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Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 8:52 am

Just a quick sketch that turned into a quick gray scale process while I was waiting for a reply from one of my clients surprised

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Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 6:30 pm

The nose seems pretty squished against the face. Also the mouth seems a bit... crooked to me?. Other wise I like it. Although I could see it using darker shades to emphasize the emotion in the picture.

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Posted: Tue Feb 09, 2010 12:44 pm

I agree with Butterfly. I love the detail on the eyes. =D

Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 9:12 am

I say the nose looks a little small, but other than that, it looks wonderful.

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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 11:06 am

You could probably make the mouth a little less crooked and then your picture would be pretty good.

Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 12:34 pm

It's been said, but the mouth is crooked.
Nevertheless, it is a beautiful picture, I love the eyes and the hair especially. > w <

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