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 Posted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 1:52 am
Here's the most recent image I've drawn. What can I improve on? 
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Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 8:33 pm
Not bad at all :3
I dont really think you need to improve at all, i really like your style ^^
Please comment back?
What do you think of my art?
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Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 8:41 pm
true true i do is take sum time dat all :l but is good tho :3
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 4:36 am
ahrian o.o ididn't knew we were in the same guild c:
*is hoping you still remember me. XD*
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Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 2:05 am
 Of course I remember you, Zeamay! I say you in the Exchange once, but I got shy, thinking you might not remember me. Haha! XD
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Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 2:53 pm
 I like it, just, the left arm extends in a weird way(well for me), but if that's how it's supposed to be, I like it, it was computer drawn right? Then it is awesome!!! I can barely draw on the computer anymore, ><.
IT IS AWESOME!!!
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Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 1:58 am
Actually, I drew it on paper, then uploaded it to the computer using a digicam. XD Colored it using photoshop. biggrin The left arm is that way cause he's supposed to be holding a blade. But, I got lazy to complete a full-body image. XD
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Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 10:17 am
Hmm...In my oppinion (No one elses D:< ) You could possibly maybe make the lines maybe a bit thinner around the facial touches and such, but considering the part where you didn't put much detail and everything I think it's okay so idk. o-o But the coloring is nice. :]
And also, the left arm (her left) looks kinda...blocky...like there's just a straight line. (well..no not straight but you get it right? ^ ^")
And all. o3o
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Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:28 am
ahrain cynath Here's the most recent image I've drawn. What can I improve on? your drawings are well done. I think the only thing to do now is a more diverse way of coloring. Like the way you color is nice but. its good to have other coloring styles. @XxMusic Is My TalentxX: U make ur heads a little to flat and a little tilted over a bit like out of proportion. I used to do the same before but i had a friend help me. try making the top of the head more rounder and less ovally. @qtest_lil_angel: your faces are really nice but the proportions a little awkward(sorry if it sounds rude) but im sure once you get things figured out your style will turn out nice! BTW your chibi style is awsome
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Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 4:55 am
@Xxaznsaiko and E-neko: Your pointers have been duly noted. Thanks. biggrin
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Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 7:36 pm
E-neko ahrain cynath Here's the most recent image I've drawn. What can I improve on? your drawings are well done. I think the only thing to do now is a more diverse way of coloring. Like the way you color is nice but. its good to have other coloring styles. @XxMusic Is My TalentxX: U make ur heads a little to flat and a little tilted over a bit like out of proportion. I used to do the same before but i had a friend help me. try making the top of the head more rounder and less ovally. @qtest_lil_angel: your faces are really nice but the proportions a little awkward(sorry if it sounds rude) but im sure once you get things figured out your style will turn out nice! BTW your chibi style is awsome That picture, I drew a year ago, I've improved since. Thank you for pointing it out. I see what you mean. =)
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Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 9:40 pm
Hmmmmmm... in my opinion...
... if he is wearing a chest plate, then it's looks flat to me, you might wanna shade the middle of the plate some. That's to make it look bent more. If the armor is rounded (it looks like the shading is done for round armor) then you might want to round off the corners to fit the shading.
...and if armor is under clothing, it makes an indent unless the clothing is thick.
I like your style though! You just need to tweak a few things, but overall, I really like it ^_^
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Posted: Fri Dec 11, 2009 2:59 am
@Mortis: Thanks so much for bringing the armor thing up, and advising me how to fix it! I do think it looks flat. rofl
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