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My song, "Once upon a time...' (work in prgress)

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zoje972
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 1:53 pm


This is just a song I kinda cam up with today while I was at school, thinking about a boy I kinda like.

When I was small
my mommma told me a story
It told of truth and it
told of true love
It gave me hope
that someday things
would be better...

(sung quickly and very livley)
Once upon a time
Once upon a time
Once upon a tiiiiiime

Once upon a time
Once upon a time
Once upon a tiiiiiime

Once upon a time
there lived a lonely princess
who was sad all day
But then her
knight in shining armour
came took her away...

Once upon a time
Once upon a time
Once upon a tiiiiiime

Once upon a time
Once upon a time
Once upon a tiiiiiime

I didnt think
there was a thing such
as true love
until I saw your face
And felt my heart race
Things werent goin
so good for me
I realized that the story
had come to life

Once upon a time
Once upon a time
Once upon a tiiiiiime

Once upon a time
Once upon a time
Once upon a tiiiiiime

Once upon a time
there lived a lonely girl
who was sad all day
Dreamin of the brave knight
that would come
and take her away...

We've barely talked
and yet,
Cant stop thinkin bout you
When will you realize
that we were meant to be?

Once upon a time
Once upon a time
Once upon a tiiiiiime

Once upon a time
Once upon a time
Once upon a tiiiiiime

Once upon a time
there lived a lonely girl
who was sad all day
Until her brave knight
in shining armour
came to take her away...

Once upon a time
Once upon a time
Once upon a tiiiiiime

Once upon a time
Once upon a time
Once upon a tiiiiiime

Once upon a time
Everyone can
and will fall in love
Its just part of life
so dont fight it
let it choose it owns path
You might be suprised
how things turn out in the end...

(sung slower and calmer)
Once upon a time
Once upon a time
Once upon a tiiiiiime

Once upon a time
Once upon a time
Once upon a tiiiiiime...

I hope you like it. Once I learn to play it on guitar ill post a video on youtube so ppl can see what it sounds like.
PostPosted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 2:10 pm


Not bad.I remember devolping a crush.Ah good old days.

Little_Red_33


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PostPosted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 9:15 am


OMG i love ur song have u seen mine yet???
PostPosted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 1:22 pm


lol thx, abd ya I saw your song. Its great!! 3nodding
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OMG i love ur song have u seen mine yet???

zoje972
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toto45
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 1:03 pm


I truly loved that song. very well written.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 10:21 pm


Its cute, i made a couple that i play on piano. ill prolly post some lyrics

Zycope
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