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Nevermore's Original Song Lyrics

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 2:48 pm


Feel free to comment if you want. I have a few more lyrics I'll probably have up sometime soon, or whenever they come to me really. None of them are titled yet.

I see a strong young girl
In my reflection
She's staring back at me
Needs no protection

Yet when I see her there
Standing with no one
Can't help but wonder where
Her loved ones have gone

And she tells me what her life is like
Always living on her own
Then I ask her if she ever misses home

It's just too hard for me to take
All of my life I gave to you
Just to show that I was true
Left everything I had behind
My body, heart, but not my mind
I did these things all for your sake
Now I realize my big mistake
I can't do this anymore
It's too hard for me to take
Way too hard to take

That girl has thrown away
Her independency
That time she also lost
Her individuality

Every day she tried so hard to save
What little life in her that she had left
Now I find that I just wasted all my time
On what was dead

It's just too hard for me to take
All of my life I gave to you
Just to show that I was true
Left everything I had behind
My body, heart, but not my mind
I did these things all for your sake
Now I realize my big mistake
I can't do this anymore
It's too hard for me to take
Way too hard to take

I lost all my friends
And my family
Chasing a happy end
That just couldn't be

What could have been
I'll never know
It's been left behind
Remains I'm left to show

All we had to us was dust
No feelings left, a broken trust
This can't be true
This can't be true
What do I do?

It's just too hard for me to take
All of my life I gave to you
Just to show that I was true
Left everything I had behind
My body, heart, but not my mind
I did these things all for your sake
Now I realize my big mistake
I can't do this anymore
It's too hard for me to take
Way too hard to take  
PostPosted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 2:51 pm


awesome mrgreen . Were you writing from personal experiance or just making it up?

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 2:57 pm


Thanks! I just made it up one day. Most of the time when I make up lyrics, I usually have a fictional character or story plot I base it on. In this case, it is still in the works. smile
PostPosted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 6:08 pm


I don't really like how the ending went for this one. Although it is a cute duet-style one.

One day I found a boy who somehow knew me
I'm not gonna say that I've started to fall for him
He said the both of us were meant to be
But I'm not going to admit that I'm starting to fall for him


We spent out time lying in the summer sun
I'm not ready to admit that I'm deeply in love with her
And when I look to her I know she's the one
She's unprepared to near that I want to be with her now


There's nothing to do but try
Looking at him
Finding the answer to my prayer
There is a chance I love him
What can I do for one so fair?

My heart may end up broken
But I know it's a risk to take
For the sake of our...

Have you ever been in love?
Have you ever been in love?


Took another year before my heart set
How was I gonna say that I wanted to be with him?
I am the type of girl who stays away yet
I never thought that I would end up falling in love with him.


That summer night I planned to finally say it
I only want to say that I've fallen so hard for her
Didn't expect to find that's what she wanted
My happy ending starts now I can stand there beside her


There's nothing to do but try
Staying with him
I found the answer to my prayer
I know that I still love him
How did I win a love so fair?

Our hearts won't end up broken
After searching high and low
I won't ever let you go  

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 6:16 pm


mrgreen Awesome!! Do you mind if I post it on the main forum as a Sample?
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