poetry!

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