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Undesired Desire Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 7:27 pm
Anger
I had it.
Frustration
Made me it's home.
Destruction
Embedded in my heart.
Revenge
I want it.
Who are you to tell me to walk away
Then want me back after three days?
You tell me that I don't belong
But look in the mirror, who is wrong?
You tell me these things, they're all lies.
I don't get it, it's you I despise.
Take away the pain you gave so long ago.
Give me back the love that you forgot to show.
Even though I've seen through every move you made
You know my resentment can only cascade.
You did me wrong in the same way
It's nothing new, it's every day.
Don't tell me what I want to hear
Only say what's in your fears.
I want to know there's weakness there
Because of things, you didn't care.
Don't you dare treat me with caution,
In the end, I'll only disown you; You're shunned.
Call me your best friend...
Reasons to have to defend.
I don't want to hear it.
I want you to clear it.
Be honest to me just once in your life.
I don't give a damn if she is your wife.
I don't want this hatred
but I like what is said.
The tension between us,
Diminishing all trust.
I do not mind,
Just don't leave me behind.
The silence before the storm.
Feed back is welcome, but I really don't want too much other poetry. I don't know why, but I feel that this is going to be a many page poem that will be added onto. I don't want all of your wonderful works confused in the cross fire of my heated words.
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Posted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 2:18 pm
I get the feeling that it's the 'other woman' talking to the guy. She hates him, yes? The feelings are very very strong. It's good. ^^
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Undesired Desire Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 3:10 pm
This is just what is going on right now. . . I don't know what to do with him anymore. . . He's hopeless.
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Posted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 4:15 pm
I like this one ^^
its exactly how you feel..
its the only reason why i write poetry
to say what i feel and do something with it..
You know, you dont have to rhyme..
although it might feel like a guide line
heart
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Undesired Desire Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 8:09 pm
Somewhere amongst the songs I was listening to at the time, my rhyme scheme got lost and disoriented. I don't remember what happened to it, so I had to start anew. I simply got lost singing the song! >.<
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Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 11:04 am
Bring on your torture, your bullets, your pains The clouds of smoke have cleared,
I let go of all I feared.
The hatred has seemed to pass,
Only now does sorrow last.
If you could see the damage through my eyes,
I wonder if you could despise
This war has gone for far too long,
I don't think that I am that strong.
The carnage of my hate took seed,
But now there simply isn't need.
She left you, just as I had said,
and now I can rest this, and bow my head.
The bodies lying everywhere,
A figment of my mind.
Where was this end when I cried?
I left this all behind.
You fought without me.
I walked away.
I couldn't take it
For another day.
Things happened,
Times have changed.
I've twisted this story,
It all seems deranged.
The blood that was spilled was all my own,
and nothing else, though I'm alone.
I drifted in and out of sleep,
Though these nightmares I do keep.
I hold on to those memories.
The pain helps me remember,
Remember not to forget.
Only chance to hold onto
the love that I won't get.
I don't ask too much of you,
Just let go of all this tension.
Even though it is I
Who keeps it in retention.
I will never say good bye,
Our friendship you won't let to die.
I always wanted something more,
But I don't ask it, to be sure.
I guess I'm letting go of you,
And will walk a mile in my own shoes.
And in my heart, things aren't the same.
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Undesired Desire Vice Captain
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