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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 8:46 am
Sooo I've been told I'm a good poet but I don't agree. I'd like some feedback, yes?
A broken promise and the heart to match Lingering reminders Of a love dispatched
Frivolous moods in a practiced guise Not many discern What’s behind these eyes
With open arms and the heart to match You took this soul Despite what’s attached
Giving solace without much request Mending a heart That was once laid to rest
A love that sparked of something unsure For this broken heart You are the cure
And another >.>
The depth of my heart aches The pull from my mind The glance of my eyes Is wasted on others My heart knows only one name The name of the one set of eyes that hold my gaze longer than any other The name of the one heart that can ease my pain The name that stays in my head even when others call my own Starry nights spent filling the silence with my lonely songs Hoping that the phone will ring with your voice on the other end But only disappointment echoes my songs And the moon mocks me with its brilliant glow Showing the world my tears It’s other half letting it shine like I cannot
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Posted: Fri Jan 29, 2010 8:49 pm
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Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 11:33 am
I WILL NOT LET THIS THREAD WITHER AWAY O: Allow your sweet serenity to envelope us all. That diamond of smile that burns like a thousand suns... The love that was injected into our veins like a drug. Atop a sky scrapper your voice carried like leafs in the wind. Every breath was a serenade of majestic beauty. All was well, life flourished... Was when you lied that tarnished my existence? Or your deceit the you contagioned my will, that allowed my skin to peel as if i was made of wax? I have bled an ocean of love, and cried tears of acid. I stood strong, you incised all great passions of my life and cast them aside. You weaved my life to hatred, and sewed chaos deep within my soul. Laying on the ground before me, the land is given it's new red brilliance that has leaked from me, left for dead you smirk a smile to me as you walk away. My eyes explode, my skin melts, my bones decay, i am ashes before you. Nothing left to live for, I fade into darkness, you shut the door, farewell...
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Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 11:38 am
And here is another, Perhaps my participation will encourage everyone to start writing and posting here (: Scream as to rip the burning feelings from your throat. Scrape your hands against the rough bark of the dead trees that surround you. Bleed and bleed until the snow around you turns to a lustrous, crimson color. Smile as the darkness finally shrouds your heart. Collapse as your limbs become withered. Feel the frostbite wrap it's icy lips around your ethereal throat. Feel your breath fades as it's serrated teeth incise your porcelain flesh. Watch the fulgent shafts of light emit a searing heat. The last representation of life that filled your gaunt figure. Hear the rush of air that breaks free from your lungs. Watch the light die revealing where you lay. The final resting place of a boy. Forced to suffer for eternity in the minds of those he had once loved. Who's blood was mixed with his own. Who's screams danced in harmony with his tears. The last maniacal chuckle. Of a child bound by darkness. Tied by chains of blood and gore. Who's eyes leaked acid tears. Who's mind was obscured by despair and repulsion. Who tired to warn them, but could only suffocate on the bile that contagioned his throat. Who struggled to form words on his lips that did not speak. Close your bleeding eyes and sleep. Let your twisted dreams carry you away.. Your final breath dismissing the reality. Sweet whispers, Farewell, goodnight...
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Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 11:54 am
In the darkness we all come alive Each of us feasting on others to thrive Nothing to stop us, nothing to fight back For the strength and will power they do lack Eventually they all begin to run But to us it is merely just fun To us they are no match But when the sun starts to rise We each do dispatch The prey awakes and things it a dream Yet, this is only just a lie Things are more than what they seem
I just came up with that. What do you think? Oh, and it's about vampires for some reason.
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Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 12:12 pm
And those two poems are:
GREAT!
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Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 12:45 pm
Your Own Personal Hell In the darkness we all come alive Each of us feasting on others to thrive Nothing to stop us, nothing to fight back For the strength and will power they do lack Eventually they all begin to run But to us it is merely just fun To us they are no match But when the sun starts to rise We each do dispatch The prey awakes and things it a dream Yet, this is only just a lie Things are more than what they seem I just came up with that. What do you think? Oh, and it's about vampires for some reason. I like very much~ smile
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Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 1:00 pm
Waiting...waiting for the words to come and break him free of his solitude that bound him. Dying as his walls came crashing down before him leaving him unfulfilled and unwanted, as the light in his mind floods out leaving him in the mercy of his black euphoria that only gave him slight flashes of tranquility. Feeding himself the lies, that he needs it, and it will bring his family back that were laid to rest before him... Recalling the night that they were taken from him, he injects his addiction into his gaunt, nourished deprived figure, twisting and turning his body cried out in pain and he fell to the floor. His body now gnarled in a painful position. His flesh beings to emit a putrid scent that filled his nostrils making his eyes stream blood. Rotting to his wit's end, his skin becomes irritated and cracked before flaking off. Looking threw his eyes he would have one last glance at the world that has done him so much wrong... He slammed his hands to the ground lifting himself up as he rose to his feet. He coughed out fluids from his body, knowing his time was coming soon as he desperately made his way through his halls of his home. Each step he took came with a memory of belonging... A sense of purpose that we once knew... But that was all gone now as crimson tears again streamed from his eyes. He walked precariously, gripping the walls... Until at last he made it to the balcony of his home. "At last" he spoke his finals words while gripping the railing of the balcony looking out at the world he hated, that had stripped him of everything. His heart beating slower and slower he smiled, and watched the sunset for the last time, he breathed in his last breath... Filling his lungs with more life than he cared to. Exhaling for the last time, his heart stopped and his body fell forward casting him over the railing. In his last few seconds in life he closed his eyes and wondered... "Maybe in death I'll be given the chance I deserve. One without pain, sorrow and misery. One without hate or disgust for who you are, or what you like... Perhaps I will find peace. I like that idea..." With that final thought his body crashed to the ground, bones fractured and blood seeping out threw every crevice of his gnarled body. His soul soul emerged from the grotesque result... It's transparency faded as the sun did leaving only darkness as it searched for its utopia that promised placidity.
