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Illusion's Original Poems - My Very Own Works!

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illicit_illusions

PostPosted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 2:44 pm


*Please, for the love of god, don't steal anything. It's not THAT good. Just ask if you want to use it. Seriously!

The Beast
By: Me, Myself and I

So beautiful the words of one
One so misunderstood
A beast as seen by all
Features shrouded beneath a hood
Hidden away and all alone
Feeling more pain than anyone should
He stays this way with hope
Hope that just one person would
Would seek him out and see him
See him as only One could

Time passes on unmarked and cruel
Leaving the beast as only a fool
His hopes fading slowly away
As he waits patiently for the day
The day that One would come inside
Someone without the human pride
The pride that made him fear so much
Fearing most the human touch

The Beast is left to be forgotten
As the days pass by and leave him behind
Leave him alone in a death so cold
As cold as the heard that is left to remind
To remind the One if they might come
Of the Beast he hoped they would find
The Beast he was that longed to just
Just to be found by the One so kind...
The One with the purest of hearts
To which his own could bind

But his fear was his weakness
And through pride the Beast resigned
Only to miss the One great chance
Leaving One Angel to wait and find
That her lost lovers' heart had left her behind
 
PostPosted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 3:34 pm


This is a awesome poem!!!! ..... well done. I will be looking for to reading more of your poems.

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illicit_illusions

PostPosted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 9:14 am


=D Well, thank you! I appreciate that. ^-^ Once I get some inspiration for another I'll definitely submit the final copy here for everyone in the guild to read.
PostPosted: Sun May 08, 2011 4:29 pm


HOLY SH--!!! I see IRONY in this poem! ....I LUV IT! heart

If you're poems are being stolen then I can see why! ...*looks around before attempting to steal the poem* I shall put it on my fridge, where I'd get to devour it every day! lol I luuuuv reading poems....and eating angst.

Let me point out some rhetoric devices....repetition and irony. YESHHH!!!

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