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 Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 12:41 am
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Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 1:28 am
She's joking, right?
... Right?
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Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 4:15 am
burning_eyes burning_eyes burning_eyes burning_eyes
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Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 5:00 am
Troll. A troll trying to copy Tara Gilesbie, just look at the XXXXX666XXXXXX
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Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 8:38 am
I had a hard time understanding most of the lines. The very few lines I read.
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Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 1:38 pm
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Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 1:50 pm
I wrote a response!
Here it is.....
Uh....Can I just say that you might wanna install spell and grammar check on your computer. You're grammar and spelling really really suck. I didn't even bother reading more than a few lines it was so bad.
If you insist on putting your stuff out on the internet and have people READ it, then have it read like an actual story not like some kind of puzzle.
And if you expect to get anywhere in you're writing career then you MUST MUST MUST stop with the text speak. It's not you're cellphone, miss. It's a computer keyboard big enough for you're fingers to reach the keys.
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Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 2:34 pm
....I seriously think I just lost a few braincells sad
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Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 3:04 pm
It's another My Immortal!
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Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 3:46 pm
Obvious troll.
I actually found it hilarious.
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Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 4:10 pm
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Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 4:23 pm
profile I used to have a crush on my cousin, I've been to a Stark Trek convention and loved it Strike that, anybody who adds stories and their authors. . . well, could go either way, but the writing still sucks.
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Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 6:52 pm
gonk Such inaccuarcy in reference to mythology... must find and kill X.X
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Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 12:38 am
At least the spelling isbetter than My Immortal, I could understand it a little better, but it's still terrible. And at least it's not as idiotic as MI, but than again, I only allowed myself to read chapter one...
I have to ask, do these people even try to pay attention at school? It's so stupid to always read these stories or even posts on Gaia that are riddled with mistakes... these are the teens who will one day be allowed to breed gonk
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