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[.Potemkin.]

PostPosted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 11:24 pm


So well, this one special lady made an extremely generous offer for two drawings from me. One showing the sweet personality she has and beauty (though her real self is 10,000x more beautiful!) and the other was left up to me to decide the theme (but she already gave me details on what she really wants xD)

Anyways!
Here it is!

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How bad is it?
What looks weird?
I can't tell since I was working on something else and decided to do this to relax my hands (brain was about to explode gonk )
PostPosted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 11:33 pm


It's beautiful c:

Edit:
How the hair tucks in on our left suddenly is slightly weird, but that's the only thing I noticed about it.
It's still beautiful.

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 9:10 am


Looks great! Once again, your coloring is very impressive.

Her right breast is a bit too high up, either that or it needs to be defined more. The way it's currently shaded kind of flattens out her breasts in general, so add more shading and definition. Personally, I think her nose is too low for comfort, it should be a tad bit higher so that she can have a nose bridge. Even if you're not going to define the nose bridge, it's better to have that space to indicate that she has one at all.

Love the muscle definition on her neck and her right arm. heart
PostPosted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 10:33 am


She reminds me of Rukia, from the anime/manga Bleach. I like how you colored it ^^

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 11:51 am


Her eyes and eyebrows seem off to me. And I agree with what Kupocake has to say.

Also is there supposed to be this shadow of a fish-thing on her shirt?

Other then that I don't see much else.
PostPosted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 3:07 pm


broken_bleeding_angel
Her eyes and eyebrows seem off to me. And I agree with what Kupocake has to say.

Also is there supposed to be this shadow of a fish-thing on her shirt?

Other then that I don't see much else.


Not a shadow, but is part of the design ;D

[.Potemkin.]

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