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 Posted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 5:33 pm
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Posted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 6:19 pm
my bad my bad
and this?,but yes though some characters are solid i cant seem to get down solid for my main character the supporting character thats there with him is where i want him
but this is a concept(one of many paper balls in my desk),im trying to avoid a dark broody anti-hero look for anyone but villians
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z172/black507/black-1.jpg
my storys always begins with a fight between two characters and rying to get that out of the way,heres what i have so far(page wise)
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z172/black507/idllll.jpg
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z172/black507/idllll1.jpg
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Posted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 8:10 pm
ah ty ty well faces are where im weakest i believe i have been using a ruler,and please explain what ya mean by what im saying
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Posted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 8:17 pm
well the anti-hero look and personality is popular but i think it is plain and i want to avoid that for a character look,and that the paper i had the protaginist concept has been discarded i wasnt happy with how it came
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Posted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 8:30 pm
ok be back when i have more pages done.
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Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 9:21 am
*stalk your manga...*
brave lines... mrgreen
shonen art...sorry if you mind but...you're a boy? stare
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Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 12:23 pm
Your style reminds me a lot of the artist from hellsing. :/
And as I was looking through your comics it seems the bodies are way smaller than the head in all of them, along with the hands being extremely tiny, but this only happens when you show a full body picture of your characters, I noticed this in your Poison Apple series.
It just makes me really sad, since you have such good looking work that pleasing to the eye, but then the bodies end up looking completely off. :/
Your faces and the shading you do are spectacular, but I can easily see the influence of hellsing, especially the first attempt manga one.
But I'll be favoriting the site. It's very curious in my eyes.
:3
But I am curious, how do you get your lines so nice. You have such a delicate sketching style.
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Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 12:51 am
I'm really trying to tell you to change your style, it's just it needs to be even out or it looks strange, since they seem to have perfectly proportioned bodies form close up, but then they become all squished up, with large heads.
And there was nothing wrong with Hellsing. ;D
Just how busty your girls look and how the faces are shaped with that twisted look mixed it.
I think that the only reasons why the hands look small was because of the bodies proportion. I'm not saying elongate them like they do now a days, but maybe use a human model to measure off the bodies?
I can see you go for things with more of a realistic feel to it, so maybe some basic human studies would be good for when you do full bodies.
But your bust and up are simply gorgeous.
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Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 4:05 am
I am making a comic or manga as well! surprised Mine isn't that good-looking but it's something lol 
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