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Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 1:01 pm
Kagura+kyo Your Own Personal Hell In the darkness we all come alive Each of us feasting on others to thrive Nothing to stop us, nothing to fight back For the strength and will power they do lack Eventually they all begin to run But to us it is merely just fun To us they are no match But when the sun starts to rise We each do dispatch The prey awakes and things it a dream Yet, this is only just a lie Things are more than what they seem I just came up with that. What do you think? Oh, and it's about vampires for some reason. I like very much~ smile Arigatou!(thank you)
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Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 1:10 pm
Your Own Personal Hell Kagura+kyo Your Own Personal Hell In the darkness we all come alive Each of us feasting on others to thrive Nothing to stop us, nothing to fight back For the strength and will power they do lack Eventually they all begin to run But to us it is merely just fun To us they are no match But when the sun starts to rise We each do dispatch The prey awakes and things it a dream Yet, this is only just a lie Things are more than what they seem I just came up with that. What do you think? Oh, and it's about vampires for some reason. I like very much~ smile Arigatou!(thank you) I like that poem! biggrin
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Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 1:11 pm
Gah that new poem I just wrote is lacking so much structure and detail >.> I'll get to that some other time...
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Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 1:54 pm
((So I decided to be a little creative and put my poetry on the pic. lol Sorry if it's hard to read. ^^' Oh, and I'm really no poet. lol)) 
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Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 2:11 pm
((Here's another one. I decided I liked having the poem on the picture. o.o)) 
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Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 2:14 pm
This is a sonnet I wrote for my boyfriend.
Every morn I awake to find my mind filled with thoughts of you Every day I walk down a hallway and it feels empty because you're not there Every second that I spend away from you feels more like an eternity to me Every smile I recieve from you is like the first for me, I never grow tired of it. Every laugh I hear from you is like a melody that I never want to end Every moment I spend with you makes me never want to leave your side Everytime we kiss or hug I only have my mind set on one thing, you Every single tear that I've shed is starting to build up into a never ending ocean that shows just how much I love you Every sunrise I get to witness always seems to remind me of your beautiful eyes Every sunset makes me remember how sad it is that I don't get to be beside you when the day comes to an end Every touch makes my skin tingle at the wonderful sensation of how all of you is mine Every loving embrace we share makes my heart want to leap out of my chest with great delight Everytime you say that you love me makes me feel like I could die and be happy just knowing that it was you that loved me Everything you do only makes me love you more because you're perfect to me, you're amazing, and you truly inspire me
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Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 2:43 pm
Your Own Personal Hell This is a sonnet I wrote for my boyfriend. Every morn I awake to find my mind filled with thoughts of you Every day I walk down a hallway and it feels empty because you're not there Every second that I spend away from you feels more like an eternity to me Every smile I recieve from you is like the first for me, I never grow tired of it. Every laugh I hear from you is like a melody that I never want to end Every moment I spend with you makes me never want to leave your side Everytime we kiss or hug I only have my mind set on one thing, you Every single tear that I've shed is starting to build up into a never ending ocean that shows just how much I love you Every sunrise I get to witness always seems to remind me of your beautiful eyes Every sunset makes me remember how sad it is that I don't get to be beside you when the day comes to an end Every touch makes my skin tingle at the wonderful sensation of how all of you is mine Every loving embrace we share makes my heart want to leap out of my chest with great delight Everytime you say that you love me makes me feel like I could die and be happy just knowing that it was you that loved me Everything you do only makes me love you more because you're perfect to me, you're amazing, and you truly inspire meThats really nice, but its not a sonnet. Sonnets have Fourteen lines A regular rhyme scheme Metrical composition, usually iambic pentameter
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