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PostPosted: Thu Aug 20, 2009 9:57 pm


A Long time ago, when the remaining Blair family decided to have thier first child, thier mother Helen, was cursed by a witch and told her that thier first child would die before their first breath and the second would be cursed by intolerable bad luck. Helen being horribly scared boared herself up in a dark room and refused to eat anything that may be poisones to a new born and refused to see her husband Damien. Damien was destrought and hunted down the witch and before he killed her, he asked why she has cursed his wife and doomed his children. She replyed" Your children will be the end of this world, they will take part in indestructable armys and will end the human race. They will be leaders in this attack, and they may not even know it, untill it happens.... I have forseen it and i will not let it happen...." With this last word, Damien slaughters the witch and returns to sit outside of the door of his wife's chamber. On the 6th day of October, Helen went into labor and gave birth to a set of twins. One a boy and the other a girl Within moments the little girl passed away leaving the boy to live. Helen and damien were suprised at the twins birth and thanked heavens that the witch only took one of them. They prayed that the boy, who was now named Ulric would not be cursed with intolerable luck and that he would live a peaceful life. When the boy was taken away to be cleaned the mother thought about her dead daughter and began to wish that she never gave birth in the first place. She wished that there was some way for the girl to live and prayed for an anwser, she searched and searched for an answer untill finally they found about a reserection spell. The spell takes an unborn child and fuses that childs spirit with the respectable ancestor, giving the child a whole spirit and life force. For when you just die your life force gets cut in half and with time your life force dissapated and thus you go to the afterworld. Except ghosts who have a more then half of the life force and haught the world. ( dont ask if that confuses you, im sure it does not make since to me either). When helen was ready she took her child and placed down at an alter and prayed to the ancestors to take her child and give her life. The ancestors replyed but did not in the most kindest ways, they gave her child life but the cost was her own life. When Damien came to the alter he found his wife lying there on the ground and a new born child, crying with blood and cuts all over her hands and legs. Damien cursed the ancestors for he did not care for the child and loved and wanted his wife back, he left the child there, took his wife and left the room and locked himself in his room never to come out again but to remarry to a girl named marybella. The child was left there but was found on the second day by a passer by that rented a room named Ezra. He took care of the twins Ulric and the newly named Quinn and raised them in a seprate house till they were of age to live back at thier old house on thier own. Ezra left but kept writting to quinn and kept in contact. And now we are to present day... Thier father Died about three years ago due to head trama and deep bite wounds to the neck and marybella is still living with the family locked in her room
More stuff about quinn:
Full Name: Quinn Dal Blair
Birth: October 6th but does not consiter it her birthday since she really was alive two days later, so October 8th
What is she: She is a mix of two spirits, her mothers helen and her great great great grandmother Sophia. Most of what she remembers is from sophias life , and most of her actions are sophias too. ( cant explain too much cause i might spoil the other story when its doen ill write more) Ezra is in love with her and keep incontact with her at all times.
Those bandages?: Underneath are the names of all the dead ancestors of the Blair family and has other stuff to do with it , but once again i dont want to spoil too much
Umm anything ealse? i dont know, if you have any questions please ask im sure ill tell you... ohh and i know this is all confuseing so please dont tell me it stinks....
PostPosted: Thu Aug 20, 2009 10:46 pm


The story as I see it:
A long time ago, there was a woman named Helen, who was married to a man named Damien. This couple was the remains of the once large Blair family. When they decided to have their first child, Helen, was cursed by a witch. She was told that her first child would die, and her second would have terrible luck. Terrified, Helen boarded herself up in her room, refusing to eat anything that could be poisoned or harm the child inside her. Damien was, naturally, quite distraught, and hunted down the witch who had cursed his wife. When he asked her why she had cursed Helen the witch replied that someday their children would bring about the destruction of the world, and she had to stop it any way that she knew. Damien, infuriated that the woman thought his children would be evil, killed the witch and returned to his wife. On the sixth day of October, Helen gave birth to a beautiful set of twins: a girl (Quinn) and a boy (Ulric). Years passed, and the witch’s curse seemed to have no effect on the children. In a few years, the couple had almost forgotten the strange woman who had spelled them so long ago, and they had decided to have another child. On the day of December 10th they were granted a baby girl. The children had not been allowed in the room when Helen was in labor (of course), and had wandered off to play in the woods. It wasn’t until nightfall that the couple realized they had not returned. Frantically, they set off into the woods, calling for their children. An hour later they found them. Ulric was crouching over his sister, crying, blood running from his neck. Quinn was on the forest floor, her eyes closed, a bloody slit across her neck. Helen knelt beside her children and felt for Quinn’s pulse, but found nothing. Tears choked her vision, and in her mind she remembered the witch from so long ago. Eventually Damien managed to get them all home. He called the doctor to examine Ulric, only to discover that werewolf blood had entered into his veins. The blood, said the doctor, would spread slowly, allowing the boy to grow as a human would for a certain time. Eventually, however, he would be a werewolf, and he would not grow again. Quinn was pronounced dead, but Helen refused to leave her side, sobbing uncontrollably and shaking the child, trying to get her to wake up. She refused to see the child that had so recently been born, and Damien was forced to call a nurse to take care of the baby. After days spent at Helen’s side, Damien decided that he could no longer bear to see his wife this way. He vanished into the library, returning only when he had found a spell to bring the child back to life. The spell would take the child’s spirit and fuse it with that of an ancestor. Death, after all, cuts the spirit in half, and thus when two spirits are fused together, a whole spirit is made, and new life is born (when a child is born, each parent gives it half its spirit, like most genes sort of). Helen was overjoyed to find that there was a way to bring her precious Quinn (now about four years old by the way) back to life. She took her child to the altar and prayed to the ancestors to give her life. The ancestors agreed, but every powerful magic has its price, and thus Helen lost her life to save her child’s. Upon finding his wife, Damien cursed the ancestors, and driven insane by the loss of his love, ran away from the house, for he did not want to raise the children that he blamed for her death. A few days later, a man named Ezra came to the house, and found the child, crying at the altar, starving and bleeding all over. He took her inside, only to find that there was no one there except the other two children (the maids had left after Damien). Ezra took care of them until they were the proper age to live on their own, and then left. And that, is just about the whole story about Quinn Dal Blair.

Okay so let me know if this screw everything up. Sorry, but I didn't really know the other story so I'm not sure if I got anything wrong. Feel free to correct it.

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 20, 2009 11:13 pm


I like Emily's version much better, if i had a choice i would delete mine... it compromises everything... but to future refrence once the story "A note to my dearly Beloved" is done i will re-do my story, it will make more sence and will be much better...  
PostPosted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 6:41 am


Okay then. If you say so....

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 7:13 pm


too llllllllllllloooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnggggggggggggggggggggggggg
PostPosted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 7:48 pm


I told her to read it but she wouldn't cuz it was a lot of writing. Lazy pree....(I decided to nickname her. 2 syllables is too much for me to handle)

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 7:58 pm


Hey, i wanted to delete the first one but i know i should not...
PostPosted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 8:01 pm


never! you can't delete it. it's the whole basis of the second one! and the extra information about you is still accurate.

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 8:05 pm


I just wish to have it in all your perfect words and not my horrible english, you explained it sooo much better... and made it better...  
PostPosted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 5:26 am


sorry but i did not read the 2ed one becouse i read the first one and the 2ed one is too similar to read it right in a row... i will read it later...

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 6:00 am


read it, and i like it....maybe a little better then the first......
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